九年级英语中考专题书面表达外研社知识精讲.docx

名师归纳总结 精品word资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -九年级英语中考专题书面表达外研社【本讲训练信息 】一. 教学内容：中考专题书面表达二. 重难点讲解：英语写作是同学学习的一个盲点， 缺乏对写作的特地训练和反思， 老师的工作量大， 造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此同学学得也不详细、不深化，忽视写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确， 无单词拼写错误就应当得满分； 同学们应当走出对英语写作熟识上的误区；那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中猎取高分呢？（一）写作决窍总体把握，要点齐全；人称时态，规律清晰；关键词汇，动词第一；组词成句，结构完整；组句成文，连词增色；此路不通，绕道迂回；字迹工整，留好印象；从句适量，高分有望；（二）写作步骤1. 认真审题；审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，警告读者什么（即写作目的） ；2. 确定文体和时态；确定文体后，依据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料；同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化；3. 写完要点，但不随便发挥；4. 先草稿，后誊写；（三）习作点评2004 年全国中同学英语才能竞赛初赛初三组： （ 14 分）Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.· What exactly your hobby is;· When and how you became interested in this hobby;· Why you enjoy your hobby;· About your hopes and plans for the future.写作要求：1. 依据所供应的内容，适当拓展想象空间，敏捷地将供应的信息表达在文章中；2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范；3. 词数 60— 80；同学习作 A ：My hobby is read books ① .When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also ② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can 第 6 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - -solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.① 改为 reading books，动词作表语时应当用动名词；② also 的位置应放在 can 之后；点评： 档次 9— 11 分；① 要点不全，漏掉最终一个要点；② 句子基本无误， 能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅， 句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题；③ 有少量错误；同学习作 B：My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren ’ t enough.SboegI an to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.① 开门见山、点题；② 真情显露，理由充分；③ 文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然；④ 奇妙使用句型以表决心；点评： 档次 13— 14 分；① 清晰表达写作目的，要点齐全；② 语言表达敏捷多样，字里行间显露出真情实感，文章有感染力；③ 恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文；高分突破：① 文体：记叙文；② 要点： what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.③ 时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化；内容具有开放性， 但它也是 “掌握性” 的写作试题， 因此不能随便发挥， 要善于抓信息，写完要点； 选用这两篇同学真实习作， 一是由于他们选材相同， 二是由于他们都是英语成果 优秀的同学； 同学 B 敏捷使用连词 so that,so,little by little,when,so that 等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语 used to,became interested in,come true 等，使内容丰富，读起来美丽流畅； 其实这些表达同学 A 也会，只是缺乏技术加工；通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙；（四）培育途径1. 依据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作；2. 与同伴合作，沟通自己的写作，通过沟通找出各自作文中写得好的地方和美丽的句子，合作制造一篇新的文章，供大家观赏；3. 找老师点评，恳求老师指点，特殊是怎样润色；4. 自己纠错，写下反思；（五）备考演练A缙云山是重庆闻名的游玩胜地， 每天有大量的游客； 请你依据下面供应的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境爱护方面的变化；写作要求：1. 词数在 100 左右；2. 条理清晰，语句通顺；3. 开头已写好，但不计入总词数；Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interestB阅读电视广告词： “If we don ’t save water,the last drop of water will be a te-darrop. ”依据提示，写一篇 60-80 词的短文；提示：1. 生活离不开水；2. 可饮用水在削减；3. 水污染严峻；4. 应爱护水源，再利用水；思路点拨与参考答案A. [ 思路点拨 ]：① 文体：记叙文；② 时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态；采纳正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力；③ 写作目的：告知读者爱护环境的重要性；Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.B. [ 思路点拨 ]：① 夹叙夹议（说明现状，谈谈感想） ；② 时态：一般现在时态；③ 广告词的含义 —— 水很重要，应爱护和再利用（写作意图） ；Water is very important to humans.We can ’ t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people d on’ t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must dosomething to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don ’ t do this,the last drop of water will be a tea-rdrop.（六）直击中考英语七大写作问题写作是一项能够充分考查同学语言综合运用才能的题型，也是中考中失分较多的一题；不少考生在练习英语写作时不得法， 又苦于找不到提高的有效途径； 纵观近年各地中考英语写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体；一般来说，不同的写作题材，它的人物，时间，写作的重点也是不尽相同的，但同学在写作过程中所犯的错误却基本一样；笔者在批阅 2007 年中考英语作文中发觉诸多考生的作文显现了这样那样的问题，我们先看下面考生的作文；例： （ 2007 年山东枣庄）以“ Chinese Spring Festival ”为题，写一篇短文；■ 考生作文Chinese Spring FestivalThe Spring Festival is China ’imsportant test ① festival. It ’thse longest holidays② . Most people go back home to get together with their families ③ .Before the f。