广东高考英语读写任务任务型写作记叙文专题.ppt

NARRATION)•高考专项复习：Task-based writing Introduction 1.Pattern 2.4.CONTENTSText Two 4.5.Homework Text One 3.该题型在高考中的得分情况 该题总分值为25分，其中概要部分5分，正文部分20分2007年高考的任务型写作（即读写任务）要求考生在阅读完父亲的信后给父亲回信，全省平均分是8.98分2008年高考的读写任务要求考生写一篇演讲稿全省平均分是11.32分均属于记叙文体Introduction8.98分分11.32分分25分分叙事类文章的写作模板：1. Summary (概要概要)2. Body (正文正文)1) A transitional sentence (过渡句引出例子过渡句引出例子)2) An example and so on (举一个相同主题的例子举一个相同主题的例子,再按题目要求谈感受再按题目要求谈感受或发表看法等或发表看法等)3. Ending (结尾点题结尾点题) It was dusk and as I walked alone through the mountains of Greece, I came across six large wolves that were feeding on the body of a dead animal. I had heard many stories about wolves as a child and it was this animal that I feared more than any other. As I approached, the wolves left the body and started walking towards me, one after another. They stopped about 20 metres from me and stared. The animals looked both beautiful and terrifying. As I drew nearer, the lead wolf raised its head and let out a loud howl. The awful cry rang out across the silent valley. A more frightening sound I had never heard. I was almost certain it signalled death. TEXT 1（见资料中的第一篇文章） Every moment I expected to see the pack dash at me. I knew my only hope was to show my courage. I walked past the line of wolves, like a general moving among his soldiers. They howled out again. But when they saw that their war-cry did not cause me to change my direction or make me run, they feared to come after me; so they let me pass and returned to the dead animal. Had I turned back or tried to run away when they marched out to meet me I am certain the whole pack would have attacked me in a moment.But my show of courage scared them and kept them back．[写作内容]1．以约30个词概括短文的大意。

2．以约120个词就“勇气”这个主题发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：(1) 叙述你在学习或生活中遇到困难或危险时表现出勇气的一次经历；(2) 你通过这件事学到了什么[写作要求]作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子[评分标准]概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯SKILL: COMBINE THE ELEMENTS.WhoWhereWhenWhatthings to learnthe authorthe mountains of Greece duskcame across six large wolves and they let me passIt’s important to show courage when faced with danger.1. How to summarize a story?  The passage is mainly about… The author tells us a story that... The story is mainly about …and it tells us that…Useful structures for writing a summary:WhoWhatthings to learnthe authorcame across six large wolves and they let me passIt’s important to show courage when faced with danger. The passage is mainly about… The author tells us a story that... The story tells us that…PRACTICE: MAKE A SUMMARYPOSSIBLE VERSIONS:The story is mainly about the frightening experience of the author’s meeting six large wolves and how he showed his courage and walked past them bravely when faced with danger. (30)The author tells us his experience that hebumped into six large wolves and that because of his courage he walked past them safely without being attacked. (27)HOW TO WRITE A SUMMARY?Read and ___________ the passage.Find the ________ sentence and _____words. Paraphrase the original sentences instead of _______________.Omit the ________ and reduce the ________. Don’t include _________ opinion. Simplify the descriptions. Control the ________ of the words.Group Discussion：：understand 读懂文章。

读懂文章topickey 找准主题句和关键词找准主题句和关键词copying them 改写而不是抄袭改写而不是抄袭detailsexamples省略细节和缩减例子省略细节和缩减例子your own不要加入你自己的观点不要加入你自己的观点number 简短表达简短表达,控制字数控制字数I also have a similar experience that …Reading this story brought back my memory about …The author’s experience recalls something that happened to me when I was …After reading the story, I am deeply impressed by the author’s courage, and it also reminds me of an experience of my own …2. 1) How to introduce the example by using a transitional sentence?help catch a thief on a busovercome your shyness and successfully give a speech in publicadmit and correct your mistake tell the truth in the face of danger2) Group discussion: How to select an impressive example?  Life is full of obstacles. We need to overcome the difficulties with courage and move on.Inversion Life is a journey, along which there are many obstacles. Only with courage, can we overcome the difficulties and move on. 3. Practice: How to end your composition in an effective way?  To sum up, with courage, we can overcome the difficulties in life.Double Negative To sum up/ In conclusion/ In brief/ In a word/ All in all, without courage, no one can overcome the difficulties in life.Parallelism Courage is the power to overcome fear and danger. Courage is the strength to resist opposition and hardship. Courage is the weapon to fight against misfortune and injustice. So when faced with danger or difficulties, summon up your courage and fight against it.TEXT 2: 见材料的第二篇文章07高考真题/09样题 第二节￿读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）￿￿￿￿￿Dear Ari, As you sleep in my arms, I'm amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you. I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. That's why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means "lion". It's our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others. Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you'd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon. Finally your mother's labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord （脐带）￿and put you in your mother's arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face. And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lion's heart. Welcome to the world, Ari. Daddy［写作内容］［写作内容］假设你就是信中的假设你就是信中的AriAri，父亲在你出生的时，父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。

今天是父亲候写了这封信今天是父亲5050岁生日，你准备以写信的岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日以下是信的内容（信的开头和结方式，祝贺他的生日以下是信的内容（信的开头和结尾已经为你写好）：尾已经为你写好）： 1 1．以约．以约3030个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望； 2 2．．以约以约120120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点： （（1 1）读信后的感受；）读信后的感受； （（2 2）以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；）以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受； （（3 3）表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。

表达你对父亲的感激和祝福 ［写作要求］［写作要求］ 1 1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2 2．．信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 ［评［评分标准］分标准］ 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯EX1. ACTIVITY ： DISCUSS WITH YOUR GROUP MEMBERS ABOUT THE THREE COMPOSITIONS AND DECIDE WHICH ONE IS “EXCELLENT”, WHICH IS “AVERAGE”, AND WHICH IS “POOR”.评分标准：评分标准：概括准确，语言规范，概括准确，语言规范， 内容合适，篇章连贯。

内容合适，篇章连贯考场作文123 ＝＝ 5＋＋18 Excellent考场作文26 ＝＝ 1＋＋5 poor考场作文316 ＝＝ 3＋＋13 average1. I finded the way to solve it. 2. I know that I must wrong. 3. When you found out what I had done, you didn’t angry with me.4. I very love you and Mommy.EX2. CORRECT THE MISTAKES.应改为应改为 found应改为应改为must be wrong应改为应改为were not 或或 didn’t get angry应改为应改为I love you and Mommy very much.5. Now I was 18 years ago. 6. You was strited with me then. 7. I thank to you what you do to me.8. I didn’t can earn the money now.应改为应改为 am old应改为应改为were strict应改为应改为I thank you for what you have done for me.应改为应改为 can’t earn money 认真审题不要遗漏要点书写工整检查修改作文HOMEWORK: Finish a self-assessment. Write a complete composition of text 1.Thank YOU! 。