2022届高考英语读后续写专题分析之卖爆米花帮助他人脱贫 课件.pptx

Lead-inThis morning,I came to the classroom and saw a beautiful gift box on my desk.Continuation Writing2020年山东高考年山东高考胡林胡林 黄陂一中黄陂一中1characterwhenwherethe economy was in decline in a small communityMrs.Meredith,her children,people in the community,Bernard and his parents.help between neighbors /Read for basic informationa storysettingtheme plot01030502042Mrs.Meredith _ Bernards familyPlot lineMrs.Bernard knew that Bernard wanted to _to support his familyMrs.Meredith _ her children about Bernards familyJohn came up with _Read for plotvisitedtoldearn moneyThe children sat _ Bernard.thinking aboutan idea?The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet.People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems,and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The little boy-his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,”she said to her own children,John,Harry,and Clara.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I dont see what he can do.”After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.“I wish we could help him to earn money,”said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,”said Harry.“We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet and cried,“I have a great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish.”The other children also jumped up all attention.“When John had an idea,it was sure to be a good one.Ill tell you what we can do,”said John.“You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us?Well,we can make popcorn(爆米花),and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”Para1:When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.Para2:With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.2Outline the continuation part3To make popcornQ1:What would Mrs.Bernard say?Q2:How did they prepare the popcorn?Q3:How did Bernard feel?To sell popcorn Q4:Did Bernard sell the popcorn successfully?Q5:How did Bernard sell the popcorn?Q6:How did the children feel after helping Bernard out?Q4Q2Q5BehaviorEmotionConversationPara1:When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.Para2:With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.2Write the continuation part4To make popcornQ1:What would Mrs.Meredith say?Q2:How did they prepare the popcorn?Q3:How did Bernard feel?To sell popcorn Q4:Did Bernard sell the popcorn successfully?Q5:How did Bernard sell the popcorn?Q6:How did the children feel after helping Bernard out?（Conversation）(Behavior)(Behavior)(Emotion)(Emotion)Theme5Present your continuation1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。

2.内容的合理性3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性4.上下文的连贯性读读后后续续写写评评分分标标准准6Appreciate a possible version When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.Then she said,“You may send him the popcorn every Saturday morning,if you will pop the corn for him yourself.John,will you agree to take charge of the work?”“Indeed,I will,”replied John,and he kept his word.Then the children were busy popping the corn,while their mother went out to buy the paper bags.When she came back,she brought Bernard with her.Very soon the paper bags were filled.With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.And much sooner than he expected,he returned with an empty basket.Never had he earned so much money.When he found that it was all to be his,he was so delighted that he could hardly speak,but his bright smiling face spoke for him.People began to watch for the“little popcorn boy”,and every week he had at least fifty cents to take home,and often more.All this was because of Johns bright idea.7HomeworkHelp your partners to polish his/her writing.Thank you!。