2022届高考书面表达复习写作指导之投诉篇.pptx

2022届高考书面表达写作指导届高考书面表达写作指导 首 页末 页投诉篇单词单词dissatisfaction n. 不满 quality n. 质量disappoint vt. 使失望 rude adj. 无礼的awful adj. 糟糕的 impolite adj. 粗鲁的impatient adj. 不耐烦的 solve v. 解决worse adj. 更糟糕的 demand n. & v. 要求deficiency n. 不足,缺点 unreasonable adj. 不讲理的短语短语express ones disappointment/ dissatisfaction 表达某人的失望/ 不满poor service 糟糕的服务in a rude manner 态度恶劣claim/ demand a refund 要求退款solve/ deal with the problem 解决问题much to ones disappointment 令某人很失望的是一、话题词汇一、话题词汇Step 1 素材累积素材累积首 页末 页开头引人入胜开头引人入胜1. However, when , Im terribly sorry to find something wrong with it. Therefore, Im writing to express my dissatisfaction about it.然而,当时,很抱歉我发现它有问题。

因此,我写这封信是为了表达我对的不满2. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint aboutI have received.我很抱歉打扰你,但我恐怕要对我收到的投诉3. Imwho boughtfrom your website several days ago. I am writing to express my disappointment about我是几天前从你们的网站上购买了的 我写信表达我对的失望篇中精编细织篇中精编细织1. The reason for my dissatisfaction is thatFor one thing,For another,我不满意的原因是 一方面,;另一方面,二、话题句型二、话题句型首 页末 页2. Thus, I would like you to exchange a new one for me or I claim a refund. Ill appreciate it if my demand is met.因此,我想要你给我换个新的或退款。

如果我的要求得到满足,我将感激不尽3. When doing, I suddenly found that, which disappointed me a lot.当我做时,我突然发现,这使我很失望收尾简练到位收尾简练到位1. Its my sincere hope that you can investigate the matter seriously and have the matter settled properly, giving me a full refund or我真诚地希望你能认真调查这件事情并妥当地处理,给予我全额退款或者2. I would be much delighted if you could consider my complaint seriously. I do hope you can give me a satisfactory reply as soon as possible. Thank you for your consideration.如果你能认真考虑我的投诉,我会非常高兴 我确实希望你可以尽快给我一个满意的答复 感谢你的体谅。

首 页末 页3. I would appreciate it very much if you could take proper measures to deal with the problem as soon as possible.你若能尽快采取合理的措施处理这个问题,我将感激不尽首 页末 页1.我写这封信是为了表达我对上周从你的网站购买书虫系列读物(Bookworm Series)的不满当我检查围巾的时候,我突然发现上面有个洞,这使我很失望3.我真诚地希望你能妥当地处理这件事,尽快给予更换或退款三、仿写练习三、仿写练习Im writing to express my dissatisfaction about Bookworm Series bought from your website last week.When checking the scarf,I suddenly found that there was a hole in it,which disappointed me a lot.Its my sincere hope that you can have the matter settled properly, giving me a full refund or change it for a new one as soon as possible.首 页末 页Step 2 遣词造句遣词造句一、句型讲堂一、句型讲堂状语从句状语从句(三三)1. 条件状语从句引导条件状语从句的从属连词有 if, unless, while, supposing, once, provided that, as long as 等。

If you fail in the exam, you will not be able to travel to Beijing.2. 结果状语从句结果状语从句常由从属连词 sothat, suchthat 等引导David was so careless that he didnt find the mistakes in his test paper._ _ _ _ (从句从句)充当句中的状语充当句中的状语 主语主语 谓语谓语 宾语宾语_ _ _ _ _ 主语主语 系动词系动词 副词副词 表语表语 (从句从句)充当句中的状语充当句中的状语首 页末 页二、强化训练二、强化训练(一一) 单句改错下列每个句子中均有一处错误单句改错下列每个句子中均有一处错误,请找出并修改请找出并修改1. If I had time this afternoon, I will attend the party with you.2. He wont go home unless he finish his task.3. You will success as long as you work hard.4. She is such an intelligence girl that all of us admire her.5. He ran so fast that I couldnt caught up with him._have_finishes_succeed_intelligent_catch首 页末 页(二二) 写作必备。

请将下列中文句子译为英文写作必备请将下列中文句子译为英文1.最让我感兴趣的是他那惊险万分的冒险历程 (what 引导的主语从句)_2.他刚完成作业,他爸爸就到家了 (no soonerthan)_3. 他被这所大学录取了,他的好朋友也被这所大学录取了 (A do sth. , so do B)_4. 那就是她不愿意吃早餐的原因 (thats why)_5.他确实履行了他的承诺 (强调)_What interests me most is his thrilling adventure.No sooner had he finished his homework than his father got back home. He was admitted to the university, so was his good friend. Thats why she was unwilling to have breakfast. He did keep his promise.首 页末 页三、短文改错三、短文改错以下短文共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

Dear Mr. Smith, Ive recent signed up for your English learning website. However, I have come across some problems after using it for short time. Im writing to make a complaint about it. To begin with, some contents cannot be updated in time, that makes it impossible for me to learn something new relating to my present lessons at school. Much to my dissatisfactions, I find the topics of some reading materials were not proper for us middle_recently _ related _ them_which_dissatisfaction a_ are首 页末 页school students. As for a famous website, your service need improvement to live up to users expectations. I hope you will take the matter seriously or make an effort to solve the problems. Yours respectfully, Li Hua 剖析剖析第一处:recentrecently。

考查副词 副词修饰动词短语 signed up for, 故 recent 改为 recently第二处:for 后加 a 考查冠词 for a short time 是一个固定短语,意为“短时间内”, 故 for 后加 a第三处: it them 考查代词 them 指代前面的problems,故 it 改为 themneeds_and首 页末 页第四处:thatwhich 考查定语从句 此句为非限定性定语从句,又因为先行词是物,且在定语从句中充当主语,所以使用 which 引导而不使用 that,故 that 改为 which第五处:relatingrelated 考查非谓语动词 related to 意为“与有关”,这里使用过去分词作定语,故 relating 改为 related第六处:dissatisfactionsdissatisfaction 考查名词的单复数 因为 dissatisfaction 是抽象名词,没有复数形式,故 dissatisfactions 改为 dissatisfaction第七处:wereare 考查动词的时态 本句介绍网站出现的问题,讲述的是一个事实,因此要使用一般现在时,故 were 改为 are。

第八处:As 后的 for 去掉 考查介词 根据句意可知,作为一个著名的网站,你们的服务需要改进,以满足用户的期望,as for 的意思是“关于,至于”,所以 for 要去掉第九处:needneeds 考查主谓一致 your serv。