九年级英语上册 Unit 5 Look into Science主题写作五导学课件 （新版）冀教版.ppt

单元主题写作五单元主题写作五Unit￿5￿￿Look￿into￿Science单元主题写作五Unit￿5￿￿Look￿into￿Science话题分析话题分析 本单元的话题为本单元的话题为“谈论科学谈论科学”通过本单元的学习，学生要通过本单元的学习，学生要能够用英语表达出科技对人们日常生活产生的影响写作此话能够用英语表达出科技对人们日常生活产生的影响写作此话题时多采用一般现在时态题时多采用一般现在时态单元主题写作五典型例题典型例题 2016•南充改编南充改编 对于对于“中学生在校是否可以使用中学生在校是否可以使用”，不同，不同学生有不同的看法，请你根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短文，向某学生有不同的看法，请你根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短文，向某英语报社投稿英语报社投稿单元主题写作五观点观点赞成赞成反对反对理由理由1. 便于联系便于联系2. 获取信息获取信息1. 浪费时间浪费时间2. 危害身心健康危害身心健康你的观点及理由你的观点及理由要求：要求： 1.包含所有要点，不逐字翻译，围绕要点适当发挥；包含所有要点，不逐字翻译，围绕要点适当发挥；2．文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等；．文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等；3．．100词左右。

词左右思路点拨思路点拨 单元主题写作五开篇点题开篇点题Different students have different opinions about it.具体描写具体描写Some students think… However, some…表达看法表达看法In my opinion, students can’t use…素材积累素材积累 常用短语常用短语1．花费时间做某事．花费时间做某事________________2．对．对……有益有益/害处害处________________3．远离．远离________________4．依靠；依赖．依靠；依赖________________5．与．与……联系联系________________spend time doing sth单元主题写作五be good/bad forstay away fromdepend onkeep in touch with常用句子常用句子1．．It's convenient for us to keep in touch with others.2．．It can also cause many problems.3．．It also has bad effects on us students.单元主题写作五高分模板高分模板 Nowadays, ①①more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it. Some students think they can use mobile phones at school. ②②First, it's convenient for them to call their parents, teachers or friends. Second, they can search what they need on mobile phones. For example, they can look up new words and look through news.单元主题写作五 ③③However, some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time. Many students spend too much time on games and . Besides, it's unhealthy for the mind and the body, such as hurting eyes, making some bad friends. ④④In my opinion, students can't use mobile phones at school. It's bad for their health and study.单元主题写作五名师点评名师点评①①开篇点题。

开篇点题more and more的使用体现出使用的人数之多的使用体现出使用的人数之多②② first, second的恰当运用使文章层次分明的恰当运用使文章层次分明③③转折词转折词however运用巧妙，自然过渡到使用的弊端上运用巧妙，自然过渡到使用的弊端上④④In my opinion的使用引出了自己的观点，结构完整的使用引出了自己的观点，结构完整单元主题写作五小试身手小试身手 2016•天水天水 随着使用的日益广泛，随着使用的日益广泛，“作业帮作业帮”等运用软等运用软件出现，现在，又有了新的用途件出现，现在，又有了新的用途——随时查找作业答案随时查找作业答案部分学生认为：有时作业太多，太难，不得不向求助部分学生认为：有时作业太多，太难，不得不向求助自己的观点：自己的观点：1. 抄写答案不能提高学生的学习能力，只能阻止学生抄写答案不能提高学生的学习能力，只能阻止学生 思考；思考； 2. 恰当运用网络，不依赖网络恰当运用网络，不依赖网络单元主题写作五注意：注意：1. 文中应包括提示观点，可以适当发挥，增加自己的看法，文中应包括提示观点，可以适当发挥，增加自己的看法， 使内容更连贯，更合理；使内容更连贯，更合理； 2. 80词左右。

开头已给出，不计入总词数开头已给出，不计入总词数参考词汇：参考词汇：the students' abilities, make proper use of Some students now have a new use for the Internet—use mobile phones to find out the answers to their homework. But different people have different ideas about it. _______________________________________________________________________________________单元主题写作五单元主题写作五One possible version：： Some students now have a new use for the Internet—use mobile phones to find out the answers to their homework. But different people have different ideas about it. Some students think that they have so much homework every day that they don't have enough time. And some of the problems are too hard for them to work out. So they have to use mobile phones to find out the answers. However, I think copying the answers can't improve the students' abilities, and may make them stop thinking. In my opinion, we can make proper use of the Internet and can't depend on it. Studying online can be a way to help study, but the best way is to study by ourselves.。