英语写作训练示范课件7-E-mail.ppt

英语写作训练7E-mails P179 （电子邮件）From: John _0_PTo: Kayla hotmail .comCc: NoneSubject: Re: Pen-pal wantedHello, Kayla, Im Mike. Yours, Mike E-mail 格式From: John _0_P（发送方）To: （接收方）Date: Fri, 1 Jan 99 10:21:32 EST（日期）Subject: lunch with me?（主题）Cc:（抄送：应当收到副本的人的列表）Bcc: (密送) E-mail 格式-A. Header 头部Hello, Kayla, Im Mike. I am 15 years old. Im glad to know that you would like to have a pen pal(笔友). I also want to find a pen pal from the Internet. When Im free, I like to listen to music, go hiking and play basketball. Im good at English and art. We can learn from each other and be good friends. I hope to hear from you soon.Best wishes.Yours, MikeE-mail 格式-B. Body 正文Rules of an E-mailRules of an E-mail（规则）（规则）1.1.E-mails are less formal than letters.E-mails are less formal than letters.2.2.邮件不如信件正式邮件不如信件正式3.3.2. Start the e-mail with by saying 2. Start the e-mail with by saying “Hello” or “Hi”. “Hello” or “Hi”. 一般以一般以Hello/ HiHello/ Hi开头开头4.4.3. Write to the person as if you are 3. Write to the person as if you are speaking to them. speaking to them. 语气好像说话一样语气好像说话一样5.5.4. Good E-mails are direct and to the 4. Good E-mails are direct and to the point. point. 直接点题直接点题6.6.5. Do not write the date. 5. Do not write the date. 不要写日期不要写日期写写E-mailE-mail的注意点的注意点1.1.邮件易读。

邮件易读2.2.对收信人的礼貌对收信人的礼貌3.3.遵守遵守“ “4848小时原则小时原则” ”4.4.不要将他人的信件随意发给不要将他人的信件随意发给第三者Outlines of an E-mail(Outlines of an E-mail(大纲大纲) )1. Greeting and other persons name.1. Greeting and other persons name.(Hello / Hi, (Hello / Hi, 名字名字) )2. Introduction.2. Introduction.( (自报家门自报家门) )3. Main body.3. Main body.( (内容：直接、简洁、礼貌内容：直接、简洁、礼貌) )4. Conclusion.4. Conclusion.( (点题：得体点题：得体) )5. Good-byes. 5. Good-byes. （结束）（结束）6. Your name. 6. Your name. （写信人姓名）（写信人姓名）Hi, Tom, Listen, weve been working on the Smith account and I was wondering if you could give me a hand? I need some inside information on recent developments over there. Do you think you could pass on any information you might have? Thanks. Yours, Peter Sample 1正 文杜先生给杜先生给JackJack发了封邮件，要求他将他的邮发了封邮件，要求他将他的邮递地址，及告诉他。

请帮递地址，及告诉他请帮Jack Jack 回回这封邮件，并告知杜先生，若想直接与他联这封邮件，并告知杜先生，若想直接与他联系，请与下午系，请与下午7 7：2020后拨打所提供的号后拨打所提供的号码将此邮件抄送给码将此邮件抄送给vicky, vicky, 并密送给并密送给John.John.附：附：JackJack的邮箱：的邮箱： 杜先生的邮箱：杜先生的邮箱： Jack Jack的邮递地址：广州市西长安街的邮递地址：广州市西长安街9696号号 ：：86-20-1234567886-20-12345678 ：：86-20-2345678986-20-23456789Sample 2From: jack From: jack To: doe126. comTo: doe126. comCc: Cc: Bcc: john Bcc: john Subject: my p-mail address, etc.Subject: my p-mail address, etc.Dear Doe,Dear Doe, Thank you for your e-mail. As you Thank you for your e-mail. As you requested, Im pleased to inform you of requested, Im pleased to inform you of my p-mail address, fax and phone my p-mail address, fax and phone numbers as follows:numbers as follows: P-mail: 96, xichangan street, Guangzhou P-mail: 96, xichangan street, Guangzhou Fax: 86-20-12345678 Fax: 86-20-12345678 Tel: 86-20-23456789 Tel: 86-20-23456789 If you would like to talk to me directly If you would like to talk to me directly on the phone, please call me at the above on the phone, please call me at the above number after 7:20 p.m. . Thank you.number after 7:20 p.m. . Thank you. Sincerely Sincerely yours,yours, Jack JackFrom: jack From: jack To: doe126. comTo: doe126. comCc: Cc: Bcc: john Bcc: john Subject: my p-mail address, etc.Subject: my p-mail address, etc.Dear Doe,Dear Doe, Thank you for your e-mail. As you requested, Im pleased Thank you for your e-mail. As you requested, Im pleased to inform you of my p-mail address, fax and phone numbers to inform you of my p-mail address, fax and phone numbers as follows:as follows: P-mail: 96, xichangan street, Guangzhou P-mail: 96, xichangan street, Guangzhou Fax: 86-20-12345678 Fax: 86-20-12345678 Tel: 86-20-23456789 Tel: 86-20-23456789 If you would like to talk to me directly on the phone, If you would like to talk to me directly on the phone, please call me at the above number after 7:20 p.m. . Thank please call me at the above number after 7:20 p.m. . Thank you.you. Sin Sincerely yours,cerely yours, JackJack【写作内容写作内容】你叫李明，你听说你的朋友张亮经过三个月的你叫李明，你听说你的朋友张亮经过三个月的刻苦训练，在全国职业院校技能大赛刻苦训练，在全国职业院校技能大赛(National Vocational Students Skills (National Vocational Students Skills Competition)Competition)中获得了一等奖，请你给朋友中获得了一等奖，请你给朋友张亮写封张亮写封E-mailE-mail表示祝贺。

表示祝贺写作要求写作要求】正文约正文约4040个英文单词；文中不可个英文单词；文中不可出现你自己和同学的真实姓名等信息出现你自己和同学的真实姓名等信息写作训练：（20KK深圳市模拟考题） Dear Zhang Liang,I heard that you won the first place in the National Vocational Students Skills Competition. I am so happy for you. Congratulations! If you hadnt been working so hard at it for three months, you wouldnt have got such an excellent result. Hope you do better in the future! Yours, Li Ming 写作训练：（20KK深圳市模拟考题答案） Dear Zhang Liang, I was told that you got the first prize in the National Vocational Students Skill Competition. Congratulations to you! In the past three months youve been working so hard in the training. Practice makes perfect. At last you made it! I am so proud of your succes。