高三英语写作教学-新闻评论概要写作(公开课)（课堂PPT）.ppt

Summary writingWhat is a summary?A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details.How do you usually do summary writing?Steps:2. Read for structure3. Read for main points4. Rewrite in our own words1.Read for writing style Step1. Read quickly for writing styleNews commentary（新闻评论）News(background)Comments(suggestions)Ending Para1-2 Para3-4 Para5-6 para7NewsCommentsSuggestionsEndingStep2. Read quickly for structurePara1-2 NewsPara3-4 CommentsPara5-6 SuggestionsPara7 EndingParas.Main points1News23Comments45Suggestions67EndingStep3.Read carefully for main pointsa man was killed/the tiger/get into the zoo in Ningbo/without paying for a ticket/the tiger was shot deadblame / cold-hearted/ wrongtired of forgivingthe park was not well preparedraise peoples awareness / visitors to observe rules no more such tragediesStep4. Rewrite in your own wordsTip1: use words or phrases of similar meaningOriginal expressionsrewriteget intowithout paying for a ticketwas shot deadcold-heartedthose in the wrongenterwithout payingwas killedcold-bloodedrule-breakersStep4. Rewrite in your own wordsTip2. change clauses or sentences1.Some said this was a sign that people are becoming more cold-hearted. But they are wrong. 1.Some said that people become cold-hearted,which is wrong.2.The tigers death shows the park was not well prepared for such emergencies. 2.The park should make better preparations.Step4. Rewrite in your own wordsTip3.use proper connectionsThe majority of voices online blamed the dead manfor the animals death. Some said that people become cold-hearted, which is wrong. People are just tired of forgiving those in the wrong. People blamed the man not because they are cold-hearted, but because they are tired of forgiving rule-breakers. Write a summary in groups of four. Get ready to share the summary in class.Summary WritingSummary Writing1. Is the length proper? (4080words)2. Is there any sentence exactly from the article? 3. Does it include all the main points? one possible version： A man who entered a zoo in Ningbo without paying was killed by a tiger which was consequently killed. Many people blamed the rule-breaker for the death of the tiger not because they are cold-blooded but because sympathy shouldnt be abused. To avoid such tragedies, the park should take more emergency precautions and the public should raise their awareness of obeying rules. (62 words)Use your own wordsRulesRewrite the article with about 60 wordsDont miss any main pointsMake the summary coherent(连贯的)Correct spelling, proper punctuation marks and good handwritingSummary Writing Summary Writing Read for main pointsSkillsRead for structureRead for writing style Organize your languageSummary Writing Summary Writing HomeworkFinish your own summary and swap it with your partner and make some change so that it can be a better one.Wish you good luck in the coming exam!(1)Use words of similar meanings同义替换法I didnt catch any fish owing to the fact that I was not patient.I didnt catch any fish_ I was not patient.becauseHow to rewrite(2)Adopt the opposite way when saying a sentence正话反说法You will fail.You will _. not succeed(3)Change the part of speech词性转换法Patience is very important.Patience is _.of great importance(4)Change the structure of a sentence句式变化法语态变换：Parents should give children more praise.Children should_more praise.be given简单句变复合句：Children should be encouraged more. This will help them learn faster.Children should be encouraged more, _ will help them learn faster.Children are given more praise. They will achieve more success.When _, children will achieve more success.whichgiven more praise(5)Use the shortest possible transitions连词衔接法 注意使用一些短而精的连词，如but, and, so, while, however, then, thus, yet, for, therefore, including, instead of 等。

We should encourage children. We should not scold them.We should encourage children_ scolding them.instead of(6) Change the order of the words. 词序改变法The secret of success was patience._ was _.Patiencethe secret of success(7) Omit the details细节省略法Dont always scold and give lots of praise instead. Dont scold and give praise instead.(8) Make use of the meaning of a sentence句意理解法Shopping on the Internet is becoming increasingly popular._More and more people prefer Internet shopping.Step3.Read for Main PointsPara.3 As news of the incident spread, the majority of voices online blamed the dead man for the animals death. Some said this was a sign that people are becoming more cold-hearted. But they are wrong. People have been displaying increasingly more enthusiasm for helping those in need and participating in charity work. In 2016, the China Charity Federation received donations of 18.8 billion yuan ($2.7 billion) in total, 46 percent more than the donations received in 2015, and they sent helping hands to one tragedy after another. Para.3 As news of the incident spread, the majority of voices online blamed the dead man for the animals death. Some said this was a sign that people are beco。