四年级上册语文第三单元童话写作李

1、编写童话故事Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.大家一起来分享童话，你看了吗？Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.写童话.自己选择几种动物,或者几件物

2、品,以它们为主人公,想象一下,它们 之间会发生一些什么事,编成一个 故事写下来.也可以写你续编的小 木偶的故事.Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.怎样编童话故事第一步：将故事写完整，理清故事的来龙去脉， 想得越细，说得越具体。 。（1）什么时间？什么地方？有哪些动物（事物）？（2）它们之间发生了什么事？第三步：要用心体会，想想这个故事告诉我们什么？如：赞美什么？批评什么？或告诉了我们一个什么小道理？第二步：运用拟人手法，合理地展开想像。如：把它们都当做人来说（写），会说话、会哭、会笑 、会做事等。他们有着超常的魔力，像人一样 会说会会笑唱会跳。Evaluation o

3、nly.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.一、选动物一、选动物你最熟悉的是什么动物？他们有什么特你最熟悉的是什么动物？他们有什么特 点？点？母鸡会下蛋母鸡会下蛋 鸭子会游泳鸭子会游泳 孔雀会开屏孔雀会开屏马会拉车马会拉车 青蛙吃害虫青蛙吃害虫 乌龟爬得慢乌龟爬得慢 兔子短尾巴兔子短尾巴 狐狸很聪明狐狸很聪明 大象鼻子长大象鼻子长你选谁？你选谁？Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NE

4、T 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.二、想情趣二、想情趣意义、情感意义、情感 生日送礼生日送礼赞美友谊赞美友谊 互相比美互相比美赞扬心灵美赞扬心灵美 比谁聪明比谁聪明称赞有智慧称赞有智慧 长处和短处长处和短处要正确看待自己要正确看待自己 我来帮你我来帮你赞扬助人为乐赞扬助人为乐 环境保护、文明礼貌、团结友爱、战胜环境保护、文明礼貌、团结友爱、战胜 邪恶、勤奋努力、孝敬父母、知错能改邪恶、勤奋努力、孝敬父母、知错能改 Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 200

5、4-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.开端：小木偶只会笑高潮小木偶被熊警官冤枉 因为它 只会笑小女巫赋予小木偶所有的表情小木偶被老婆婆误解只会笑是永远不够的幸福是什么结局：小木偶终于获得了真正的快乐发展小木偶被小白兔怀疑 Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0

6、.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.在这个故事中，除了小木偶外还有熊警察、小兔子、 老婆婆等，从大伙的表现中，你认为他们的性格是怎样的 ？ 老木匠-善良小红狐-狡猾、撒谎熊警察-正直、鲁莽小兔子-粗心只看表面老婆婆-小女巫-乐于助人Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.在小木偶的身上, 后来又会发生什么事情呢? 请你接着编下去Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET

7、3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.可能一：偶遇小红狐，却亲眼见到小红狐 遭遇车祸，经过内心挣扎，善良 的小木偶决定救它Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.可能二：小红狐生病了。木偶得知这个消息后，心想：“哼！活 该！谁叫你当初抢走我的红背包。”可 是他又想：“小红狐生病了，孤零零的 ，多

8、么需要伙伴来看他呀！趁这次机 会我也能多交一个朋友，也不是很好 吗？”Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.可能三： 老木匠又给小木偶买了一顶小红 帽，被小红狐看见，又想故伎 重演，而小木偶决定将计就计 Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose

9、Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.因为是续写，所以希望开头能够有承上启下 的感觉。既能承接上文，也可引起下文。例如：小木偶有了所有的表情，会哭、会笑、会伤心、 会生气。他开心极了，高高兴兴的走在回家的路上，他要 把这个好消息，告诉爱他的老木匠。自从蓝鼻子小女巫把人类所有的表情送给了小木偶 ，小木偶天天都过着开心的日子，也交了很多的朋友。Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.好结尾举例：点名中心式：小红狐明白了：只有生活在朋友 之间，才能感受到真正的幸福。自然收尾式：现在，小木偶会哭、会笑、会生 气，会着急，也会同情和关心别人。他 快乐幸福的生活着。Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.

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