2025届高考二轮复习读后续写Lily与Ethan跨越万水千山的友谊羁绊.docx

四川省泸州市高2022级第一次教学质量诊断性考试英语试卷第四部分 写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节（满分15分）假定你将参加学校组织的英语征文比赛，主题是“Our Land，Our Future”请你用英语写一篇短文，内容包括：1．土地的重要性；2．保护土地的建议注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Our Land,Our Future第二节 读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文In a quiet little town, there was a small park where children would laugh and play. In the center of this park stood a wooden swing set. Among the children, a nine-year-old girl named Lily had a special bond with this swing. Every day after school, she would rush to the park, her backpack bouncing against her back, and spend hours soaring through the air, her laughter mingling with the wind.Lily's best friend, Ethan, was a boy who lived next door. They were inseparable, sharing secrets, dreams, and endless adventures. Often, you would find them on those swings, their feet barely touching the ground, their imaginations taking them far beyond the confines of the playground. They dreamed of becoming astronauts, traveling to outer space, and discovering new worlds together.One sunny afternoon, Lily tested the limits of the swing. With a determined push, Ethan soared high, feeling the thrill as the swing reached its top. "Look, Lily! I'm flying!" Ethan shouted, his laughter ringing through the air. But not far from the park, his parents watched them with great concerns. There was an uneasy tension growing. When Ethan came down from the swing, his parents rushed to the swing and took him home immediately.Later that evening, Lily cried on the couch, her tears staining the fabric. "Mom, Ethan said he would not play with me anymore. Why?" she asked, worry pooling in her blue eyes. Her mother took a deep breath, but the words seemed to be trapped in her throat. "I'm not sure, sweetie. He... He might be leaving for a while.”Days turned into weeks, and the park felt emptier without Ethan's laughter. Each swing back and forth felt like a reminder of their vanished adventures. With every passing day, Lily's heart sank deeper into confusion and sorrow. She hoped that he would return, refusing to accept that he might not come back again.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1Eventually, Lily decided to write a letter to him.Paragraph 2The next day, Ethan showed up in the park as expected.第二节 读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文In a quiet little town, there was a small park where children would laugh and play(定从). In the center of this park stood a wooden swing set(完全倒装). Among the children, a nine-year-old girl named Lily(非谓语动词作后置定语) had a special bond with this swing. Every day after school, she would rush to the park, her backpack bouncing against her back(独立主格), and spend hours soaring through the air, her laughter mingling with the wind(独立主格).Lily's best friend, Ethan, was a boy who lived next door. They were inseparable, sharing secrets, dreams, and endless adventures(非谓语动词作伴随动作). Often, you would find them on those swings, their feet barely touching the ground(独立主格), their imaginations taking them far beyond the confines of the playground(独立主格). They dreamed of becoming astronauts, traveling to outer space, and discovering new worlds together.One sunny afternoon, Lily tested the limits of the swing. With a determined push, Ethan soared high, feeling the thrill(非谓语动词作伴随动作) as the swing reached its top(状从). "Look, Lily! I'm flying!" Ethan shouted, his laughter ringing through the air(独立主格). But not far from the park, his parents watched them with great concerns. There was an uneasy tension growing. When Ethan came down from the swing(状从), his parents rushed to the swing and took him home immediately.Later that evening, Lily cried on the couch, her tears staining the fabric(独立主格). "Mom, Ethan said he would not play with me anymore(宾从). Why?" she asked, worry pooling in her blue eyes(独立主格). Her mother took a deep breath, but the words seemed to be trapped in her throat. "I'm not sure, sweetie. He... He might be leaving for a while.”Days turned into weeks, and the park felt emptier without Ethan's laughter. Each swing back and forth felt like a reminder of their vanished adventures. With every passing day, Lily's heart sank deeper into confusion and sorrow. She hoped that he would return(宾从), refusing to accept(非谓语动词作伴随动作) that he might not come back again(宾从).注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1: Eventually, Lily decided to write a letter to him.Paragraph 2: The next day, Ethan showed up in the park as expected. 1. 高考读后续写分析 （1）文章类型分析这篇文章属于情感延续型读后续写文章描述了Lily和Ethan的深厚友谊，然而，由于Ethan的父母的干预，Lily失去了这个朋友续写部分需要续写Lily在失落中的情感反应及她的行动，并通过进一步的发展，恢复和升华Lily和Ethan的友谊 （2）思路构思 情感发展：文章的前半部分详细描述了Lily对Ethan失联的悲伤和困惑续写应该关注Lily如何从悲伤中走出，采取行动恢复这段友谊，并在情感上获得转折和升华 情节延续：续写的情节应该保持平和的情感延续，同时尽量让故事的结局富有温暖和正能量Lily的决定去写信反映出她的坚强和对友谊的渴望，而Ethan的回归则代表着情感的修复和希望的回升 布局与框架： 第一段： 情感过渡：写Lily在悲伤和迷茫中做出的决定—写信给Ethan通过这个行为，展现她依然不放弃友谊的坚定信念。

行动描写：详细描写Lily写信的情景，展现她的情感波动。