四级考试作文总结综合型.ppt

四级考试作文总结(综合型)司选海司选海sixuanhai@:332567896Tel: 13109515985（二）综合型（二）综合型命题形式命题形式提提 纲纲表达你自己的观点表达你自己的观点记叙文记叙文+说明文说明文+描写文描写文9/5/20249/5/20242 2与阐述型的区别与阐述型的区别一种情况或现象一种情况或现象综合型综合型阐阐述型述型一种情景或景象一种情景或景象9/5/20249/5/20243 3记叙文记叙文( (Narration) )描写文描写文( (Description) )说明文说明文（（Exposition））•时间、地点和人物时间、地点和人物•讲述事情的经过或描讲述事情的经过或描写当时的情景写当时的情景•自己的感受自己的感受写作要求写作要求9/5/20249/5/20244 4An Eye Witness Account of a Traffic Accident1.车祸发生的时间和地点车祸发生的时间和地点 2.你所见到的车祸的惨状你所见到的车祸的惨状3.你对车祸原因的分析你对车祸原因的分析A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction1.欢迎词欢迎词2.一天的行程安排一天的行程安排3.对游客即将参观的地点进行描述对游客即将参观的地点进行描述NarrationDescriptionExpositionExpositionDescription9/5/20249/5/20245 5综合型模板（第二段偏重于描写）综合型模板（第二段偏重于描写）要点：要点：①①事件发生的时间和地点事件发生的时间和地点 ② ②所见情况的描述所见情况的描述 ③ ③你对事件的分析你对事件的分析It was at/in ( (时间和地点时间和地点) ) that ( (事件事件) ) took place. . ( (简单叙述一两句简单叙述一两句) ). .I saw a terrible sight. . ( (描写情景，注意描写情景，注意描写的描写的顺序顺序) ) Two cars…. One car was…, and the other was…. The drivers were…. Some people…, and others were….In my opinion, three factors contributed to the accident. First, ( (第一原因第一原因). ). Second, ( (第二原因第二原因). ). Last,（第三原因（第三原因) ). . All this led to the accident. ( (结束语结束语) ) . .9/5/20249/5/20246 6综合型模板（第二段偏重于叙述）综合型模板（第二段偏重于叙述）要点：要点：①①事件发生的时间和地点事件发生的时间和地点 ② ②描述事件发生的经过描述事件发生的经过 ③ ③你的看法你的看法 It was( (时间和地点时间和地点) ) that ( (事件事件) ) took place. ( (简单叙述一两句简单叙述一两句) ). I saw a terrible sight. ( (描写情景，注意描写的描写情景，注意描写的顺序顺序) To begin with, … And then, …. Eventually, ... As a consequence, ... In my opinion, three factors contributed to the accident. First, ( (第一原因第一原因) ). Second, ( (第二原因第二原因).). Last,（第三原因（第三原因).). All this led to the accident. ( (结结束语束语) ).9/5/20249/5/20247 7第一段、总结性描述第一段、总结性描述　　交代清楚故事涉及的　　交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地人物、时间、地点点：： 主题句主题句第二段、具体描述第二段、具体描述　　具体描述事件　　具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结发生的原因、经过和结 果果　　　　 起因＋经过＋结果起因＋经过＋结果第三段、对事件的分析第三段、对事件的分析　　　　 分析句分析句1+1+分析句分析句2+2+分析分析3 39/5/20249/5/20248 8Around eleven o’clock in the morning, I saw a traffic accident at the crossing of Jinhua Road near the Golden Flower Hotel. I was then waiting to cross the street at the traffic lights when I saw a man walking quickly trying to cross the road. He didn’t seem to notice that the traffic lights were red. Just then, a blue Iveco rushed towards him. The car was so fast that it couldn’t stop though the driver braked very hard. The brakes screeched when the car stopped but it was too late. It ran over the man.9/5/20249/5/20249 9I think three factors contributed to the accident. First, the man should have used the footbridge which was just near him. Second, he should have waited for the traffic lights to become green before he crossed the road. Last, the driver is to blame, too. He shouldn’t have driven so fast in such a busy street. All this led to the accident. Neither of the driver nor the man observed traffic regulations. That’s why the accident was inevitable.9/5/20249/5/20241010Class WorkDirections: Choose one of the following compositions to practice in class. 9/5/20249/5/20241111Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Favorite Programme. You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 我最喜爱的电视（或无线电）节目是我最喜爱的电视（或无线电）节目是......2. 这类节目的内容和特点这类节目的内容和特点3. 我喜欢它的原因我喜欢它的原因9/5/20249/5/20241212范文：范文：　　　　The News Report has always been my favorite TV program. Almost everyday I turn on the TV at 7：：00 p.m. and wait for the news program. This has become a part of my life.　　　　The News Report contains a large amount of information – from the international political situation to the latest foot-ball game. And the most important character is its fast pace. Because of this fast pace, news programs can contain much information in a short time. 　　　　In my opinion, the News Report is more than a TV program. It is a way of communication. From this program, people can know and understand world affairs. The world thus becomes smaller and smaller. I especially appreciate this benefit of watching the news. 9/5/20249/5/202413132005年年6月月For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay In Honor of Teachers on the occasion of Teacher's Day. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1 1、向老师表达节日祝贺、向老师表达节日祝贺2 2、从一件小事来回忆老师的教诲和无私、从一件小事来回忆老师的教诲和无私 的奉献的奉献3 3、我如何回报老师的关爱、我如何回报老师的关爱　　　　9/5/20249/5/20241414网络上给的范文：网络上给的范文：　　　　This is Teachers' Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers. This profession deserves the special recognition and respect. There is no more appropriate time than this to honor you and others in your chosen field. You have my eternal gratefulness. Have a happy Teachers' Day. The whole secret of the teacher's force lies in the conviction that men are convertible. Teacher, who educate children, deserve more honor than parents, who merely gave them birth; for the latter provided more life, while the former ensure a good life. What sculpture is to a block of marble, education is to the soul.　　　　My heartfelt thanks to you, dear teacher. On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me. What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view. On this day I honor you sincerely. No one deserves a bigger thank you than you. One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude9/5/20249/5/20241515 The Teacher’s Day is coming. Here are my best wishes for you, my dear teacher. One thing still impresses me. In 1983, we had a new classmate named Tom who had a bad leg and had to bicycle to school. One afternoon, one student let the air out of the tire of Tom’s bike. As a result, Poor Tom could not go back home. While we were amused about that, you took Tom’s bike to the nearest village which was more than one kilometer away. Later, we learned that it had taken you great trouble to borrow a pump from the villagers. We learned from you that time that we should help others instead of making fun of them. I think what could do to return your kindness is to study harder and become useful persons of our country. You have said that you would feel happy if your students are successful. 9/5/20249/5/20241616Assignment: A.Written TaskThe Report of a Theft 1. 1.偷窃发生的时间地点偷窃发生的时间地点 2.2.你所看到或者听说的偷窃过程你所看到或者听说的偷窃过程 3.3.以此故事为根据，进一步分析当前偷窃现象以此故事为根据，进一步分析当前偷窃现象猖獗的原因。

猖獗的原因B. Preview Section 4 ( pp155—157 )C. Check your self studies of the textbook.9/5/20249/5/202417179/5/20249/5/20241818。