初中英语作文辅导Changesinmyhometown.doc

凯里博思教育——学生英语作文 优秀作文选1. My hometownMy hometown—(________), which is in the southeast of (________), (_______)Province, is a very beautiful town. Let me tell you my beautiful hometown.My grandmother tells me:more than thirty years ago, my hometown was just a small and poor town, the people there didn't have enough food or clothes，they led a hard life. But now, people have found a lot of ways of making money. People don't worry food or clothes any more. In the past, the people from village got into the street on foot. Now ,they can take buses or drive their own cars to go work. In old days, they lived in their old houses, now most of them have new houses and have color TV sets, cell phones, personal computers and so on. People's living condition have improved a lot.Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past thirty years indeed. We can see tall buildings, factories, schools, hospitals and new roads everywhere.I love my hometown. I must study hard to make it build more beautiful.点评：这是一篇优秀习作。

作者首先介绍家乡的地理位置，是个美丽的地方第二段采用对比和排比的手法，描写家乡的过去和现在，形成明显的对比，可以看出家乡变化之大凯里博思教育——学生英语作文 结尾段前后照应，提出希望，文章严谨，中心突出 2.Changes in my hometownMany changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. It used to be a beautiful small town. There was a river running around the hometown,we could see all kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. In my hometown we could also see many trees here and there, the air was very fresh. Good environment made us happy. However, with the development of the industry, lots of trees have been cut down. Now we can see tall buildings and factories everywhere. Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious.I love my hometown very much. We must do something useful to stop pollution and make our hometown even more beautiful.点评：作者通过对家乡的变化，采用对比的手法，描写家乡过去是个环境优美的小镇，现在虽然是高楼林立、工厂遍布，但污染越来越严重，暗示人们重视。

结尾一段紧扣主题，提出号召，控制污染，把家乡变得更加美丽本文多种时态与句式的运用，使得文章结构紧凑，自然现在完成时 Many changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. “There be"句型的使用，被动语态运用 lots of trees have been cut down. 比较级的使用 Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious 等等整篇文章写得较为成功，若能把家乡凯里博思教育——学生英语作文 变化描写得详细些那更好了3、Great changes in my hometownMore than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government’s efforts . my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .4、Save the earthHow to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world .It’s our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and 凯里博思教育——学生英语作文 we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life willbe better and better .5、Improve our environmentGood environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What should we do to improve our environment ?We should plant more trees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . Don’t spit in public places . Don’t draw on public walls . It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy .6、Pollution around usIn recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. It’s very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving 凯里博思教育——学生英语作文 only sand ) . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We haven’t enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. It’s very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .7、Make our world more beautiful !Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans . It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us . Animals and plants are our best fri。