简单句优化技巧（一）.ppt

 Welcome to our school! Let me briefly introduce our school to you. Our school, No. 1 High School of Liuyang, is located on the bank of the famous Liuyang River, with an area of 260 mu. Going through the school gate, you will catch sight of the Confucius Temple, which symbolizes the long history of our school. When you enter the teaching area, a well-equipped playground spreads before you. In front of the playgroundstand three main buildings, one for each grade. Walk straight along the main road and you will find this science building with so many students and teachers attending our English class. Our school is considered to be beautiful and peaceful with tall trees and various flowers. You will definitely feel amazed to see a fantastic campus like this. What a nice place to study in! I hope all of you have a good time in my school.优优化化简简单单句句转换句型模式转换句型模式选用语法结构选用语法结构 添加修饰成分添加修饰成分 使用高级词汇使用高级词汇 1. 动词的形象化动词的形象化 Thank you for spending the time with me.2. 词组代替单词词组代替单词 Suddenly I had a good idea.3. “洋味洋味”单词单词 Let’s go somewhere other than your favorite place or mine 使用高级词汇使用高级词汇sharing came up with a good idea. fave 添加修饰成分添加修饰成分1.形容词和副词形容词和副词 (2012 湖北湖北) “Perhaps we need to send for Dr, Smith to see what we can do about it,” Father suggested tentatively to his neighbor who had come to discuss the problem.tentatively2.名词短语，介词短语名词短语，介词短语The boy ran away.The naughty boy, my cousin, ran away.The naughty boy ran away withoutturning off the water.1.with复合结构复合结构 The teacher took a book and cameinto the classroom. The teacher came in with a book in his hand. 2. 分词短语分词短语 (2012 全国卷全国卷) The party will be held in the garden, if the weather permits. 选用语法结构选用语法结构weather permitting.1. 强调句型强调句型 2. 倒装句型倒装句型 转换句型模式转换句型模式It is in this way that we usually exchange ideas.Only in this way can we improve oral English greatly.3. 感叹句感叹句 4. 其他句式其他句式 What a gelivable way!The more we practise, the more confident we feel.Practice more and you will feel more confident.The way is gelivable.gelivableWhen we practise, we feelmore and more confident. Nowadays, many students find it hard to get a high score in writing. With a large vocabulary and expressions in their mind, they are still puzzled about how to use them successfully. The main reason probably lies in lack of reading. Reading texts and newspapers is really a must for language study. Besides, you are supposed to make it a rule to exchange ideas with your classmates. Only in this way can you improve yourself rapidly. What’s more, doing exercise is definitively necessary. The more you practice, the more confident you will feel. To beautify simple sentences, the following ways, I think, will be of great help. First of all, using advanced words keeps you updated. Second, use some proper modifiers and you will enjoy the beauty of a sentence. Third, choosing grammatical structures, you can express yourselves freely. More importantly, transforming sentence patterns may bring you into a colorful world full of magic sentences.  In a word, we, senior three students, will make great progress through persevering work.Thanks a lot!。