读后续写之常用提分修辞课件 高三英语写作专项.pptx

常用提分修辞读后续 写Simile明喻，是以两种具有共同特征的事物或现象进行对比，表明本体和喻体的关系，常用的明喻标志词有 like,as,seem,as if,as though,similar to等1.The snow was as thick as a blanket.雪像地毯一样厚2.Last night,I slept like a log.昨晚我睡得像木头3.It seemed as if the world was at an end.似乎是到了世界末日4.The ground is as hard as stone after the drought.干旱之后土地硬得就像石头一样5.He wandered in to see me as if he had nothing else to do.他遛遛达达进来看我，好像无事可做的样子6.Love is like the wind,you cant see it but you can feel it.爱如风，你看不见，但你能感受到它7.The country,covered with cherry tree flowers,looks as though it is covered with pink snow.地上覆盖着樱花，这个国家似乎覆盖着粉红色的雪。

8.I couldnt move my legs.It was as if they were stuck to the floor.我的腿动不了，就好像给固定在地板上似的9.He looks as though he hasnt had a square meal for months.瞧他那样子 好像几个月没好好吃过一顿饭似的10.The house looks something like a castle.那房子看上去有点像一座城堡something like.有点像)11.Reading is to the mind what food is to the body.读书与思想的关系就好比食物与健康的关系A is to B what C is D A之于B如同C之于D)12.Searching for one man in this big city is like looking for a needle in a haystack.在这座大城市里寻找一个人犹如大海捞针13.John saw the car coming and stood still as a statue.John看到车子过来，像石像一样站着一动不动。

14.My mothers kitchen was like a holy place:you couldnt wear your shoes,you had to sit there at a certain time,and occasionally wed pray.我妈的厨房像一个圣地：你不能穿鞋，你必须在某一个时候坐在那里，偶而我们会祈祷15.A room without books is like a body without a soul.没有书的房间，如同没有灵魂的躯体16.The clouds were like ice-cream castles in the sky.云朵就像是天空中的冰激凌城堡17.Kyle looked at the test with a stare as blank as his notebook.Kyle茫然地看着试卷，头脑如同笔记本一样的空白18.Then like a cold wave on a shore,comes silence and she sings no more.然后沉默如同海滩上的寒潮般袭来，她不再唱歌19.As in depths of many seas,my heart was drowned in memories.如同在大海深处，我的心里沉溺于回忆之中。

20.He sits there staring at the blank screen like a ghost searching for his reflection.他坐在那里，盯着空白的屏幕，像是一个鬼魂在寻找他的影子21.He moved like lightening before the police came.还没等警察到来，他像闪电一样地跑了22.She hung her head like a dying flower.她像是一朵枯萎的花低着头23.A house without books is like a room without windows.没有书的房子，如同没有窗户的房间24.I remember the whole thing as if it happened yesterday.整个这件事我记得很清楚，就仿佛是昨天发生似的25.Life is like riding a bicycle.To keep your balance,you must keep moving.人生如同骑自行车，要保持平衡你要不断向前26.A mind is like a parachute.It doesnt work if it is not open.思想如同降落伞，如果不打开就不起作用。

27.Life is like an onion;you peel it off one layer at a time,and sometimes you weep.人生如同洋葱，你一次剥一层，有时你会流泪28.Food is to the body as fuel is to the engine.食物之于身体，如同燃料之于发动机29.The travellers have fallen in love with local produce.They cannot believe that the tomatoes are as big as apples,and the apples look like the size of baseballs.旅行者们已经爱上了的当地特产他们不敢相信蕃茄大如苹果，而苹果看起来像棒球一樣大30.Gwen often becomes green with envy whenever her classmates receive better grades or awards for outstanding achievements,and she would turn into a green-eyed monster.每当她的同学们得到更好的成绩或领取杰出成就的奖，Gwen是嫉妒到脸都发绿，俨然变成一双绿眼怪兽了(表示非常嫉妒)!Metaphor暗喻，是将某一事物的名称用于另一事物，通过比较形成，从而更生动，更深刻地说明事理，增强语言的表现力。

1.Time is money.2.The stars are sparkling diamonds.3.The curtain of night fell upon us.4.Life is a journey.5.Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.6.Books are the keys to your imagination.7.Spending too much time with him is worse than swimming in a sea of sharks.8.Her hair was a flowing golden river streaming down her shoulders.9.Im drowning in a sea of grief.10.The typical teenage boys room is a disaster area.11.Shes going through a rollercoaster of emotions.12.Kathy arrived at the grocery store with an army of children.13.You light up my life.14.I was lost in a sea of nameless faces.15.Life contains nothing but clear skies up ahead.16.My heart swelled with a sea of tears.17.The clouds sailed across the sky.18.Todays lecture gave me a lot of food for thought.19.Laughter is the music of the soul.20.A blanket of snow covered the ground.22.The teacher planted the seeds of wisdom.23.Books are the mirrors of the soul.24.Eyes are windows to the soul.25.Let us be grateful to people who make us happy,they are the charming gardeners who make our souls blossom.26.The skies of his future began to darken.27.Laughter is the best medicine.28.Her voice is music to his ears.Personification拟人，是把无生命的事物当有生命的事物描写，赋予无生命之物以感情和动作或是把动物人格化，使语言生动，形象，更有感染力。

1.The stars danced playfully in the moonlit sky.2.The first rays of morning tiptoed(踮着脚走tpt)through the meadow.3.She did not realize that opportunity was knocking at her door.4.He did not realize that his last chance was walking out the door.5.The river swallowed the earth as the water continued to rise higher and higher.6.Slowly,the city began to breathe again.7.Time flew and before we knew it,it was time for me to go home.8.The moon winked at me through the clouds above.9.The ocean danced in the moonlight.10.The words appeared to leap off of the paper as she read the story.11.While making my way to my car,it appeared to smile at me mischievously(淘气地mstvsl).12.The news took me by surprise.13.The fire ran wild.14.The thunder clapped angrily in the distance.15.The storm attacked the town with great 。