大学英语作文3900字：头发的故事StoriesofHair.docx

大学英语作文3900字：头发的故事 Stories of Hair大学英语作文3900字：头发的故事StoriesofHairmaybenotconsideredthemostimportantpartofhead,hair,inmyopinion,isatleastthemosteyecatchingone,eceptforthosewhoarebald,likegeyou.anyway,hairplaysanindispensableroleinourlife,andsometimesitcanofferusalotoffun.actually,imyselfhaveseveralinterestingeperiencesrelatedtohairandwouldliketosharethemwithyouall.thefirststoryhappenedwheniwaseight.atthattime,iwassoboyishthateveryafternoonduringthesummerholidayiwasseendisportingwithacrowdofboysinthefiercesunlight,whichgavemeapreciousgift,abronzecompleion.tomakethingsworse,myhairwasrathershort,evenshorterthanmostoftheboys,justsomeoneinch.oneday,followingmymother,iwenttoadepartmentstoretobuyapairofsportsshoes.therewereavarietyofshoesofdifferentcolorsandstylesstandingontheshelves.atonce,icaughtsightofablackpairwithsomesilverstreaksonitsinstep.thenishowedthemtomymother,"whatawonderfupair!""notbad",mothersaid,"butithinktheyareforboys."obviously,thesaleswomanoverheardourconversation,shecameuptousandrecommendedthepairichose,andwitharadiantsmile,sheadded,"thispairisespeciallysuitablefortheactiveboysjustlikeyou."mymotherandicouldn＇thelplaughing,andihadtoprotest,"thankyou,madam,butiamagirl."shewasgenuinelyshockedandtouchedmyshorthairunbelievingly.evenwhenweleftwithapairofgirlishshoes,shestillhaddoubtsaboutmygender.fromthenon,ihadtowearahairpintodemonstratethatiamagirl.andastimepassed,ibroketheoldsaying,"thelongeryourhairis,thelesssensibilityyouhave."wheniwasinseniormiddleschool,ialreadyhadalongplaittiedback.myclassmateandneighbornancyalsohaslongstraighthair.sincethebeautifulprincessesinthemoviealwayshaveshiningwavyhair,webothlongedforthehairstyleanddecidedtodoitourselves.onesaturdayafternoon,weattemptedtocarryoutourgreatplan,butitturnedouttobeadisaster.tobeginwith,wedividedourhairintoseveralstrandsandcombedthemneat.thenwecarefullyrolledupeverystrandandfiedthemwithhairpins.themostimportantstepistocoverthehairwithahottowelsothatthestreamcouldchangeourstraighthairintothefashionablewavystyle.afterthatbothofussatstillonthechairs,afraidtoruinourperfectwork.atlastonehourpassed,wecouldn＇twaittoappreciateournewimage.wepulleddownthetowel,removedthehairpinsandrushedtothemirror."oh.mygod!howterrible!"webothcried.thehairwindeddisorderlyanddefiedalloureffortstomakethemtidy.thewholethingwasamess.welookedateachotherhelplesslyandwonderedwhattodo.attheverymoment,mymothercamehomeandwasreallyamusedbyourfunnysocalledwavyhair.luckily,amagicalthingcametoourrescue,thevinegar.plungedintothemitureofwaterandvinegar,ourhairgotstraightenedandnolongerwindedtogether.ofcourse,hairmeansalotmore.thedyedblackoftheelderlycandemonstratetheirvigorandoptimism,whiletheshininggreenhairofacoolguyshowsoffhispioneerspirit.andinthemostrenownedshortstoryofo＇henry,thegiftofthemagi,tarasoldherbeautifulbrownhairtobuyherhusbandagoldenchainasthechristmaspresent,whichmovesthousandsofreaderstotears.tosomeetent,hairisasymboloflifestyleandthephilosophyoflife.简评英文写作并不一定强调“文以载道”。

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