20-21 unit 5 表达·作文巧升格-高中英语选择性必修一课件教案试题习题新版人教版.doc

劝说信劝说信的写作目的是向某个组织或个人提出劝说性的建议的一种应用文体在写作过程中，要以合理的语气和口吻为基调，用有说服力的素材来支撑自己的观点，以说明阐述为主，以理动人，以理服人[基本框架]第一部分：引入写信人首先需要简要说明写信的主要目的第二部分：阐述这是劝说信的主体和核心部分写信人需要在这个部分有条理地列出自己的理由理由要力求客观、真实、有说服力，要重点突出、层次分明同时，要注意适当提高语言的力度，发挥语言的功力，以更好地展现自己的观点第三部分：总结这部分应该注意语言的简练和冲击力，切忌冗杂拖拉的表达写作中要注意下列几点：1．话题的提出要开门见山，不要拖泥带水；2．观点必须鲜明，不能模棱两可；3．论据要条理清楚，语言应准确、精炼；4．主体时态多用一般现在时；5．尽量避免同一单词、句型的重复使用，多采用同义词、相似结构以使表达多样化[常用词块]1．have a positive attitude拥有一个积极的态度2．draw a conclusion得出结论3．contribute to your health有助于身体健康4．put forward a suggestion提出建议5．do harm to peoples health伤害人的健康6．cause a lot of diseases导致很多疾病7．a waste of money浪费钱8．give up smoking戒烟9．take my advice into consideration考虑我的建议10．stay away from junk food远离垃圾食品[常用语句]★精彩开头1．Im sorry to hear/learn that you are so crazy about...听说你对……如此着迷，我很难过。

2．In my opinion, it is wrong to...在我看来，……是错误的3．I dont think it is a very good way to...我认为……不是一个很好的方法4．Thank you for your letter asking me about...谢谢你来信询问有关……5．Im writing to persuade you to quit/give up...我写信是劝你放弃……★正文佳句1．Here are my reasons.First of all, I think it would be better if...我的理由如下首先，我认为如果……会更好2．The reasons for...are as follows.First, ...Second, ...Last but not least, ...……的原因如下首先，…… 第二，…… 最后但并非最不重要的是，……3．On the one hand, ...; on the other hand, ...一方面，……；另一方面，……4．The reason for...is that...……的原因是……5．No one can ignore the fact that...没有人能忽视……6．If I were you, I would...如果我是你，我会……★余味结尾1．In short.../In conclusion...总之……2．All things considered ...从各方面看来……3．As far as Im concerned, ...就我而言，……4．From what has been discussed above, ...通过以上讨论，……5．Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.请考虑我的建议，做出最后的决定。

假如你是高二学生李华，你的一个在外地读书的同学张力给你写信，向你诉说他最近因为身体不好而影响学习的情况并且坦言自己平时学习忙，很少锻炼请根据这一情况给张力写一封说服信，鼓励他积极锻炼身体，从而为更好地学习打下基础注意：1.词数80左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2．尽可能运用本单元所学的词汇、句型和语法Dear Zhang Li，I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. Sincerely yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Zhang Li，I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have been so absorbed in study that you have no time for exercise, which is really harmful to your health.I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you have a positive attitude to exercise in future.You may draw a conclusion that time spent on exercise is wasted.In fact，exercise can contribute to your health a lot.Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad.So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least one hours exercise every day from now on.In short, as long as you exercise more, you will surely have a stronger body.Sincerely yours，Li Hua3。