
2025届高考英语备考一轮复习:读后续写的精彩结尾讲析与练习.pdf
8页2025届高考英语备考一轮专题复习:读后续写的精彩结尾一篇好文章不仅要有一个绝妙的开头,还要有一个精彩的结尾在结构上,结尾起总结上文,首尾呼应,使文章结构完整的作用在内容上,结尾进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想,使文章意义表达得更加深刻好词好句记表达(-)使用强调结构1 .强调句型 4t+be+被强调部分+that/who+其他It is not until we challenge ourselves thatwe can unleash our true potential.只有挑战自我,才能释放出真正的潜力2、对比强调:It is not.that count(s)/matter(s).Its.that.o It is not the mistakes you make that matter.It*s what you have learned from them that makes a significant difference.你才巳的错误并不重要,重要的是你从错误中所学到的东西3、用 w h at主语从句表强调:Whatmatters/counts most is.o From this,I learn that what matters most is not the destination,but the journey.由此,我明白了最重要的不是目的地,而是旅程。
二 X 更用倒装结构 Such is the key to successa little bit more efforts and a little bitmore determination will create a miracle.这就是成功的秘诀-更努力一点儿,更坚定一点儿,你就能创造奇迹三)描写场景Resting beside my mother,with hands held tightly by her,I feel theworld is so beautiful.躺在妈妈身边,双手被她紧紧地握着,我觉得这个世界是如此美丽Standing beside the empty road,they looked up into the sky,feeling the preciouspeace from within.站在空旷的道路旁,他们抬头仰望天空,感受来自内心的珍贵的平静四)抒 发 感 悟 If you understand each other you will be kind to each other.Knowing aman well never leads to hate and almost always leads to love.如果你们互相理解,你们就会善待彼此。
了解一个人永远不会招致仇恨,而几乎总是会带来爱True friendship isntjust about having fun together,but also about being there for each other during toughtimes.真正的友谊不仅仅是一 起玩乐,还是在艰难时期相互支持五)使用名言警句He finally understood the value of perseverance,echoing the wisdom of ThomasEdison:Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.v他终于明白了坚持的价值,响应了托马斯爱迪生的智慧:“天才是百分之一的灵感加上百分之九十九的汗水After all the challenges they faced,they finally understood the truth in thesaying,“Where there is a will,there is a way.”经历了所有的挑战之后,他们终于明白了那句谚语中的真理:“有志者,事竟成。
续写技巧学表达(-)首尾呼应首尾呼应又叫首尾照应,意思是开头和结尾互相接应,是写作手法的一种在写结尾时再次强调文章开头阐明的中心思想,深化主题,从而使文章的中心鲜明突出,起到画龙点睛的效果开头:It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.Hedecided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.那时是夏天,爸爸想让我度过一个前所未有的假期他决定带我去西部旅行结尾:Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before.The special trip to theWild West was deeply engraved in my mind.我从未有过如此令人激动而又险象环生的假期那次特别的西部之旅深深地印在了我的脑海里开头:I had an interesting childhood.It was filled with surprises and amusements,allbecause of my mother一loving,sweet,yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange familytrip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.我有一个有趣的童年,它充满了惊喜和快乐,这一切都归功于我的妈妈,她慈爱、温柔却健忘。
我十一岁的时候,我们家的一次不同寻常之旅体现了她很多方面结尾:Despite Moms being absent-minded and forgetful,she was still a kind and nice mom.虽然妈妈健忘,但她仍然是一个善良的好妈妈牛刀小试完成句子追梦永远不晚只要你抓住任何一个机会,充分利用它,你就有可能实现梦想 o Its never too late to pursue/go for your dreams.As long as you grasp anyopportunity and take full advantage of it,you will stand a chance of fulfilling yourdreams.她兴奋地发现,只要有一点创造力,任何挑战都是可以克服的She learnedexcitedly that with a little creativity,any challenge could be overcome.(=)主题升华主题升华是一种扩大文章所叙事件的意义,提高主题的容量,使文章的中心思想能够进入一个更加开阔、更加高远的境界的写作手法。
在续写时,为了点明记叙内容的意义,可以通过主题升华,在结尾融入自己的观点和评价It dawned on me that an act of kindness could mean so much to another,and that asimple act could make the world so much better.我开始明白,一项善举对另一个人来说可能意义重大,而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得更加美好From then on,Bernard made up his mind to help those in need.Onlyin this way could more and more people help each other in the future.从那时起,伯纳德决定帮助需要帮助的人只有这样,将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助牛刀小试完成句子当我们站在人生旅途的十字路口时,我们意识到生活并不是找寻自我,而是通过我们做出的选择、我们所走的道路以及我们一路走来成为的人来创造自我As we stood at the crossroads of our life journey,we realized that life was notabout finding ourselves,but(about)creating ourselves through the choices we made,the paths we took,and the people we became along the way.(三)定格动画定格指电影、电视剧等的活动画面突然停止在某一个画面上,是影视作品常用的技巧手法。
在续写中,运用画面定格来突出或渲染某一场面、某种神态、某个细节等,可以给读者带来深刻的印象Sarah stood at the edge of the cliff,her hair streaming in the wind,her eyes fixedon the horizon,as if searching for answers in the vast expanse of the sky and sea.莎拉站在悬崖边,她的头发在风中飘动,她的目光凝视着地平线,仿佛在广阔的天空和大海中寻找答案牛刀小试完成句子汤姆意识到即使在纷乱之中也可以发现美丽当太阳落到地平线下,在城市的轮廓线投下温暖的光芒,他突然感到一股平静涌上心头Tom realized that even in themidst of chaos,there was beauty to be found.As the sun dipped below the horizon,casting a warm glow over the city skyline,he felt a sense of peace wash over him.(四)使用名言警句续写时可以用名言警句来做结尾,以凸显文章的主题,起到画龙点睛的作用。
With gratitude in their hearts,they embraced their challenges,remembering thewise words of Winston Churchill:Success is not final,failure is not fatal:It is thecourage to continue that counts.”怀着感激之情,他们欣然接受挑战,记得温斯顿丘吉尔的智慧之言:“成功并不是终点,失败也不是致命的:重要的是坚持下去的勇气牛刀小试完成句子尽管已经过去了几十年,我却经常回忆起我和母亲一起度过的那些珍贵的午餐时光心存感激,因为母亲脸上的微笑和她的善良养育了现在的我!还有那些鼓舞人心的话,如“生命不止,奋斗不息”,一直在我的脑海里回响Though decades have passed,I constantly recall those precious lunchtimes my motherand I had together.I am forever grateful because the smiles on Mothers face and her kindact made me who I am now!And all those inspiring words like“cease to struggle and youcease to live“have been echoing in my mind.(五)结尾留白留白指书画艺术创作中为使整个作品画面、章法更为协调精美而有意留下相应的空白。
读后续写结尾留白给读者留有想象的空间,让读者思考,是一种深化主题的写作方式He followed the clues and gathered the evidence,but when he f。












