高中英语概要写作要点之删除细节以及描述性语言.doc

高中英语概要写作要点之删除细节以及描述性语言一：删除细节在概要写作中,我们首先要学会辨别哪些是概括性语言,哪些是细节性语言能恰当地删除细节、删除具体例子更容易把握主旨大意那么,细节主要包括哪些方面呢?通常情况下,具体的描述性语言、事例、数据、论据、重复强调的观点,往往都是细节在概括主旨时,往往都要考虑删除二：删除描绘性语言案例1①Scientists have long assumed that willpower is a limited resource,which is why you feel the need to have a rest,have a snack and then get back to task when you are feeling better.②They argue that the only way your body restores willpower is by rest,food or entertainment.详细解析:本段第一句表示长期以来,科学家们一直认为意志力是一种有限的资源,这就是为什么你觉得有必要休息一下,吃点东西,然后当你感觉好些时再继续工作。

第二句表示身体恢复意志力的唯一方式是休息、进食或者娱乐本段主旨需要删除细节,并将两句话进行概括自我概括: 参考表达:Willpower,assumed to be a limited resource,is thought to be regained by rest,food,as well as entertainment.简要解析:第一句删除描述性的语言“which is why you feel the need to have a rest,have a snack and then get back to task when you are feeling better”,用willpower作主语,删除重复的内容,运用同位语及被动语态的手法,有效地将两个句子连接起来,使得其逻辑意思更为连贯与简洁案例2①The researchers designed four experiments to test students’ belief in willpower.②After a tiring task,those who believed,or were led to believe that willpower is a limited resource,performed worse on standard concentration tests than those who thought of willpower as something they had more control over.③They also found that during the final exam week,students who believed in the limited resource theory ate junk food 24 percent more often than those who believed they had more control over willpower.④Mr.Job said,“The theory that willpower is a limited resource is interesting.Belief in willpower as a non-limited resource makes people stronger in their ability to work through challenges.”详细解析:段落第一句表示研究人员设计了四个实验来测试学生对意志力的信念。

第二、三句话对实验结果进行了具体描述第四句话表示相信意志力是一种无限的资源,这让人们更有能力应对挑战前三句话是对实验的描述,最后一句是结论,是主题句自我概括: 参考表达:Researchers discovered that if you believe willpower is limitless,you will be more powerful.简要解析:提炼重要信息,删除文中第二、三句话对实验结果进行的具体描述,用if引导的条件状语从句对文章最后的结论进行高度概括与压缩,简洁明了三：课后练习阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要Host family accommodation, or living with host families, remains popular among language travel students for its unique advantages.These days, host families are trying to offer more in terms of quality, for they have something to worry about.Host family accommodation is often seen as the number－one choice for its advantages in language study, cultural communication and the cost of living.Staying alongside host families enables students to get enough practice for the time of their studying so that they can learn the local language very quickly.You don’t know a lot of words and their real meanings until you use them with local people.Living in host families also has the advantage for students of being able to spend a lot of time communicating with their “ host parents”， and get to know the local way of life, people and culture.Another advantage is that host family accommodation can sometimes be the least expensive.It attracts students，for it ensures them a family of living at a low cost.The advantages，however，have not prevented host families from worrying.On the one hand，some host families are losing their unique selling point.The problem is that the majority of hosts in big cities，now generally single and young，have less time available for students，but the selling point for host family accommodation is communication practice.On the other hand，students’ expectations have risen.They are becoming more demanding and asking for more than ever from their accommodation，as they come mainly from high socio－economic groups in their own countries.To get out of the difficult situation, host families are now making efforts to improve the quality of service.They are trying to make living conditions better, including broadband Internet service, private bathrooms, and access to plenty of hot water for long showers.They are also providing to students with structured family activities.It is believed that host family accommodation will keep the popularity for language travel students. 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Shyness is partly a result of genes a person has inherited (经遗传得到)．It’s also influenced by behaviors they’ve learned, the ways people have reacted to their shyness, and life experiences they’ve had.The examples other people set can also play a role in whether a person learns to be shy or not.If the parents of a shy child are overly cautious or overprotective, it can teach the child to back away from situations that might be uncomfortable or unfamiliar.Many people want to reduce their shyness.But people who are naturally。