【教案】译林版9年级英语上册教案课件-第3课-Unit3写作指导.pdf

Unit3 写作指导试题 Pony 是个初三的学生她很喜欢玩电脑，但她现在每天有很多的功课，没时间去做自己的兴趣爱好她感到很苦恼她写了封信给Sigmund，希望能得到一些建议分析 1从题目的要求来看，这是一封信，而且是一封想别人诉苦和寻求帮助的信所以，首先要确定好信件题材，写作时注意书信的格式2开头部分可以先表达一下写信的目的，即你的问题是什么通常用这样的句式：I am a Grade 9 student. I have a problem and I want to know how to solve it. I d like your advice. 3根据题目的要求，信件的主体部分要包括以下的内容：你的问题和烦恼： too much homework; have no time to do hobbies 导致的结果： feel bad and stressed 4 文章的最后，可以再次表达需要帮助的愿望 可以用这样的句型： I hope to hear from you soon. Could you offer me some advice? 5最后，别忘了写上谦称和署名应用举例 1 Sigmund 就 Pony 的信给她回了一封信。

Sigmund 曾经也有相同的问题，他以自己的经历建议 Pony一天做一件事，并合理地安排自己的学习和课外活动的时间精品学习资料 可选择p d f - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 1 页，共 5 页 - - - - - - - - -分析 你的问题和烦恼是什么too much homework 分析原因 examinations 提出解决办法 plan your day carefully / choose one to do each day 注意回信人的身份和语气试题 1 九年级毕业班的学习生活是紧张的，最近我校九年级又加强了对学生的管理，实施了 “ 一日学习规范 ” 尽管一些同学感觉压力很大，但很快找出了解决压力问题的办法我们很欣喜地看到同学们在日渐进步请根据下面表格的信息写一篇短文压力心情不好；经常和父母吵架；没有时间进行自己的爱好；似乎老师对我们太严了 办法如果你感到有压力，穿白色衣服，因为它能使你感到平静；和父母交流；对我们的作业列一个清单 进步知道节约时间对我们来说是重要的；大多数学生能按时交作业要求： 1、表格中的信息要全部用上，也可适当发挥。

2、至少补充两条关于同学们进步的表现3、语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范4、词数 100 词以上，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数We are Grade 9 students. We have lots of work to do. Some students feel stressed. 精品学习资料 可选择p d f - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 2 页，共 5 页 - - - - - - - - -试题 2 最近，我国政府面向青少年提出了“ 阳光体育活动 ” 其口号是 “ 每天锻炼一小时，健康工作 50 年，幸福生活一辈子 ” 为了配合该活动，你班级将举行一次主题班会 请你以 “Sports and Health”为主题写一篇发言稿， 介绍你自己体育锻炼的情况，感受等，文中不得出现真实姓名要点： 1、自己的锻炼情况2、最喜欢的体育活动及原因3、锻炼的效果及感受4、倡议大家积极参与体育锻炼Dear friends, I m very glad to be here to say something about.That s all. Thank you!精品学习资料 可选择p d f - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 3 页，共 5 页 - - - - - - - - -范文 Dear Sigmund Friend I am a Grade 9 student. I have a problem but I dont know how to solve it.I have a lot of hobbies. Playing computers is my favorite. But now I find that I do not have enough time to do my hobbies because of too much homework every day. I feel stressed though I know doing homework is very important. I feel really bad about it. Should I focus on my homework and give up my hobbies? Can you tell me how to keep a balance between the two? I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes. Yours sincerely Pony 应用举例 1 Dear Pony Thank you for your letter. I hope I can give you some useful suggestions. I used to have the same problem as you. I did not have enough time to do my hobbies because of examinations. Do you know how I solve the problem? I think planning your day carefully is very important. Make a list of all the homework you need to finish it. You will know how much free time you have. I suggest that you should choose one hobby to do each day. I hope my advice will be useful to you. Best wishes. Yours Sigmund 试题 1 We are Grade 9 students. We have lots of work to do. Some students feel stressed. Sometimes we are in bad moods and quarrel with our parents, because we have no time for our hobbies. Recently It seems that the teachers are strict with us, they don t allow us to speak louder after class.I know when we feel sressed, we should wear white. Because it can make us feel calm and peaceful. We can also chat with our parents, because our parents are always 精品学习资料 可选择p d f - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 4 页，共 5 页 - - - - - - - - -friendly to us. To homework, we should make a list of it, we can know how much time we need to complete it. It is important for us to know how to save time.Most of us can hand in the homework on time.We dont copy others ,too. We can listen to the teachers more carefully. 试题 2 Dear friends, I m very glad to be here to say something about sports and health. I love sports. My favourite sport is playing basketball. I like it very much because it is exciting and good for my health. I usually play basketball with my best friends on the playground after school. I also enjoy playing ping-pong and swimming . I am stronger than before because I keep on taking exercise alomost every day. “Keeping doing sports an hour a day ,you can work healthily for fifty years and live a happy life all the time.”So I hope all of us can take an active part in sports , and also I wish everybody good health. That s all. Thank you!精品学习资料 可选择p d f - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 5 页，共 5 页 - - - - - - - - -。