高中考试英语01.应用文之建议信

1、应用文01 建议信真题回顾Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目(时尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。【答案】Dear Editor,Ive learned that our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new one. Im writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions.Needless to say, the columns will definitely be

2、 designed according to students interest and have positive effects on their study and life.Compared to the entertainment , I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important . The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. Consequently, more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life. In addition, the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening ones h

3、orizons, which in turn is beneficial to ones study and the establishment of philosophy of life.Furthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post . On the one hand, it covers ones career development a great deal .On the other hand, it makes a great difference to ones career success in the future.What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Pos

4、t.Yours sincerely,Cheng Fei【解析】这篇书面表达属于提纲类范畴，这篇作文要求就校英语报改版的事情给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容： 1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由，根据自己的建议选定栏目的设置并以邮件方式表达自己的观点。考生在写作过程中要确定切题且符合英语写作逻辑的篇章结构。确立邮件文体之后，要弄清要点，围绕要点展开，条理要清晰，理由要充分，关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，文章尽量简洁，在文章中尽可能多地使用高大上的词汇，遵循短语优先原则在配以特殊句型和复合句的应用，让文章更上档次。【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组，如：share with 和分享，Needless to say不必说， according to 根据， have positive effects on对有积极的影响，in turn反之，take into account将考虑在内，make a great difference to对有很大的影响，in the hope that希望，句式

5、上体现出多变的特点，如：Compared to the entertainment ,I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important . 这句话用了过去分词和同位语从句，The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. 这句话用了表语从句和while表示对比的用法， the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening ones horizons, which in turn is beneficial to ones study and the establishment of philosophy of life.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句， What has been mentioned

6、 above is my personal ideas. 这句话用了主语从句，还有范文还使用了 In addition, Furthermore, On the one hand, On the other hand,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。第一部分：说明写信的目的套语：1. Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打

7、算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。3. Im writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients(顾客).我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。4.You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。5. Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。6. Im v

8、ery glad to have received your e-mail. Now Im writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因套语： (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. (3) 下午，我们会一起During the afternoon, well.together. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。Remember to take water

9、and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。Im sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 第三部分：提出建议套语：我建议Id like to suggest thatMay I suggest that?In my opinionI would like to make a recommendation thatI am writing to adviseIf I were you, I would第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复套语：1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。2. I hope these suggesti

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