高考英语读后续写5个提分技巧+课件+-2025届高三下学期英语二轮复习专项.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,#,高考英语读后续写,5,个提分技巧,提升写作能力，轻松应对高考,Contents,与原文协同，自然过渡,设置一个小悬念,结尾,呼应前文,总结点题,留有余韵,与原文协同，自然过渡,续写部分要与前文在情节、人物、背景等方面高度契合,沿着既定的故事线合理延伸，自然过渡,开头要和前面的文章内容无缝衔接,方法：简单复述前文情节，让读者自然进入接下来的故事,例,1,As the sun was gradually setting in the west,casting an orange glow over everything,Tom,who had been exploring the woods with great enthusiasm,suddenly realized that he was still a long way from home.The shadows around him were stretching longer and longer.,夕阳渐渐西沉，给万物都披上了一层橙色的光辉。

汤姆原本满怀热情地在树林里探险，此时他突然意识到自己离家还很远周围的影子越来越长例,2,When Lucy caught sight of the undisguisable disappointment on her mothers face,her heart tightened,and she instantly realized that she had to take action to make amends.,当,Lucy,瞥见母亲脸上那难以掩饰的失望神情，她内心一紧，瞬间明白自己必须有所行动来弥补过失设置一个小悬念,为了吸引读者的注意力，让他们想知道下文会发生什么，设置一个小悬念设置小悬念时要简洁明了，不要啰嗦，直接切入正题，为后面的故事发展做好铺垫例,1,The decision was made,and there was no turning back.,决定已经做出，回头路已无可走例,2,With a sudden crash,the door flew open,revealing a sight that took their breath away.,突然，一声巨响，门被撞开，映入眼帘的景象让他们屏住了呼吸。

例,3,Outside the window,the sunlight still gently spilled onto the windowsill.In the room,it was so quiet that only her slightly unsteady breathing could be heard.What secret on earth did this letter hold?,窗外，阳光依旧温柔地洒在窗台，屋内静谧得只听得见她微微紊乱的呼吸这信，究竟藏着什么秘密？,例,4,It was a day like any other,or so they thought.,那一天似乎和往常一样，或者他们原以为是这样例,5,Her fingertips trembled slightly as she slowly pulled out the seemingly harmless letter from the envelope.,她指尖轻颤，将那封看似无害的信缓缓抽出信封例,6,Her life seemed as calm as still water,but the moment her eyes fell on those unfamiliar lines of writing on the letter,an indescribable chill shot up her spine.,她的生活看似平静如水，可当目光触及信上那几行陌生的字迹时，一股莫名的寒意从脊背蹿升。

例,7,This seemingly ordinary piece of paper was so thin and light that it seemed as if a single gust of wind could blow it away,yet it pressed down on her heart with a heavy sense of unease.So,what exactly was written in the letter?What earth-shattering changes awaited her?,这看似普通的纸张，轻薄得仿佛一阵风就能吹走，却在她心中压下了沉甸甸的不安那信里到底写了什么？等待她的又会是什么样的惊天变故？,结尾,呼应前文,结尾要和开头或者前文呼应，关键要回扣开头设定的情境、情感或关键情节,让文章形成一个完整的闭环，读者看完会觉得很舒服例,1,原文开头,It was a sunny Saturday morning,and Lily stood in front of her old,worn-out bicycle.Memories of countless adventures with her best friend,Tom,on this very bike flooded her mind.Tom had moved away last month,and Lily felt a deep sense of loneliness.She sighed,running her hand along the handlebars,and decided to take one last ride around the neighborhood.,续写结尾,例,1,As the sun set,Lily returned home on her old bike.Parking it in the original spot,she felt a sense of closure.The ride was full of memories of Tom,just like those in the morning.Now,the loneliness was replaced by warmth.She knew their friendship,symbolized by the bike,would last forever.,太阳落山时，莉莉骑着她的旧自行车回家了。

把车停在原来的地方，她有一种结束的感觉一路上充满了对汤姆的回忆，就像早上一样现在，温暖取代了孤独她知道他们的友谊，以自行车为象征，将永远持续下去例,2,As they walked home together,Tom finally felt a sense of peace,knowing he had done the right thing.,当他们一起走回家时，,Tom,终于感到了一种内心的平静，因为他知道自己做了正确的选择例,3,Looking back,Lucy realized that sometimes the hardest choices lead to the greatest rewards.,回首往事，,Lucy,明白有时候最艰难的选择往往带来最好的结果总结点题,此类结尾就是在续写时，通过几句话点明文章主旨、突出文章的立意，或者升华一下情感，这样可以让文章更有深度例,1,As the sun set,Lily returned home on her old bike.Parking it where she started,memories of Tom filled her mind,much like in the morning.Now,the loneliness was replaced by warmth.This ride taught Lily that true friendship transcends distance.The bike,a symbol of their bond,would always connect them.No matter how far apart,their friendship would stay strong,and memories would never fade.It is the shared past that anchors us,making distance just a number in the face of genuine connection.,例,2,In the end,it wasnt the destination that mattered,but the journey they took together.,最终，重要的不是目的地，而是他们一起经历的旅程。

例,3,She understood now that courage was not the absence of fear,but the triumph over it.,她现在明白了，勇气不是没有恐惧，而是战胜恐惧留有余韵,结尾时留一点余地，给读者留下思考的空间，这样会让文章更耐人寻味例,1,And with that,the last leaf fell,signaling the end of one chapter and the beginning of another.,随着最后一片树叶飘落，一章结束，另一章开始例,2,The waves gently lapped at the shore,carrying with them the echoes of a story yet to be told.,海浪轻轻拍打着岸边，带走了一个尚未讲完的故事的回声。