安徽省2024八年级英语下册Unit2I'llhelptocleanupthecityparks单元主题写作课件新版人教新目标版.pptx

Unit2Illhelptocleanupthecityparks单元主题写作单元主题写作一、话题分析本单元以“志愿服务与慈善（Volunteering and charity）”为话题，讲述为别人提供帮助和参加公益活动的过程二、写作方法“1 n”法介绍活动首先，确定1个话题然后，围绕这个话题，介绍或描述n个活动最后，总结活动内容，描述活动感受三、素材积累（一）描述志愿者活动类作文常用词汇：volunteerkindnessfeelingraise moneygive awaycheer upset uphelp outcare forthe old peoples homedisabled people（二）描述志愿者活动类作文常用句型：开头句1.We all know that everyone needs help.So help is necessary to every one of us.2.I want to be a volunteer to help people in need.中间句1.I often volunteer to help clean up the city parks to keep them clean.2.I either help old people to cross the road or carry heavy things for them.结尾句1.I think if people help each other，our world will be a big family full of love.2.I think being a volunteer is really great and Id like to help more people.句子升格（状语从句）I usually help old people carry heavy things.I usually help old people carry heavy things while walking together with them.四、写作任务助人为乐是中华民族的美德，作为中学生我们应该乐于助人。

请以“Helping Others Makes Me Happy”为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，与我们分享一下你做好人好事的感受写作模板】【高分作文】HelpingOthersMakesMeHappy We all know that everyone needs help.So help isnecessarytoeveryoneofus.Asforme，Ioftenhelptocleanup the classroom to keep it clean.When I sit in the tidyclassroom，I feel comfortable.In my neighborhood，Iusually help old people carry heavy things while walkingtogetherwiththem.Ireallyfeelhappywhentheysaythankstome.We all know that everyone needs help.So help isnecessarytoeveryoneofus.Asforme，Ioftenhelptocleanup the classroom to keep it clean.When I sit in the tidyclassroom，I feel comfortable.In my neighborhood，Iusually help old people carry heavy things while walkingtogetherwiththem.Ireallyfeelhappywhentheysaythankstome.Iwanttodomoreforpeoplearound.Ithinkifpeoplehelpeachother，ourworldwillbeabigfamilyfulloflove.Iwanttodomoreforpeoplearound.Ithinkifpeoplehelpeachother，ourworldwillbeabigfamilyfulloflove.名师点评：本文运用了“1n”法：首先，开门见山，确定主题“So help is necessary.”；围绕这一主题，分别介绍了n个活动事例，如在学校里、在街区里；最后，回归主题，并写出感受。

添彩点：恰当运用本单元所学的动词不定式结构以及重点短语最后一段的最后一句话为文章增色不少。