读后续写（以2024真题为例）讲解课件-2025届高三英语作文复习专项.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,高考英语读后续写,2024,新高考,I,卷,Have you ever encountered difficulties during your journey?,Read the text and taste the language,阅读文本，品味语言,I met Gunter,on a cold,wet and unforgettable evening in September,.I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm,my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague.,The moment I got off the plane,I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.,That was when I met Gunter.,I told him,where I was going,but he said,he hadnt heard of the bus station.,I thought,my pronunciation was the problem,so I explained again more slowly,but he,still,looked confused.,When,I was about to give up,Gunter fished out,his little phone and rang up a friend.After a heated discussion,that lasted for what seemed like a century,Gunter put his phone down and started the car.,形容词环境描写,修辞,-,夸张,镜头切换互动交替式描写,Finally,with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.,Thankfully,there was a long queue(队列)still waiting to board the bus.,Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus,turned around,and looked at me with a big smile on his face.We made it,he said.,Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times,but the card machine just did not play along.,A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.,At this moment,Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There,at the entrance,was a cash machine.,I jumped out of the car,made a mad run for the machine,and popped my card in,only to read the message:Out of order.Sorry.,with,复合结构,动作链,无灵主语句,动作链,Read for main characters,I ran like crazy.,jumped into the first taxi without a second thought.,I was about to give up.,I flashed him an apologetic smile.,A feeling of helplessness washed over me.,I jumped out of the car,made a mad run for the machine.,I called Gunter as promised.,Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.,After a heated discussion,Gunter put his phone down and started the car.,Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus,turned around,and looked at me with a big smile on his face.,“We made it,”he said.,At this moment,Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.,I,Gunter,impatient,anxious,embarrassed,considerate,responsible,warm-hearted,enthusiastic,optimistic,considerate,friendly,helpful.,who,when,where,What,Why,How,I,/,Gunter,on a cold,wet and,unforgettable evening in,September,from the airport to the,bus station,I had trouble paying for the taxi,fare.,I had zero cash/bankcard,couldnt be used/a cash,machine didnt help.,.,Read for “5W”,Opening,I was in a hurry to catch the,last bus to Prague because the,_(delay)flight,.,Development,I jumped into a taxi and Gunter took,me to the bus station just in time,despite some,_ (struggle),.,Climax,I didnt have any cash,_ my Portuguese bankcard didnt work.And the ATM machine was out of order,.,Resolution,I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.,.,Ending,Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as _(promise),.,Read for main plot,delayed,struggles,while,promised,Read for,the theme,Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter,as promised.,made a promise trusted me,kept my promise made a new friend,Its,kindness and trust,that make the world go round.,Every time I think of that cold and wet evening,a warm current flows/washed through my body.,trust,Read for the plot and conflicts,Read for main characters,读后续写,怎么读？,Read for the theme,Read for the language,核心人物，人物关系,故事逻辑，谋篇布局,主题思想，升华主题,细节描写，雕琢语言,Explore the clues and Design the plot,Paragraph 1,段首句,I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.,衔接句,情节句,情节句,段尾句,What/how did I say?,How did Gunter react to my words,How to end Para.l to ensure the coherence with Para.2?,Say something with shame and embarrassment.,How did I feel?,He comforted me and showed his kindness.,Grateful and touched.,I promised to pay him back later when I was back in Vienna and Gunter agreed.,Respect the text and design the plot,Paragraph 2,段首句,Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised.,衔接句,情节句,情节句,段尾句,What did I say?What was Gunters response?,What happened after we met?,How did I feel after all this?,I wanted to meet him to pay him the fare.He agreed to meet,How did Gunter react to the extra money?,I kept my promise and paid him an the fare and a little extra money.,Gunter refused the extra money and I offered a cup of coffee instead.,I took a photo of Gunter and me,a constant reminder of my restored faith in humanity.,按照角色梳理信息,I:Arriving at the airport of Vienna,with only a little time to spare,I jumped into a taxi to catch the last bus to Prague for a conference.It took the driver,Gunter,great efforts to understand where I wanted to。