备战2022届新高考英语读后续写真题解析专题专练七人与动物类.doc

备战2022届新高考英语读后续写真题解析专题专练专题07 人与动物类一、 真题链接（2020年7月浙江卷）One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal：to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws（爪子）. I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter（相遇）, I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’ t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar（吼叫）, the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________At that very moment, the helicopter arrived._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、真题解析2.1 整体把握：主题语境人与自然--人与环境、人与动植物语篇话题本篇读后续写为记叙文，文章大意为我和妻子想要给北极熊拍照，旅程中我们食物的味道吸引来了北极熊，让我们与熊面对面的惊险故事。

情节梳理故事要素when：one fallwhere：the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canadawho：my wife Elli and Iwhat：We wanted to take pictures of polar bears, and when we cooked, the bear appeared and we met the wild animal face to face.情节走向通过第一段首句“A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.”可预测，续写思路为：熊吼叫--我们害怕--趁机拍照--等待救援通过第二段首句“At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.”可预测，续写思路为：我们兴奋--与熊斗争--最终脱险2.2逐句写作：第一段：1. 咆哮和尖叫声以针状的刺耳刺破了寂静Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness. 2. 噪音把埃利和我吓得脸色发白。

我担心巨人会毁掉我们的整个栅栏The noises turned Elli and I pale with horror. I feared that the giant would destroy our whole fence. 3. 他不停地咆哮，打破了沉默He roared repeatedly, shattering what was left of the silence. 4. 埃利抓住这个机会给这只熊拍了几张照片动物的声音在我们周围回荡Elli seized this opportunity to take some pictures of the bear. The animal’s noises echoed all around us. 5. 我们蜷缩在一起，害怕得发抖，这暴露了我们的感觉We betrayed our feelings by huddling together, shivering with fear. 6. 在彻底检查了这个地区之后，他小跑了几步After thoroughly scrutinizing the area, he trotted forward a few steps.第二段：7. 当我知道我们很可能得救时，我的心高兴得跳了起来。

埃利又用胡椒喷雾为我们争取了足够的时间My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved. Elli used pepper spray again to buy us enough time. 8. 但这一次，熊变得更加警觉了他把我们看成是饥饿的无情需求，所以我们扔掉所有的食物But this time the bear became more alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger, so we throw all the food we have. 9. 然后他转身走开，开始吞食当我们爬上绳梯时，埃利祈祷了上千次，以表示对安全和健康的感谢He then turned away and started devouring. As we were climbing the rope ladder, Elli prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound.2.3 范文赏析A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness. The noises turned Elli and I pale with horror. I feared that the giant would destroy our whole fence. He roared repeatedly, shattering what was left of the silence. Elli seized this opportunity to take some pictures of the bear. The animal’s noises echoed all around us. We betrayed our feelings by huddling together, shivering with fear. After thoroughly scrutinizing the area, he trotted forward a few steps. At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. My heart leaped with joy as I 。