2020高考英语写作【建议信】.docx

1.2.3.1.2.应用文——书信——建议信一、注意事项写给个人就某人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；写给组织就改进其服务提出建议或忠告内容要求建议信要写明写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理， 语气一定要礼貌当先因此建议信要写得简明扼要，有条理、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力二、写作步骤：写给组织：1) 首段：表明写信意图陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气2) 主体：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议 或忠告3) 结尾：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受写给个人：1) 首段：写信目的2) 正文：建议的内容及理由3) 末尾：表达愿望三、参考词汇1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10.11.12.13.14.15.16.17.18.19.20.21.22.23.建议做某事推荐建议做某事…… 建议某人做某事…… n. 建议有益的如何做某事的建议 明智的行得通重要关于当说起……不妨，倒不如零花钱和某人进行坦诚的交流 如果我是你，我就会…… 帮助某人做某事 过低碳生活收到某人的来信 融入，适应考虑我的建议得到你的认同释放某人的压力suggest doingrecommendadvise doing sth.advise sb to do sthSuggestionbeneficial /of benefitadvice /tips on how to do sth advisablemake sensematter，countwith regard to /as for /concerningwhen it comes to ......might as wellpocket moneyhave a heart-to-heart talk with sbIf I were you, I would…help sb. with sht.live a low-carbon lifehear fromfit intake my suggestions into consideration meet with your approvalrelive one’s stress第 1 页，共 4页应用文——书信——建议信衔接词：Firstly 首先To begin/start with 首先I'm not going. To begin with I haven't a ticket, and secondly I don't like the play.我不去。

一来我没票, 二来我不喜欢这出戏其次 secondly此外，另外 what’s more，besides，additionally，in additionAs an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. What’s More/Besides，Additionally/In Addition，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Finally 最后Last but not least 最后但同样重要的一点是Last but not least, you can plant a tree, because trees absorb the carbon dioxide in the air to produce oxygen.最后但并非不重要，你可以种一棵树，因为树吸收空气中二氧化碳产生氧气四、可用套语A．开头表达理解或关切1. 得知你交友遇到困难，我很难过至 I am sorry to know that you are having trouble making 于友谊以下建议可能对你有帮助。

friends. As for friendship the following suggestionsmight be helpful to you.2. 你向我询问关于英语学习的建议以 You have asked me for my advice with regard to English 下建议可能对你有所帮助 study and the following suggestions might be helpful toyou.3. 听说你很难适应新学校，我很难过 I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in 这样的问题很正常或许以下建议有 your new school. Such problems are quite normal.所帮助Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.4. 很高兴收到你的邮件我写信给你提 I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. I'm writing to 一些如何在高中学好英语的建议。

give you some advice on how to learn English well inhigh school.5. 我写信与你分享一些有关如何与新人 I am writing to share with you some advice on how to get相处的建议along with new people.6. 我们如何解决有关网上交友所的问题 It remains a question how we can solve the problems依然是个疑问concerning making friends on line.7. 他建议过低碳生活，这意味着在我们 He suggests living a low-carbon life, which means using 日常生活中用较少的能源以便于我们 less energy in our daily life so that we can help reduce 帮助减少空气中的二氧化碳 carbon dioxide in the air.8. 另外，我建议你在你业余时间多锻炼 In addition, I advise you to do more exercise in your spare 来释放压力，比如踢足球，打篮球或 time to relieve your stress, such as playing football, 慢跑因为体育也将有助于你的睡眠。

basketball or jogging because sports will also help yousleep better at night.B. 主体提出具体建议（body）9. 做一份兼职或许有意义 It might help /make sense to take a part-time job.10. 谈及这种情况，我想提出如下建议 When it comes to such a situation, I would like tomake the following suggestions.11. 如果我是你，我会找个人来帮助我提高 If I were you, I would find someone to help me with my第 2 页，共 4页语法应用文——书信——建议信grammar.12. 为何不和父母进行一次坦诚的谈话 Why not have a heart-to-heart talk(坦诚的) with yourparents?13. 你不妨这样利用你的零花钱You might as well (你不妨) use your pocket money in this way.14. 在互联网上找个笔友用英语聊天会是 it might be a good idea to find a pen pal and chat in个不错的主意。

15. 如果你能戒烟，则是非常明智的 C. 结尾提出希望对个人：16. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的 17. 请认真考虑我的建议English on the Internet.It would be wise /advisable to quit smoking.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious consideration.Please take good consideration of my advice.18. 我真诚地希望我的建议将对你有帮助如果 I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for 还有什么事情我能帮忙的，请尽管告诉我 you. If there is more I can do to help, please let meknow.对组织：19. 希望这些建议对你有用 Hopefully, you will find these proposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful/of use.20. 如果你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。

I would appreciate it very much if you could take mysuggestions into consideration/account.21. 我真的希望我的建议能够得到你的认 I do hope my suggestions will meet with your approval. 同22. 如能认真对待我的建议，将不胜感激 I would be grateful if you could take my adviceseriously.【2009 陕西卷】假定你是李华在一个英文网络论坛上, 你看到一个名叫 Grownup 的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮 助请根据帖子内容、写作要点和要求回帖H i everyone,I ’m 17 years old and I am going to university this autumn. But my mom continues to treat me as a seven-year-old.What should I do?要求：(1) 短文须写在答题卡的指定区域2) 短文词数不少于 80(不含已写好的部分)。

3) 内容充实, 结构完整, 语意连贯4) 书写须清晰、工整审题】在写作中应该注意如下几点：1. 文体： 建议信（电子邮件）2. 主体时态： 一般现在时3. 主体人称： 第二人称4. 内容要点： ① 问题分析；②建议一；③建议二；④我的愿望第 3 页，共 4页5. 段落安排。