新高考专题03求助信-2020年高考英语书面表达真题变形冲分练(word版).doc

No.3求助信 步骤内容1考点综述2真题再现（2016全国I求助外教Ms Jenkins修改简历）3要点总结（结构及实例说明、常用词汇和常用短语）4题型变化之语法填空5题型变化之短文改错6模拟强化一 因无法集中精力学习向外籍心理老师Kate求助7模拟强化二 因参加speech contest遇到的困难向朋友求助 1． 考点综述 求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决或理解的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信书写时应注意：语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢2． 真题再现1.【题目要求】（2016年新课标全国卷I）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯2.【范文品读】Dear MS Jenkins,　I’m Li Hua. I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I am not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and format.I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to your reply.　　Yours,　　Li Hua3． 要点总结（1） 求助信结构以及实例说明 告知信通常包括三部分内容：1. 点明求助内容；2. 具体说明求助内容；3. 再次表示期望和感谢。

　（说明求助内容）I’m Li Hua. I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I am not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice. （具体说明求助内容）Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and format.（再次表示感谢和期望）I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to your reply.2.【求助信常用词汇】1.havetrouble/difficulty(in)doingsth. 做某事有困难2.dosb. afavor/givesb. ahand 给某人帮助3.askforhelp/seekforhelp 寻求帮助4.encountersomeproblems 遇到一些问题5.bebusy/occupied/engagedindoingsth.忙于做某事7.makepreparationsfor.…为某事做准备9.put...inuse 学以致用10.letsb. down 让某人失望11.overcomethefear克服恐惧12.beanxious/eagertodosth./longtodosth.渴望做某事13.takethetroubletodosth. 费心地去做某事14.offersomeconstructiveguidance提供一些有益的指导15.begrateful/thankful/appreciativetosb.forsth.因某事感激某人3.【求助信常用句型结构】1. Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。

2. I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.我希望你能帮我一个忙3. I wonder ifyoucoulddome a fvour, this is the first time that my uncle visits us...我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙，因为这是...4. Would you like to do me a favor to ...你是否能够帮个...6. I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot.我遇到了使我困惑的问题7. To begin with,… What’s more, … What troubles me most is …8. Unfortunately,Ifind/feelitquite/extremely difficult/hard to do with...不幸的是，我发现很难处理/对待...9. I havetrouble/difficulty/problems(in)doingsth.我在...遇到了困难10. Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp. 面对以上困难，我渴望得到你的帮助。

11. I wonder if can help me with these difficulties. 我很想知道，你是否能够帮助我解决这些困难12. I would appreciate it very much if you can offer me some necessary/timely help(give/lend me some practical/valuable advice)如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助（给我一些实用的/有价值的建议）我会很感激4． 题型变化之语法填空 　I’m Li Hua. I plan to take a part-time job ___1___a foreign company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the ___2___(apply) form and ___3___(have) my resume ready for it. However, I am not sure __4____ the words and format. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help and ___5___(profession) advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials __6____(attach)? Would you mind ___7___(find) out the mistakes in terms of words ___8___format? Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes ___9___(find) in the materials and format.I would much appreciate it____10__ you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to your reply.5． 题型变化之短文改错　I’m Li Hua. I plan to take part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I had already filled in the application form and had your resume ready for it. However, I am not sure about the words or format. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please to spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind to find out the mistakes in terms about words and format? Beside, I’d like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and format.I would much appreciate that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to your reply.6． 模拟强化【Writing 1】 假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了-些问题导致无法集中精力学习。

于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助要点如下: 1.作业多，没有时间运动2. 压力大，难以入睡3.希望得到Kate的帮助注意:词数100左右Writing 2】 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 (speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件:1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况;2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙;3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他注意: 1.词数:120-150; 2.可适当增加。