高中英语 Unit 13 People writing课件 北师大版必修5.ppt

Make notes about the first time you met someone in this class.Stand out, tell the others about your description. See which one can guess who you are talking about.Leading in Write a description of a person you like with 120 words. You can write about your family, a friend or a famous person.GUIDED WRITING【【写作任务写作任务】】Stage 1 题材分析题材分析人物类文章属于人物类文章属于记叙文记叙文，， 要求我们抓住人物的要求我们抓住人物的典型事例、典型行为来刻画人物的特征行文中典型事例、典型行为来刻画人物的特征行文中要把握好时间、地点、时间等记叙文的要素要把握好时间、地点、时间等记叙文的要素注意注意：：1.1.人物的基本要素要全面、立体地反映人物的基本要素要全面、立体地反映出来对所有情节要突出重点，详略得当；出来对所有情节要突出重点，详略得当； 2.2.写作可根据需要采用顺序、倒叙、插叙等写作可根据需要采用顺序、倒叙、插叙等不同的记叙方式，以突出重点信息；不同的记叙方式，以突出重点信息； 3.3.写在过程要注意人称和时态的正确运用。

写在过程要注意人称和时态的正确运用描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历事迹等用一般过描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历事迹等用一般过去时；描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等时常用一般去时；描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等时常用一般现在时1.Decided who you are going to write about:What is the person’s name? Where does he/she live ?What kind of person is he/ she? ……Stage2 2. Write some notes in the form of a diagramExample:Stage3 Paragraph 1 Introduce the person and give a bit of background, e.g. where he/she was born, where he/she lives now, his/her job, his/her likes and dislikes.Paragraph 2Describe the person’s physical appearance (but not too many details), personality and characterParagraph 3Give some examples of the person’s behavior or relationships with other people.Paragraph 4Give some examples of the person’s family life.Stage 4话题词语汇聚话题词语汇聚1.1.外貌特征外貌特征大眼睛大眼睛圆脸圆脸雪白的牙齿雪白的牙齿可爱的笑容可爱的笑容灰色的头发灰色的头发长得好看长得好看浓浓的八字胡浓浓的八字胡big eyesa round facewhite teetha lovely smilegrey hairgood-lookinga thick moustache______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.2.年龄年龄很老很老年轻的年轻的中年的中年的二十多岁二十多岁三十多岁三十多岁very oldyoungmiddle-agedin his/her twentiesin his/her thirties__________________________________________________________________________________________他五十多岁的时候，开始学习钢琴。

他五十多岁的时候，开始学习钢琴In his fifties, he began to learn the piano.———————————————————3.3.教育状况教育状况学士学位学士学位硕士学位硕士学位 博士学位博士学位bachelor’s degree master’s degreedoctor’s degree2004年她去了北京大学年她去了北京大学4年后他从英语系毕业年后他从英语系毕业.She went to Beijing University in 2004.She graduated from English department after 4 years.4.4.特长爱好特长爱好听音乐听音乐看电视看电视读书读书踢足球踢足球旅游旅游下棋下棋listen to musicwatch TVread booksplay football/soccertravelingplay chess____________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.1.我叔叔喜欢动物，尤其喜欢狗。

我叔叔喜欢动物，尤其喜欢狗My uncle loves animals, especially dogs.2.2.她讨厌垃圾食品，比如汉堡包她讨厌垃圾食品，比如汉堡包She hates junk food such as hamburgers.3.3.我喜欢海伦，因为她对生活很乐观我喜欢海伦，因为她对生活很乐观I like Helen because she is optimistic about life.4.4.他如此的勤奋，以至于工作起来不分昼夜他如此的勤奋，以至于工作起来不分昼夜He was so diligent that he worked day and night.Stage 5连词成句连词成句5.5.奶奶很受邻居欢迎，可能是因为她爱帮助别人奶奶很受邻居欢迎，可能是因为她爱帮助别人Grandma is very popular with her neighbors, maybe because she is so helpful.My aunt Stage 6My aunt is called Lily. She is thirty years old and she lives with my grandma in a flat near school. She is a teacher. She loves children and animals, especially dogs, although she hates their claws! Her favorite thing to eat is dumplings. She doesn’t like junk food, because they are bad for the health.My aunt has long, dark hair and clear brown eyes. She is tall and a bit thin. She is a very optimistic lady and always smiles to others.She is very popular with her students, maybe because she is so friendly and helpful. For example, she often looks after her students and play with them after school. She has a boyfriend. They love each other and plan to get married in summer holidays. It is so happy for the whole family to hear this good news!。