Unit2SectionⅦWriting——书面通知

1、Section Writing 建议信写作技法指导 文体指导 本单元的写作项目属于新课标中应用文体类别中的“建议信”。这类题目要求我们就有关问题进行分析并针对这个问题提出自己的看法和建议。一、基本结构1开头 (beginning) 开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)。2主体 (body) 对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议 (reasons and evidence)。3结尾 (ending) 呼应开头，重申观点 (restate your opinion)。二、注意事项1开门见山，直入主题。在建议信正文的开头找准话题的切入点，自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。写信时要充分了解情况， 有的放矢， 以提高建议信的针对性。2给出希望对方采取或者终止某种行为的理由。在陈述理由的过程中要换位思考，尽量为对方考虑。要用事实说话，以增强说服力。3语气要和缓，让对方考虑你的想法或者建议，以理服人是关键，不能把自己的想法强加于人。4给出合理建议，通过提建议让对方明确行动的方向，从而达到写信的最终目的。亮点句式 A建议信开头常用句式1I am sorry t

2、o know that you are worried about the coming exam.了解到你对即将到来的考试很担心我很难过。2Im glad that you are getting along well with your study.我很高兴你的学业进展顺利。3You asked me in your letterhow to get on with your deskmate.你在信中问及如何与你的同桌相处。B表达建议常用句式第 1页4You dont have to worry aboutit.你不必为此事担心。5First，try to invite some of your good friends to take partin after- classactivities.首先，尽量邀请你的一些好友参加课外活动。6Whats more，help others when theyre in trouble.此外，当别人有困难时帮助他们。7In my opinion，you should find a chance to talk with her.依我看，你

3、应该找机会与她谈谈。C建议信结尾常用句式8I hope these suggestions will helpyou.我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。9Im sure youll make it.我相信你能行。10 I hope everything goes well with you.我希望你万事如意。满分佳作构建 写作任务 高一新生或多或少都会经历所谓“成长的烦恼”。如高中学习难度的增加使得学生的压力增大； 新同学之间的不了解导致小误会时而发生；部分同学由于肥胖而感到自卑； 不少同学因为琐事与父母发生冲突，这些都让青少年对于高中生活感到沮丧和困惑。针对这一现象， 校刊编辑部发起了以“成长的烦恼”为主题的征文活动，请你 (Tom)给高一的同学写一封信，就这个话题的某一两个你感受最深的方面谈谈你的看法，同时提出适当的建议来帮助高一的学生树立正确的态度。注意：词数 100 左右。 审题谋篇 体裁建议信时态一般现在时主题成长的烦恼人称第一、二人称第 2页第一部分，开头：概括介绍我们的现状及存在的问题并提出自己的观点；结构第二部分，阐述：对自己的观点、建议进一步说明；第三部分，总结：我们会有光

4、明的未来。遣词造句 .对接单元词汇1go through经历，体现2confused感到困惑的3normal正常的4balance平衡5argument争吵6tend往往，趋向.巧用单元句式、语法(一 )完成句子1我们正在成长的过程中， 因此对我们来说经历一些身体的变化是正常的。 We are in the process of growing up ，so it is normal that we experience somebody changes.2真正重要的是，我们应该保持均衡的饮食。It really matters that we should keep a balanced diet【导学号： 67302020】3除此之外，我们经常与我们的父母或朋友发生争论。其原因是我们越来越成熟，我们逐渐倾向于相信自己。Besides，we often have arguments with our parents or our friends，and the reasonis that we are becoming more and more mature，so we gradu

5、ally tend to believe inourselves.4为了解决这个问题，我认为我们应该更多地和家人、朋友及老师交流。第 3页To solve this problem，I think we should talk to family ，friends and teachersmore.5沟通是一个你向别人表达感情的重要方式，然后他们能更好地理解你并帮助你。Communication is an important way to express your feelings to others，and then they can understand you better and help you.(二 )句式升级1用 it is adj.for sb.to do.升级句 1We are in the process of growing up， so it is normal for us to experience some body changes.2用 what 引导名词性从句作主语升级句2What really matters is that we should k

6、eep a balanced diet.3用 the reason why.is that.升级句 3【导学号： 67302021】Besides，the reason why we often have arguments with our parents or our friends is that we are becoming more and more mature，so we gradually tend to believe in ourselves.妙笔成篇 【参考范文】Dear Freshmen，At this moment，we are going through the“growing pains”，and some of us feel really confused and frustrated about our high school life.In my opinion，we have to be positive and try to make ourselves feel better.Firstly，we should not be ashamed

7、 of our figure.We are in the process of growing up，so it is normal for us to experience some body changes.What really matters is that we should keep a balanced diet.Besides，the reason why we often have arguments with our parents or our friends is that we are becoming more and more mature，so we gradually tend to believe in ourselves.To solve this problem，I think we should talk to family ，friends and teachers more. Communication is an important way to express your feelings to others，and then they can understand you better and help you.第 4页All in all ，I believe you will have a bright future.Best wishes.Yours sincerely，Tom第 5页

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