高考英语备考：用较高级词汇写较复杂句子.docx

高考英语备考：用较高级词汇，写较复杂句子高考英语书面表达评分标准第四档（16-20分）和第五档（21-25分）明确指出这两个 档次作文的语言要有“较复杂结构或较高级词汇”那么，我们在写作中，如何做到有“较复杂结构或较高级词汇”呢？一、用较高级词汇英文中高级的词汇就如同汉语中华丽的辞藻用上符合语境需求而又文雅生动的词语, 可以展示考生丰富的词汇积累，同时也体现了作者用心的语言表达1. 用后学的词代替先学的词一般说来，从小学到高中，越是后面学的词越是显得高级，用高中学过的词比用初中 学过的词高级，用高三学的词比用高一学的词高级，因此，我们在表达同一意思时，尽可 能选后面学的词如：[例 1] I am writing to apply for the job as an assistant.句中的名词job （职业、工作）可以替换为：occupationo类似的替换有很多，如： disadvantage—>drawback （缺点），ability—^capability （能力），way—>approach （方法）， happiness—>delight （快乐）等[例 2]Computers become more and more important nowadays.句中的形容词important C&要的）可以替换为:significanto类似的替换有很多,如： difficult->tough （困难的）,proper一appropriate （合适的）,hard-working—>diligent （勤 奋的），brave—courageous （勇敢的）,sure—>convinced （确信的）等。

另外,表示“越 来越重要”中的“越来越”，用increasingly较more and more显得更高级[例 3]The village looks very pretty.句中的副词very （非常地）可以替换为:awfully类似的替换有很多，如:quickly一swiftly （快速地）,greatly一enormously （巨大地）,about—approximately （大约）等[例 4]We are sure to finish the task today.句中的动词finish （完成）可以替换为accomplish类似的替换有很多，如： talk->communicate （谈话）,help—assist （帮助）等另外，表示“一定做某事”的 be sure to do sth 换用 be bound to do sth 会更为高级2. 用短语代替单词英语中有很多地道的动词短语和介词短语等，都非常好用，掌握各种各样的短语，并 出其不意地在写作中替代平淡的单词，就可以让句子“出彩”起来例如：[例 1]You'd better master the grammar.句中的master （掌握）可以用have a command of替代。

类似的还有很多，如： see—>catch sight of （看见），like—>be keen on （喜爱），affect—>have an effect on （影 响）等[例 2] The good news makes me excited.句中excited可以用in high spirits替代又如：I represent our class to write this letter to invite you to join in our open-air concert.—On behalf of our class, I am writing to invite you to join in our open-air concert.It is beneficial for you to have a brief understanding of Tang poems in advance.—>lt is of benefit for you to have a brief understand of Tang poems in advance.二、写较复杂结构我们可以从以下四个方面来润色我们的英语句子，让句子结构显得更高级。

1. 将短句改用并列句简短的句子虽意思明确，但短句有时会显得断续和单调根据句子间的逻辑关系，可 以使用恰当的并列连词将它们串连起来例如：You couldn't make loud noise during the meal. You could not speak with your mouth full of food, either.可以用 neither..., nor...来串连这两个句子：You could neither make loud noise nor speak with your mouth full of food during the meal.可以事连短句的并列连词还有：not only..., but also... /either... or... /and/but 等2. 爵简单句改用复合句在写作中使用含有从句的复合句，一方面更能凸显语言表达的紧凑感，另一方面也可 以让表达更细致我们可以使用两个方法一合并法和拓展法1）合并法合并法就是通过发掘简单句之间的关联，将两个或多个简单句处理为复合句例如:[例 1]My oral English is excellent. I can introduce the history of the Chinese painting to the local visitors.这两个句子之间有因果关系，所以可以合并为含有结果状语从句的复合句：My oral English is so excellent that I can introduce the history of the Chinese painting to the local visitors.H列 2]Our school was set up in 1950. It is located in the center of Guangzhou city.这两个句子都在描述同一事物，所以可以合并为含有定语从句的复合句：Our school, which was set up in 1950, is located in the center of Guangzhou city.(2) 拓展法拓展法就是在简单句的内部对一些句子结构或成分进行扩展，改写成复合句。

如：[例 1]ln my opinion, Tang culture is one of the most influential ancient cultures all over the world.可以将插入语in my opinion拓展成为I hold the view that...,这个句子就变成含有同位 语从句的复合句：I hold the view that Tang culture is the most influential ancient cultures all over the world.[例 2]You'd better know the history of Tang Dynasty before the lesson.该句可以拓展为含有主语从句的复合句:What you should prepare before the lesson is to know about the history of Tang Dynasty.3. 将普通句式改用特殊句式英语中的特殊句式的使用，可以对句子的某些内容起到加深印象或引起注意的效果， 可以通通以下类型的特殊句式，使普通的句子变得“华丽”。

1) 强调用It is ... that...强调句型强调谓语之外的成分[例 1]Your constant encouragement has increased my confidence in learning English well.可改为：It is your constant encouragement that has increased my confidence in learning English well.用助动词do, does, did或副词强调谓语[例 2]I hope you could take my application into account.可改为：I do /sincerely hope you could take my application into account.(2) 倒装[例 1]The teachers are very excellent, and they are so patient with students.可改为：Not only are the teachers very excellent, but also they are so patient with students.[例 2]When we face our mistakes bravely, we could correct them successfully. 可改为：Only when we face our mistakes bravely could we correct them successfully.[例 3]I am so happy that I cant wait to write to tell you some information about our school.可改为：So happy am I that I cant wait to write to tell you some information about our school.[例 4]You should never give up your dream.可改为：Never /On no account /By no means /In no way should you give up your dream.[例 5]Although the task is challenging, he managed to accomplish it finally.可改为：Challenging as the task is, he managed to accomplish it finally.(3) 感叹句感叹句可以加强句子的语气，无论是赞美或是谴责，都能达到“掷地有声”的效果。

如：It is really an unforgettable experience.可为：What an unforgettable experience it is!或 How unforgettable the experience is!(4) 比较级的否定I am the most suitable person to do the job.可改为：Nobody could be more suitable than me to do the job.(5) 比较级+比较级If you work harder, you will be luckier.可改为：The harder you work, the luckier you will be.(6) it充当形式主语或形式宾语What performance will be put on de。