高考英语书面表达读后续写课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项 (1).pptx

请输入您的标题,（,人与动物,类）,雪中救马,目 录,故事线,01.,范文；,下水作文,02.,类似话题对比,（人与动物类）,03.,语言表述积累,04.,01.,故事线,Ben,raced,out,of,school.Christmas,holidays!,When he got home,he went to check on his pony,Scout.He slipped him,a,candy,and Scout,nuzzled(用口鼻轻擦)his shoulder.Ben started toward the house and found his older,brother Jack,starting,the,snowmobile(雪地机动车)to deliver gas to Uncle Mike.Ben jumped on the back and joined him.,They,set,off,slowly.The snow,was fresh and deep on the remote mountain path.When they arived,Jack went,over,with,the,gas,can,.,Ben,looked,up,the,mountain and saw something moving.He got binoculars(望远镜)and saw,two,animals.,Could it,be a,horse?,Jack climbed back on the snowmobile and asked Ben to leave.When Ben to,l,d Jack he saw horses up,o,n the snowy,trees,Jack didn,t believe it,.,Ben looked back up the mountain,but he couldnt see anything.,At dinner Ben told his father he saw,two horses up on the mountain today.If they are horses,they must be trapped by all this snow.said his dad.“If,theyre trapped,we have to do something,said Ben,his voice rising.,His dad looked at Jack.“Well,in the morning go and take a look.Take the gun and some hay(干草).If they look as if,they can survive,give them the,hay,.,If,not.,.”,Jack looked serious,and slowly nodded.Ben knew what the gu,n,was for,and his chest went cold.,In,the,moning,they,set,off,in,the,cold,snow,.,When they got to the place where Ben had seen the horses,they stopped,and,looked up using binoculars.No horses.They waited for a few minutes.,I,see,them.,Theyre horses.Lets take the snowmobile up there.,Ben suddenly exclaimed.They drove the snowmobile in the deep snow,and finally reached the place.“Oh no!said Ben.“Theyre starving!One of,the horses had lost,a lot of,hair,and their tails were almost gone.Their eyes were lifeless and tired.,Jack walked around the horses.,The two brothers went from door to door asking everyone to come and help,.,人与自然：人与动物类,第三人称视角,主题,视角,梗概,讲述了主人公本与哥哥杰克在雪地开车时，本偶然看见了两匹山上受困的马，本回家向父亲说了这事。

父亲让两兄弟第二天再开车去看马的情况，带上干草与枪，交代说马的情况不好，就使用枪本非常同情这两匹马，他会怎么做呢？,Christmas,holiday,stasis,Ben joined his,brothers trip,and by chance,he spotted the horses,trigger,They spotted,the trapped,horses again,climax,The two brothers went,from door to door asking,everyone to come and help.,revesal,mans effort,to save animal,resulotion,故事线,Christmas,holiday,excited,Ben joined his,brothers trip,and by chance,he spotted the horses,worried,They spotted,the trapped,horses again,thrilled&concerned,The two brothers went,from door to door asking,everyone to come and help.,hopeful,mans effort,to save animal,at peace,情感线,Ben raced out of school.Christmas holidays!When he got home,he went to check on his pony,Scout.He slipped him a candy and Scout nuzzled(用口鼻轻擦)his shoulder.Ben started toward the house and found his older brother Jack starting the snowmobile(雪地机动车)to deliver gas to Uncle Mike.Ben jumped on the back and joined him.,They set off slowly.The snow was fresh and deep on the remote mountain path.When they arived,Jack went over with the gas can.Ben looked up the mountain and saw something moving.He got binoculars(望远镜)and saw two animals.Could it be a horse?Jack climbed back on the snowmobile and asked Ben to leave.When Ben told Jack he saw horses upon the snowy trees,Jack didnt believe it.Ben looked back up the mountain,but he couldnt see anything.,At dinner Ben told his father he saw two horses up on the mountain today.If they are horses,they must be trapped by all this snow.said his dad.“If theyre trapped,we have to do something,said Ben,his voice rising.,His dad looked at Jack.“Well,in the morning go and take a look.,Take the gun and some hay(干草).If they look as if they can survive,give them the hay.If not.”Jack looked serious,and slowly nodded.,Ben knew what the gun was for,and his chest went cold.,In the moning they set off in the cold snow.When they got to the place where Ben had seen the horses,they stopped and looked up using binoculars.No horses.They waited for a few minutes.,I see them.Theyre horses.Lets take the snowmobile up there.Ben suddenly exclaimed.They drove the snowmobile in the deep snow and finally reached the place.“Oh no!said Ben.“Theyre starving!One of the horses had lost a lot of hair,and their tails were almost gone.Their eyes were lifeless and tired.,Jack walked around the horses.,The two brothers went from door to door asking everyone to come and help.,What was Jacks reaction towards the sick horses?What did Ben say to him?,伏笔点与首句解读,伏笔点,Jack must change his mind.What was the fate of these two horses?,02.,范文、下水作文,Jack walked around the horses.,“Well,”said Jack,sighing,picking up the gun.I guess I better use this.”,No!We should at least try!”pleaded Ben,stroking the horses gently.Jack walked around the horses again.He patted one of them on the neck.It made a sad,small groaning sound,Maybe youre right.He sure didnt want to have to shoot these horses.Ben quickly got the hay and spread it around in piles.The horses ate hungrily.With one more pat to each hors。