层级一 靓化词汇.docx

层级一 靓化词汇 学会运用高级表达英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使 用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型，即 使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次因此，为 了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感它会大大提升文章的档次，从而 帮助考生获得高分要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法1. 标新立异“语”众不同在写作时，恰当地使用一些别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会体现出自己的高水 平1) Great changes have taken place in our school in the last few years.And the news came that a short film will be shown in our school.(2018-全国卷 II 书面表达)一Our school has witnessed great changes in the last few years.And word came that a short film will be shown in our school.(2018 -全国卷 II 书面表达)(2) I’m busy with my lessons now，for the College Entrance Examination，which is very important to me，is near.一I’m occupied with my lessons now，for the College Entrance Examination，which is of great importance to me，is around the corner«(2017・天津高考书面表达)(3) Our team，besides regular training， will join in a variety of activities.一Our team，apart/aside from regular training，will join in a variety of activities.(2017-全国卷III书面表达)(4) Several days later，when the video was played on the graduation ceremony，it was very popular.—Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received.(2017 -北京高考书面表达)2. 多样表达避免重复在写作时，应尽量避免重复使用相同的单词或短语，要尽量用贴切多样的词语来 展示自己的水平。

用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法1) Moreover，we will build a new stadium and with the stadium built, a wide range of sports events are able to be held.—Moreover，we will build a new stadium and with the stadium set up，a wide range of sports events are able to be held.(2018-全国卷III书面表达)(2) The team will hold many activities，some of which will appeal to you，including many matches.—The team will hold a range of activities， some of which will appeal to you， including many matches.(2017 -全国卷III 书面表达)(3) We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have different ways to deal with such a situation.—We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.(浙江高考书面表达)3. 短语优先语言生动当单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。

恰当使用短语，一方面能使文 章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底1) Hopefully，these suggestions would be helpful/beneficial to you.—Hopefully， these suggestions would be of great help/benefit to you.(2018-全国卷 I书面表达)(2) To learn more about the development of our school，all the students are welcome to watch the short film Growing Together.—With the aim of learning more about the development of our school， all the students are welcome to watch the short film Growing Together.(2018 -全国卷 II 书面 表达)(3) There is no doubt that you should know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.—There is no doubt that you are supposed to know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.（2017 -全国卷 I 书面表达）（4）Firstly, the final exam of this term is coming so I am busy preparing for it.—To begin with, the final exam of this term is around the corner so I am busy preparing for it.（2017-天津高考书面表达）4. 高级词汇凸显水平为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应避免反复使用低年级学过 的简单词汇，尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。

1） If you take my advice you are sure to have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.—So long as you take my advice you are bound to have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.（2018-北京高考书面表达第一节）（2） Second, I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.—Second, I am sparing no effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.（2017-天津高考书面表达）（3） I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.—I should make an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.（2016-全国卷III书面表达）二、使用亮点词汇的2点注意1. 注意增加亮词的“出镜率”，变消极词汇为积极词汇阅读中能认识但写作中不会用的词汇属于消极词汇，写作中能运用自如的词汇为 积极词汇，也就是平常所说的“第一反应词”。

积极词汇量的多少直接决定着英语 作文表达水平的高低现在很多考生的困难是，头脑中的很多词汇介于积极词汇 与消极词汇之间；另外，很多背过的消极词汇如果较长时间不接触就会变成陌生 词汇因此在备考过程中，考生要做的事情就是迅速扩大消极词汇量并且保持接 触的频度，力争使其变成积极词汇很多考生作文驻足不前的一个重要原因是反复使用初中学过的简单词汇，背了大 量的亮词妙语而不用建议大家在想到一个表达时，务必要想一想还有没有更好 的表达方式，这就是我们平时常讲的“头脑风暴法”例如想表达“美丽的”这个含 义，大家首先想到的是“beautiful”，那么在下笔时，要想一想还有没有更出彩的 表达，如“attractive"或“charming ”等再如表达“困难的”时，大家常用“difficult”， 那是不是用“tough ”或“challenging ”更与众不同呢？2. 注意亮点词汇使用的场合写作时，在用词上不可随心所欲，决不能为追求“高级”而使用复杂但毫无把握的 词语，也不能满篇堆积所谓的“高级”词汇，否则给人过分炫耀之嫌，得不偿失一般来说，一篇文章能用好三至五个高级词汇就可以了另外，为能更好地“完 成规定的写作任务”，减少错误，特别提醒考生在使用“高级词汇”时，一定要注 意遵循“准确、恰当”的原则，并且要注意使用的场合，难词和生僻词汇并不一定 就是高级词汇，例如：一大早我们买了一些圣诞礼物。

Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents.（purchased 太过于书面 化，改为bought更地道）三、写作的秘密武器——24个高级词汇名词普通词汇高级词汇普通词汇高级词汇chanceopportunitychoicealternativeideaopinionpeopleindividualresultconsequenceeffectinfluence动词havepossessreplacesubstitutebearput up withunderstandmake sense ofdeveloppromoteconsidertake into account形容词enoughadequaterichabundantproperappropriateimportantvital/significantinterestingabsorbing/appealingdifficultchallenging副词finallyeventually。