人教版高中英语必修一学案：Unit 4 Earthquakes Period 6 Writing.doc

Book 1 Unit 4 Earthquake Period 6 Writing 编者：巩玉香 学习目标 训练学生用英语写出一篇质量较高的新闻报道训练学生学会用写作提纲来写新闻报道重点难点 1.掌握新闻稿件的写作方式，并学习其写作技巧 2.使用较复杂的结构和多种句式来表达新闻内容写作指导】 写新闻故事或报道要注意时间性，要让人急于了解所写内容一篇新闻报道通常由三部分组成：标题（title, 可用一般现在时态），导语（lead-in）和正文（body）如下： Earthquake strikes Yushu! ----标题 An earthquake measuring 7.1 degrees on the Richter scale struck Yushu at 7:49 on the morning of Apr.14th, 2010,…… - -----引子 During the earthquake over 2000 people were killed....... -------正文 We should never forget…… -------结尾 正文是写作的主要部分，此部分要告知读者或听众最重要的事实，它包括“新闻六要素”，即事件(what)、时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、原因(why)和方式(how) 。

一般来说，新闻应按“时间顺序”或“逻辑顺序”写作，时态一般以过去时态为主2. 常用短语和句型Recently there is a fierce …… 最近……There is no doubt that…… 毫无疑问……We cannot ignore the fact that more and more……（我们不能忽略的事实是……）课文中描写自然灾害的句子：In fifteen terrible seconds a large city lay in ruins.Two-thirds of them died or were injured during the earthquake.Thousands of families were killed and many children were left without parents.The number of people who were killed or injured reached more than ……Water, food, and electricity were hard to get.【写作例题】 请根据所给内容写一篇关于玉树地震的新闻报道。

不少于100词内容包括：1) 时间：北京时间2010年4月14日7时49分2) 损失: 2,000多人死亡, 大部分建筑物倒塌,路被破坏，停电，水和食物很难找到4) 现状：英雄的汶川人民与全国人民一道正在自救5) 提醒人们不要忘记灾难和在危难时给灾区人民提供帮助 Earthquake Strikes Yushu! A big earthquake struck Yushu at 7:49 on the morning of_________________________________________【佳作欣赏】 Earthquake strikes Yushu!A big earthquake struck Yushu at 7:49 on the morning of Apr.14th, 2010, which killed more than 2,000 people and most of the buildings were destroyed. The roads were destroyed as well and the electricity was cut off. Water, and food were hard to get. However, with the help of the Chinese, the people in Wenchuan are not beaten down by the disaster. Now they are saving themselves. We believe the area will breathe soon.We should never forget the damage the earthquake caused to them and those who are still in terrible trouble, so we should try our best to help them build their houses. We believe that in the near future a new Wenchuan will appear in Sichuan.【亮点点击】 本文依据提示完成了新闻报道的写作，时态正确，内容表述自然，从地震的发生、破坏到自救分层次描写，达到了预期目的。

总起来说，还有以下几个亮点：1. 活用本单元所知识，如灵活使用了文中句型和词语water and food were hard to get. The area will breathe again等2.用词高级、准确如destroy, cut off, not beaten等；尤其是the people are not beaten...很有特色，具有修辞功能3. 句式多样，灵活多变，如复合句、并列句等的使用；还有We should never forget.... 双重否定的运用值得模仿达标练习 请根据以下表格内容，以A Big Forest Fire 为题，写一篇英文简讯起火时间2010年11月初地点中国东北部起火原因一青年工人吸烟持续时间约一个月参加救灾人员数千名解放军战士与当地群众死亡人员约200人经济损失至少一千万元影响和解决措施全国震惊……1. 翻译句子1) 2010年11月初，在中国东北部发生了一场大火 __________________________________________2) 起火原因是一青年工人在森林中吸烟不小心3) 这场大火持续了接近一个月。

4) 数千名解放军战士与当地群众参与救火行动5) 大约200人死亡，经济损失至少一千万元6) 全国对此感到震惊 ______________________________________________________________.7) 我们应采取措施来防止类似事件发生______________________________________________________.2. 连句成文 利用以上几个句子，加上恰当的连接词和必要的过渡句，必要时可以改变句式，使之成为一段连贯的文章首句已给出）A Big Forest FireA big forest fire broke out in the northeast of China in the early November, 2010.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________。