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六级作文新题型模版第一段1. I assume that you are familiar with the words of sb., who once said, “谚语.” 2. Definitely, 对谚语的解释.3. It is obvious that……中心句.第二段1. Simple as sb’s remark may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the significance of X(the ability of solving problems).2. why does X play an indispensable role in our life ?3. X enables us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize our dreams more rapidly（看情况修改其中的措辞）.4. ……（自己扩展一句）5. Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of X, however, I can think of no better illustration than the following one: how could 例子人物 do … if he failed to do X ?（反问句，如果谁不做sth他就不可能成功之类的）第三段1. From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of sth.2. Accordingly，we should …… and always bear in mind that sth can ……（我们应该怎么样并且记住sth可以怎么样）3. “自己编个谚语.” A famous philosopher also once said.下面五篇为范文，仔细品味Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Unity breeds success by commenting on Albert Einstein’s famous remark, “A snowflake is one of God’s most fragile creations, but look what they can do when they stick together!” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.Unity breeds success　　1. I assume that you are familiar with the words of Einstein, who once said, “A snowflake is one of God’s most fragile creations, but look what they can do when they stick together!” 2. Definitely, a snowflake is easy to melt when it lands on the soil. However, when falling on the ground together, they can create a snow-wrapped world with splendid scene. 3. It is obvious that unity transforms snowflake’s vulnerability into strength.　　1.Simple as Einstein’s remark may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the significance of unity. 2. Why does unity play an indispensable role in our life? 3. Unity enables us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize our dreams more rapidly. 4. In such a competitive world of today, it is not personal strength that the achievement of any course depends on; it condenses the energies of a group. 5. To further demonstrate the importance of unity, I would like to take Chinese Communist Party as a case in point, how could she achieve the victory of Anti-Japanese War if she failed to unite Chinese people of all ethnic groups ?　　1. From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of unity. 2. Accordingly, we should foster the consciousness of unity and always bear in mind that unity can create miracles no matter what obstacles we meet. 3. “Many hands make light work.” John Heywood also once said. (234 words)　　我觉你应该对爱因斯坦说过的一句话非常熟悉，叫做“一片雪花是上帝最脆弱的创造物之一，但他们抱在一起的时候却令人刮目相看。

确实，一片雪花，降落在地，极易融化消失然而，当很多雪花一起飘落人间，他们足以创造出片银装素裹的美景很明显，正是团结，将雪花从脆弱变得强大　　尽管爱因斯坦的话听起来很简单，但却包含了丰富的人生哲理，并告诉我们团结很重要为什么团结会在我们的生活当中扮演重要的角色呢？团结可以使我们更顺利地达成目标、更快速地实现梦想在竞争如此激烈的当今世界，任何事情的成功都无法仅仅依靠一个人的力量，而需要凝结整个团队的力量为了进一步证明团结的重要性，我想以中国共产党为例，如果中国共产党没有团结各族人民的力量，她怎么可能去的抗日战争的胜利呢？　　在我看来，我们任何时候都不能忽视团结的重要性因此，我们应该培养团结的意识，并且永远铭记在心，只要团结，不管遇到什么样的困难，我们都能够创造奇迹约翰.伍德也曾经说过“众人拾柴火焰高Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Actions Speak Louder Than Words by commenting on William Penn’s famous remark “A man, like a watch, is to be valued by this manner of going” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.Actions Speak Louder Than Words“A man, like a watch, is to be valued by this manner of going .” I assume that you are familiar with William Penn’s remark. The watch is crucial for every individual, because it tells the time by moving constantly. It is obvious that a man is of little value if he fail to act like a watch.　　William Penn’s remark aims at informing us of the significance of taking actions. We can not emphasize the importance of actions too much. Action will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly. The more action we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination. To further demonstrate the importance of A, I would like to take a famous Chinese fable story as a case in point. How could the “foolish old man” who dreamed of removing the mountain in front of his gate finally achieve his dream without taking constant actions ?　　From my perspective , at no time should we ignore the value of actions. Accordingly, not only should us posses a great dream, but we also should take actions to make it come true. “actions speak louder than words.” A philosopher also once said. (205 words)　　威廉.佩恩（英国海军上将）曾说：“一个人的价值，就好比手表，是由他不断的行动来决定的。

手表对于每个人都很重要，因为它通过一刻不停的移动来告诉人们时间很明显，一个人如果不想手表那样的行动，也就价值甚微了　　威廉.佩恩的话目的在于告诉我们采取行动的重要性我们再怎么强调行动的重要性也不为过行动能使我们更顺利地实现目标、更快速地实现梦想我们采取的行动越多，我们就越能积累经验、掌握技巧并且接近目标为了进一步证明行动的重要性，我想以一个著名的中国寓言故事做为例子：梦想移走门前大山的愚公，如果不采取持续的行动，怎么能实现他这个巨大的梦想呢？　　在我们看来，任何时候我们都不应该忽视行动的价值因此，我们不仅应该拥有梦想，还需要采取行动去实现一位哲学家也曾经说过“行胜于言”Directions:。