Unit 4 My friends作文训练2024-2025学年冀教版英语七年级下册.docx
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写作素养进阶【主题分析】本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“社会服务于人际沟通”，涉及子主题“良好的人际关系与人际交往”素材积累】[开头句]1. 很高兴在这里介绍珍妮和我的友谊I'm glad to be here to _____ ______ ___________ between Jenny and me.2.友谊对每个人都很重要Friendship____ _____ _______everyone.[中间句]1. 他的话让我有种深深的羞耻感Her words _____ _____ _____a deep sense of2.在他的帮助下，我的数学取得了很大的进步With her help, I _____ ______ _______ in maths. [结尾句]珍妮让我认识到好朋友应当以正确的方式互相帮助Jenny made me realize that good friends should _____ _____ _____ in the right way.答案：[开头句]1. introduce the friendship 2.is important to[中间句]1.made me feel2.made great progress[结尾句]help each other[名言警句]1.A friend indeed is a friend in need.患难见真情。
2.A life without a friend is a life without a sun.人生没有了朋友就像生活失去了阳光佳作赏析】假如你是李华，在7月30日“国际友谊日”来临之际，你们学校围绕“朋友和友谊”开展英语征文比赛请你写一篇英语征文，介绍你最好的朋友Jenny以及你们之间的友谊的故事要点如下：1．Jenny的外貌、性格和特长；2．你与Jenny的友谊故事；3．你认为朋友应该具备的品质注意：1．词数80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．文中不能出现真实姓名以及学校名称Dear teachers and friends，I'm Li Hua. I'm glad to be here to introduce the friendship between Jenny and me.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you.审题谋篇(1) 时态：一般现在时(2)人称：第一人称开篇点题I'm Li Hua. I'm glad to be here to introduce the friendship.......... 具体介绍好朋友的外貌性格和友谊故事Friendship is important......Jenny is my best friend. She is......One day.......From then on升华主题Jenny made me realize that.......(3)模板 妙笔成篇Dear teachers and friends，I'm Li Hua. I'm glad to be here to introduce the friendship between Jenny and me.Friendship is important to everyone. 【强化主题】Jenny is my best friend. She is tall. She is very kind and helpful.At school, she is really good at all subjects. One day I wanted to copy her maths homework, but to my surprise, she didn't agree. She said, “It's wrong to copy others' homework. If you have difficulties, I can help you.” 【通过具体事例介绍朋友是如何改变自己的】Her words made me feel a deep sense of shame(羞耻感). From then on, I tried my best to study maths, and she helped me every day. With her help, I made great progress in maths. Jenny made me realize that good friends should help each other in the right way.【宾语从句结尾升华主题】Thank you.【实战演练】友谊，是我们一生中最美好的“遇见”。
某学校英语校刊正在举办以“Meeting the Friendship”为题的英语征文比赛，请你根据下面的提示写一篇文章参赛提示：(1)When and where you met for the first time?(2)What happened when you met?(3)How you felt at that time?要求：（1）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；（2）80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数Meeting the Friendship As a famous saying goes, "A life without a friend is a life without a sun." 例文：Meeting the FriendshipAs a famous saying goes, "A life without a friend is a life without a sun."Everyone has his own best friend, so do I. My best friend is Anna. She has a round face with big eyes. I met her on the first day when we came to our school. I didn't know anyone in my class, so I sat on my seat in the classroom quietly. Just then, a girl came to me and sat beside me. She started the conversation with a "Hi" and a big smile. Her warm voice and smile made me relaxed at once. At that moment, our friendship started. We were close and helped each other. We shared our stories and happiness.In these two years, we often study, go to school and finish school together. I am very happy to meet her. We have created a lot of beautiful memories that belong to us. T hope we can be best friends all the time.学科网（北京）股份有限公司。
