读后续写（AMother‘sDaySurprise）学案- 高三英语二轮复习.docx

Continuation Writing：A Mother’s Day Surprise——by Xie DongmeiStep 1:Leading in（2m’）Think about the following questions.1) Have you ever given a surprise to your mother on Mother’s Day? 2) What presents do you often prepare for your mother? Step 2 Reading for the storylineRead the following passage A Mother’s Day Surprise and find out the five Ws in the passage and grasp the positive theme of the story.（5m’）A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast(法式吐司) and chicken porridge(鸡肉粥). They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner(炉灶) to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire, so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid(盖子) starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over(煮沸溢出)and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.when:_________________________ where:_____________________________who:__________________________why(事件起因)______________________________________________________________what(事件经过)开端：________________________________________________________发展(矛盾冲突)：____________________________________________________________the setting(用形容词描述): theme：Step 3: Predict the plot(5m’)Read the first sentences of the two paragraphs and predict the plot. (细读首句，构思框架)Paragraph 1：As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Paragraph 2：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Tip 1:两段首句定一框从前文的故事情节和两段首句我们可以在第一段中描述什么？__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Tip 2:二框二首正能量由二段首句和正能量结尾以及父母子女间温情的主题可知，第二段可以描写什么？__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step 4: Design the plot根据问题设定具体情节(5m’)1.Groupwork:Discuss and make up the following story in groups according to the questions.(2m’)小组讨论接下来的故事情节Paragraph 1：As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Q1. What did father see and what would their father react(回应)? Q2. Would their father help them out?Q3. What would he do to help the twins?Q4. What was the result?Paragraph 2：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Q1. What would the twins do and say to their mother?Q2. How did the mother feel and react after hearing her children’s blessing(祝福)?Q3. How did all of them feel at last?Q4. What did they understand and realize from this incident?2.Presentation:Share your story with us小组代表分享(3m’)Step 5: Writing and checking(15m’)1.Finish the story and check your writing. (10m’)Related words and expressions.（参考词汇）1.凌乱的 messy 2.提出帮助 offer to help 3.激动excited/thrilled 4.娴熟地skillfully 5.吐司toast 6.鸡蛋三明治egg sandwiches 7.粥porridge8.溜，偷偷地走 sneak 9.早餐的托盘breakfast tray 10.卡片card 11.亲吻她的孩子们 kiss her children 12.一束花 a bunch of flower13.紧紧拥抱 hug tightly 14.hold sb. in her arms拥抱某人15.开心的delighted/joyful 16.表扬 praise 17.feign/feɪn/ astonishment假装激动18. bite into咬 19.品尝taste/have a taste of20.wink at sb.眨眼示意 21.美味的 delicious/tasty表吃惊：She felt surprised. Her eyes widened in surprise.她惊讶地睁大了眼睛。

表高兴快乐： She felt extremely happy. Her eyes danced with joy and happiness.她的眼里充满了喜悦和幸福The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光表感激感动：She was deeply touched/moved.她被深深的感动了She was so moved that tears streamed down her cheek.她感动得眼泪顺。