[优]七年级英语Unit 2写作范文 用英语介绍自己家人.docx

七年级英语Unit 2写作范文 用英语介绍自己家人【剖析】本单元以“家庭”为话题，主要围绕介绍家人而展开写作时首先要理清人物之间的关系，其次要注意语言表达准确、有条理，主谓搭配一致写此类话题作文多用第一人称，时态为一般现在时，行文中注意对家庭成员的称呼此类话题作文吸引阅卷人眼球的亮点表达有：(1) Here is a photo of my family.(2)This/That is ...(3)These/Those are ...(4)He/She is ..…(5)They are ...【典例】课本3b：Bring a family photo to class and write about it.(带一张家庭照片到班里，并根据照片写一段介绍)1.审题指导（把握中心，得方向分）1）明确写作目的是介绍照片中的人物2）介绍的先后顺序是什么？3）用哪些句式结构介绍？4）时态要用一般现在时，人称要用第一人称和第三人称2.写作技巧（学会方法，巧得高分）“三步法”介绍照片中的家庭成员第一步：总体介绍是什么照片第二步：分别介绍家庭成员第三步：表达情感3.写作模板（学会套路，得基本分）模板4.经典词句（妙用句式，得出彩分）单词：photo, these, parents, grandfather, grandmother, girl, sister, brother,uncle, aunt, cousin, they, love短语：a photo of, the little boy句子：Here is a photo of ......These/Those are my ......The tall man is ......I love my family.5.范文赏析（书写工整，得印象分）Hi. I'm Bill. Here is a photo of my family. These are my parents. This is my grandfather and this is mygrandmother. The girl is my sister. Her name is Helen.The boy is my brother. His name is Bob. (This is my uncle and that is my aunt. Those are my cousins, Jack and Mary. )And who is the little boy? Haha, it's me. I love my family and they love me, too.名师点评：本文运用了“三步法”介绍照片中的家庭成员。

先引出话题：Hi. I'm Bill. Here is a photo of my family( 第1-3句)；再介绍家庭成员（第4-13句)；最后表达情感：I love my family and they love me, too.(最后一句)用词准确，情感真挚指示代词This/That/These/Those及The girl, The boy的运用，使人物介绍清楚明确，行文流畅family！Taking nothing for granted. Know that the harder you work, the luckier you'll get.没有什么事情是理所当然，要知道越努力越幸运。