译林版九年级英语上册 Unit 4 Growing up Task(1)-牛津教学.ppt

9A Unit 4 Task The person who has influenced me mostFree talkThe person who has influenced you mostn.调查，研究You will not learn more about her until you do some research.She devoted much of her lifetime to doing charity work.kind and helpfulWhenever she had some time left , she was always willing to help children in poor areas.To her surprise, She discovered that she had cancer in 1991.after her deathhas a heart full of loveThe person who has influenced me mostHow oldLooks wherewhathow1 Who has influenced you most in your life?2 What does he/she look like?3 What is special about him/her?4 What has he/she done? Give one or two examples.5 What do you think of him/her?Lets read an article on Page 60.1 Who has influenced the writer most ?2 What does her father look like?3 What is her father like?4 What has her father done since 1990? 5 What does the writer think of her father now?My father is in his fifties. He has worked in a local factory for years. You will not find anything unusual about him until you learn more.Paragraph 11 Who has influenced the writer most ?2 What does her father look like?My father has always been kind and helpful. he is ready to help anyone. He gave our TV to a family who could not afford one; he cares for the children who have lost their parents; whenever he has some money left, he gives it to someone in need.Paragraph 23 What is her father like?My father has donated blood many times since 1990.The blood he has donated is enough to save over 70 lives. He has also donated blood cells to people with blood cancer. To my surprise, he has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.Paragraph 34 What has her father done since 1990? When I was a little girl ,I could not understand why my father always seemed to be kinder to others than to his own family. Now I realized that he has a heart full of love.Paragraph 45 What does the writer think of her father now?Paragraph( )_Paragraph( )_Paragraph( )_1 2-34Your feelingsQualities& examplesPersonal informationMy father has always been kind and helpful. he is ready to help anyone. He gave our TV to a family who could not afford one; he cares for the children who have lost their parents; whenever he has some money left, he gives it to someone in need.Paragraph 2topic sentence（主题句）supporting sentences（支撑句）My father has donated blood many times since 1990.The blood he has donated is enough to save over 70 lives. He has also donated blood cells to people with blood cancer. To my surprise, he has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.Paragraph 3use some transitional words （连接词） When I was a little girl ,I could not understand why my father always seemed to be kinder to others than to his own family. Now I realized that he has a heart full of love.Paragraph 4learn to use clauses（使用从句）a _ structure_ sentence_ sentence_ sentencesome _ expressionssome _words（清晰的文章结构）（主题句）（支撑句）（结尾句）（多样的表达）（使用连接词）以“The person who has influenced me most”为题写一篇作文。

Personal informationQualities& examplesYour feelings人物妈妈妈妈基本信息40多岁岁，护护士性格工作细细心，对对病人有耐心，有爱爱心，乐乐于助人你的感想要求： 1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，可适当发挥2.文章不少于80词词Evaluation time (评价时间)评价标准： 段落分明，要点齐全，时态恰当，结构正确， 句式多样，过渡自然，观点合理，书写规范 在保证正确的前提下，多用层次高的同义词、句1. Self-editing: (自我修改) Check your reports by yourselves, find out the mistakes and try to correct.Evaluation time (评价时间)2. Peer-editing:(相互修改) Share your reports with your partners, check his/her report and give a mark.(10分制) Give him/her some advice .评分标准：满分10分1段落不清晰，扣1分2 时态错误,扣1分3 要点遗漏，每条扣1分4 句式简单、重复，扣1分5 没有适当的过渡语，扣1分6 书写不规范，扣1分7 语法，拼写错误，每处扣0.5分Continue to edit your draft and share your favorite version with your partners. Homework Through hard work,size and body type doesnt matter you can do almost anything if you never give up. 。