Unit 4 5 Writing—An email about a journey-教案课件-高中英语选择性必修二.pptx

Journey Across a Vast LandUnit 4Period FiveWritingAn email about a journey写作训练 弄清文络 写作妙笔生花技法点拨 文体分析 把握写作动脉内容索引本本单单元元的的写写作作目目标标是是写写一一篇篇关关于于旅旅行行的的邮邮件件，也也就就是是对对一一次次出出行行、游游览览、参参观观等等的的记记录录这这类类文文章章一一般般分分为为三三部部分分：第第一一部部分分介介绍绍自自己己游游览览或或参参观观的的地地点点第第二二部部分分写写自自己己的的游游览览经经历历，也也是是文文章章的的重重点点第第三三部部分分往往往往以以向向朋朋友友发发出出邀邀请请来来结结束束全全文文在在介介绍绍游游览览经经历历时时，一一般般按按游游览览的的先先后后顺顺序序写写，由由先先而而后后依依次次记记述述游游览览过过程程中中所所见见到到的的景景物物另另外外要要选选取取自自己己印印象象最最深深刻刻的的或或最最有有特特色色的的景景物物，作作较较为为详详细细的的描描写写最最后后可可以加上自己的感受，做到既有所见所闻，又有所思所感，深化写作主题以加上自己的感受，做到既有所见所闻，又有所思所感，深化写作主题。

技 法 点 拨文体分析 把握写作动脉写作指导1.Id like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you.2.Im glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.3.Last week/month/year，I paid a visit to.，which is famous for.4.It lies/is located/situated in.5.The scenery is so beautiful that it takes the tourists breath away.6.Wherever you go，there are plenty of activities to choose from.7.It has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world.8.We were all tired，but our trip to.was really unforgettable.常用表达返 回假假设设你你是是李李华华，你你的的英英国国笔笔友友Tom写写信信询询问问你你的的一一次次难难忘忘的的旅旅游游经经历历。

请你用英语给他回一封邮件，要点包括：请你用英语给他回一封邮件，要点包括：1.旅游过程；旅游过程；2.你的感受你的感受注意：注意：1.词数词数80左右；左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数参考词汇：大佛参考词汇：大佛 the Giant Stone Buddha写 作 训 练弄清文络 写作妙笔生花Dear Tom，Im glad to share a truly fascinating travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.Yours，Li Hua审题审题1.确定文体：这是一篇电子邮件，向朋友介绍一次难忘的旅游经历确定文体：这是一篇电子邮件，向朋友介绍一次难忘的旅游经历2.主体时态：以一般过去时为主景物描写用一般现在时主体时态：以一般过去时为主景物描写用一般现在时3.主体人称：人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主主体人称：人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主谋篇谋篇第一段：开门见山，介绍本次旅行的时间、地点、人员及交通方式等第一段：开门见山，介绍本次旅行的时间、地点、人员及交通方式等。

第二段：自己的游览经历，注意详略得当第二段：自己的游览经历，注意详略得当第三段：总结全文，发出邀请第三段：总结全文，发出邀请审题谋篇核心词汇核心词汇1.景色景色_2.让人惊叹让人惊叹_3.在黄昏在黄昏_4.返回返回_5.一定会一定会_6.参观，拜访参观，拜访_scenerytake sb.s breath awayat duskmake ones way back遣词造句be bound topay a visit to连词成句连词成句1.七月七日，我和父母乘车去了四川乐山，一个以大佛闻名的地方七月七日，我和父母乘车去了四川乐山，一个以大佛闻名的地方On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province.Leshan.2.当我抬头看到巨大的佛头，低头看到巨大的佛脚时，我当我抬头看到巨大的佛头，低头看到巨大的佛脚时，我感到自己是多么的渺小感到自己是多么的渺小and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small.3.第二天，我们登上了峨眉山，那里的美景让我们惊叹第二天，我们登上了峨眉山，那里的美景让我们惊叹。

The next day，we climbed Mount Emei.The beautiful scenery on the mountain .4.如果我有时间，一定会再来游览乐山如果我有时间，一定会再来游览乐山If I have time，I Leshan again.is famous for the Giant Stone BuddhaWhen I looked up at the large headtook our breath awayam bound to pay a visit to句式升级句式升级1.用非限制性定语从句改写句用非限制性定语从句改写句12.用现在分词短语作状语改写句用现在分词短语作状语改写句23.把句把句3改成以关系副词引导的定语从句改成以关系副词引导的定语从句On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha.Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small.The next day，we climbed Mount Emei，where the beautiful scenery took our breath away.用用适适当当的的过过渡渡词词语语，把把以以上上词词汇汇和和句句式式，再再加加上上联联想想内内容容，组组成成一一篇篇80词左右的英语短文。

词左右的英语短文参考范文参考范文Dear Tom，Im glad to share a truly fascinating travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.组句成篇_Yours，Li Hua返 回On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha.The Buddha is literally big.Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small.The next day，we climbed Mount Emei，where the beautiful scenery took our breath away.There are many old temples and wild monkeys.At dusk，we made our way back.We were all tired，but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable.If I have time，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again.Im looking forward to going there with you next time.。