读后续写：人与自然人鸟情未了学案- 高三英语二轮专题.docx

原文赏析❶I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western  Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.    ❷With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. （伏笔1 ）I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.     ❸ When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?  ❹ As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path （伏笔2 ）toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side.（细节描写1） Then she flew quickly out of sight.    ❺ During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. （伏笔3 ）As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. （细节描写2）For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good-bye.” 文章主题I rescued the hummingbird and she showed gratitude before flying away,which highlights the harmony between human beings and nature.人物I ,an old friend ,hummingbird故事梗概我被邀请野餐，看到废弃的挤奶房中，一个蜘蛛网困住了一只蜂鸟-----我救了那只蜂鸟，它从破产窗户中飞走----我准备离开时，蜂鸟认出了我，朝我尖叫，像是告别。

细节分析1.两段首句分析Para.1 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.情节预测①:I was invited by my old friend. The old friend mentioned the regular visit of the hummingbird. I waited but she didn’t come.情节预测②:I myself wanted to check the condition of the hummingbird. I searched the forest but didn’t see her. I felt lost.  Para.2 I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.情节预测（第二次邂逅）:What I saw, heard, touched and thought about the appearance of the hummingbird. What the hummingbird did. What I did and said; How I felt. What I reflected on this experience.2.挖掘伏笔，前后呼应原文（1）：I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house…A noise at a window caught my attention…They promised to fix the window. 续写（1）：My car pulled into the track leading to the milking house and stopped in front of the window, which obviously had been fixed.  (Para. 1 续写)This time, my old friend invited me to have a feast of self-made delicacies and joked that the hummingbird was waiting for my return. (Para. 1 续写)原文（2）：When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car…she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.…when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering... She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone.续写（2）：Suddenly, a squeak caught my attention. Following where the sound was coming, I stepped into the blackberry bushes and spotted a familiar tiny creature hovering in the air.（第二次邂逅细节）I moved closer. Upon seeing me approaching, instead of flying away, she hovered a while, then dived down and rested on my hand. Just like before, this tiny creature looked straight into my eyes and chanted a cheering song as if to celebrate our “reunion”.（第二次邂逅细节）She was sure to recognize me– she took wing from the branch and flew directly to me, hovering around within only six inches of my face and stared into my eyes for a long period of time. （第二次邂逅细节）原文（3）：Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good-bye.”续写（3）：Perhaps she had been waiting here for such a long time just to “reunite” with me! (Para. 2续写)“She must have come to meet you.” laughed the host. (Para. 2 续写)参考范文Para.1  A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. My car pulled into the track leading to the milking house and stopped in front of the window, which obviously had been fixed. When I was enjoying the refreshing air 。