中考英语书面表达六步法.ppt

主要特点记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明二、对策1．背诵是个好方法2. 基本句型的训练(1)主语+谓语(2)主语+系动词+表语（adj./n）(3)主+谓+宾(4)主+谓+双宾语(5)主+谓+宾+宾补(6)There be…2．适当使用过渡词 为了使所写短文通顺、连贯，句子与句子之 间过渡自然，适当加上一些表示并列、递进 、因果、转折等关系的过渡词是很有必要的 常见的过渡词有： 递进型：besides，what's more，let alone， to say nothing of，what was worse, moreover even等；解释型：that is（to say），in other words， or，in the same way，等； 转折型：however，but，yet，although， otherwise, instead等； 列举型：firstly…secondly…finally，first， at first，at last，next,举例型：for example, such as, that is, like,等 ； 因果型：because（of），since，as， therefore，so，as a result，thanks to，thus ，owing to，seeing that等； 让步型：though，although，in spite of等； 时序型：first…next…and then…finally，at the same time，meanwhile， first…then…after that…finally等； 并列型：and，or，also，as well as等； 时间型：now，just now，just then，afterwards ，soon，five minutes later，before long，shortly after that，to this day，soon after supper等；强调型：above all，indeed，surely，certainly， of course，after all，at least，at most，first of all，等； 归纳总结型：in conclusion，in a word，in the end，at last，finally，to sum up, in short, in general, generally speaking, in all, in a word等； 转换话题型：by the way，I'm afraid，in my opinion，to tell the truth，to be honest，after all ，in fact等。

能力要求主要问题 要点不全 线索不清原因：步骤不对书面表达六六 步步 法法抄改 连扩抓审书面 表达书面表达六步法书面表达六步法一、审题确定基本要素:5W1H何 时 何 地 何 人 为 何 如 何 做 了 何 事书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为What happened?书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Who did what?书面表达六步法四、连句成文时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误书面表达六步法六、誊写卷面不工整扣5分课堂练习请用六步法 写一篇短文五个 “W”一个 “H”第一步 审题认真读题然后找出把答案写在题中相应的位置NMET2000NMET2000书面表达书面表达n n假设你是李华，在美国探亲假设你是李华，在美国探亲20002000年年2 2月月8 8 日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故警察局让日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故警察局让 你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况根据下你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况根据下 列图画写出报告列图画写出报告1 1、目击者应该准确报告事实；、目击者应该准确报告事实；2 2、词数、词数100100左右；左右；3 3、结尾已为你写好。

结尾已为你写好n_____________________________________ ____ About two minutes later I stopped a About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.hospital.Li Li HuaHua附图 1234At 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000, I saw a woman driving a car hit the man in the street.第二步 抓要点一幅图，一要点一幅图，一要点时态直达 语态到位 介/副词紧随抓要点，配动词抓要点，配动词第三步 扩展成句把要点变成完整 的句子 注意使用介/副词第四步 连句成文增加细节 呼应首尾句与句相连词与词搭配第五步 查错改错主谓一致吗？ 时态正确吗？时态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？第六步 誊写卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！作业选评要改进吗？ 为什么？①①At 7:15 a.m.At 7:15 a.m. on the morning ofon the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000Feb. 8th, 2000, I , I was headingwas heading east east on the south side ofon the south side of the Park Road, the Park Road, takingtaking my morning walk my morning walk as usualas usual. . ②I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park. ③He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing. ④The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit the elder hard.⑤⑤I I thoughtthought the driver the driver would would have stopped to helphave stopped to help, , butbut she she didn'tdidn't. . ⑥⑥InsteadInstead, , she she justjust drove offdrove off, , leavingleaving the old the old man still man still lyinglying on the on the groundground in painin pain. . ⑦⑦FortunatelyFortunately, , I I noted downnoted down the detailsthe details: : it it waswas a yellow cara yellow car, , the plate number the plate number ofof whichwhich waswas AC864AC864, , andand the driverthe driver waswas a a young ladyyoung lady. . ⑧⑧AfterAfter that that, , I I went over towent over to check outcheck out the old the old man.man.About two minutes laterAbout two minutes later I I stoppedstopped a passing car a passing car andand tooktook the old man to the the old man to the nearest hospital.nearest hospital. Li Li HuaHua年轻妇女颜色：黄AC864小结n审题，抓 点n造句，成 文n改错，誉 写作业n复习本课要 点n背诵精彩范 文二、注意两个写作技巧 1．用词造句要扬长避短 ①I spent two thousand yuan on the colour TV set． ②I spent two thousand yuan in buying the colour TV set． ③The colour TV set cost me two thousand yuan． ④Two thousand yuan was spent on the colour TV set ． ⑤I paid two thousand yuan for the colour TV set． ⑥I used two thousand yuan to buy the colour TV set ．怎样做看图作文一、写作技巧 1．认真阅读文字说明、参考词语和画面，确 定作文体裁。

2．仔细观察画面，抓住题目中心3．编写提纲1）描写的顺序；2）段落的安排二、写作实例假若下面图画中的学生就是你，根据以下六 幅图画，用英语写一篇故事 生词：calling card名片 注意：1．故事须包括所有图画的内容，可以 适当增加细节，使故事连贯2．词数100左 右 我们可以分三步来写这个故事 第一步：确定体裁第二步：确定主题第三步：编写提纲这个故事的提纲为： 1）我放学回家 2）我在323路公共汽车站附近捡到一个钱包 3）我打开钱包 4）钱包里有许多钱和一张名片 5）我给失主打 6）我在323路公共汽车站等候失主 7）失主前来认领钱包 8）失主表示感谢 。