2024届高考英语如何写好英语作文（叙事连环画类）课件.pptx

How to write an English composition well based on pictures?写写 作作审审抓扩连改抄基础写作基础写作步骤1.审审2.抓抓3.扩扩4.连连5.改改6.抄抄根据以下六幅图画，用英语写一篇故事根据以下六幅图画，用英语写一篇故事生生词词：calling card名片名片 注意：注意：1故事故事须须包括所有包括所有图图画画的的内内容，可以适容，可以适当当增增加加细节细节，使故事，使故事连贯连贯人称称不限不限.2词词数数120左右Step One：认真审题，确定体裁和主题认真审题，确定体裁和主题关注文字说明，参考词汇及画面关注文字说明，参考词汇及画面记叙文，一个拾金不昧的故事记叙文，一个拾金不昧的故事第一第一 或第三人称，过去时态或第三人称，过去时态Step Two：围绕主题，提炼要点围绕主题，提炼要点P1 放学回家，捡到钱包放学回家，捡到钱包*P2 打开钱包，钱和名片打开钱包，钱和名片*P3 失主失主*P4 等待失主等待失主*P5 认领钱包认领钱包*P6 失主感谢失主感谢每个图片用一句话表达形成骨架(2m)*P1.On my way home,I found a wallet.*P2.There was a calling card in it*P3.I telephoned/called the owner*P4.I waited at the bus stop*P5.I gave the wallet to her.*P6.The owner wanted to reward meI refused it and went back home Step Three：合理想象，补齐要点。

合理想象，补齐要点P1补充地点（某一公交车站附近）补充地点（某一公交车站附近）*P2补充心理活动（失主肯定焦急等）补充心理活动（失主肯定焦急等）*ending补充感想（做了该做的事情）补充感想（做了该做的事情）Step Four：连句成篇，过渡自然连句成篇，过渡自然连接词连接词*过渡句过渡句*总结句总结句 One day,on my way home after school,I found a wallet near the No.323 Bus Stop.I opened the wallet and saw lots of money and a calling card in it.From the calling card I knew the owners name,address and telephone number.So I went to the public telephone and called the owner.Then I waited at the bus stop.Before long the owner arrived,and I gave the wallet to her.The owner was so thankful to me that she took out a 100-yuan-note to reward me.But I politely refused it and went back home.Doing good deeds is my duty.One day,I was making my way home happily after school when I caught sight of a wallet lying on the ground near the bus stop.I picked it up at once and looked around,but there was no one in sight.I opened the wallet and found there was a lot of money and a calling card in it.From the calling card,luckily,I knew the owners name,address and telephone number.Thinking the owner must be very anxious,I hurried to a nearby public telephone and called the owner.Then I sat at the bus stop and waited patiently for the owner to come to claim the wallet.Before long the owner arrived,with sweat pouring down.Receiving the wallet,the owner was so thankful to me that she took out a 100-yuan-note to reward me.Of course I politely refused.Though I got home a little bit later that day,I felt very happy because I thought I had done a good deed and that was what I should do.Practice makes perfect.我的朋友Tony和我放学后通常都是步行回家。

My friend Tony and I always walk home together after school.然而，几天前，在我们回家的路上发生了非同寻常的事The other day,however,something unusual happened on our way home.Practice makes perfect.那天我们两正一边走一边愉快地聊天，突然听到身后传来一个很大的声音We were talking and chatting happily that day when we heard a loud sound behind us.我们四处张望，想知道究竟发生了什么We looked around,wondering what had happened.Practice makes perfect.使我们震惊的是看到一名女子浑身是血，躺在地上To our shock,we saw a woman lying on the ground,covered in blood.我们立即意识到发生了可怕的车祸，那女子肯定被车撞了We immediately realized it was a terrible accident and the woman must have been knocked down by the car.Practice makes perfect.我们冲过去救她，但是一个戴着眼镜的男子走了过来，不让我们靠近那受伤女子。

We rushed to help her,but a man wearing glasses came over and stopped us getting close to the injured woman.我们对这男子很生气，心想，他怎么可以阻止我们救人呢We were very angry with the man,thinking how he could stop us from saving the dying woman.Practice makes perfect.这个男子笑了，叫我们转过身去The man smiled and asked us to turn around.我们看到的是一个人肩扛摄像机躲在灌木丛里原来他们在拍电影What we saw was a man carrying a camera on his shoulder hidden in the bush.It turned out that they were making a film.。