中考英语写作指导ppt课件.ppt

What is the most painful part while you are taking an English exam? 目录目录上一页上一页下一页下一页末页末页作文作文 想说爱你不容易想说爱你不容易 Lillian•Writing is a kind of breathing pain•It lives in the last corner of the paper•It is painful to watch others write•While it is more painful to write myself•Anyway, writing is a kind of breathing pain...•作文是会呼吸的痛•它活在试卷最后的角落•看别人写会痛•看自己写会痛•反正都会痛......How to write a good artile?目录目录上一页上一页下一页下一页末页末页Practice makes perfect. --- ---孰能生巧孰能生巧目录目录上一页上一页下一页下一页末页末页学习目标：学习目标：1.1.通过考情分析，能说出词中考作文的写作技巧。

通过考情分析，能说出词中考作文的写作技巧2.2.通过典例分析，尝试运用写作技巧进行写作练通过典例分析，尝试运用写作技巧进行写作练习3.3.通过对写作技巧的训练，能克服畏难情绪，树通过对写作技巧的训练，能克服畏难情绪，树立写作信心立写作信心考情分析考情分析方法指导方法指导典例精析典例精析备战演练备战演练目目录录1234目录目录上一页上一页下一页下一页末页末页 分析近几年河南中招真题可知，书面分析近几年河南中招真题可知，书面表达常见的类型分为三类：命题、半命表达常见的类型分为三类：命题、半命题、无命题这三种形式文体以记叙文题、无命题这三种形式文体以记叙文为主，话题为写人叙事类、事物介绍类、为主，话题为写人叙事类、事物介绍类、发表观点类和咨询建议类词数均为发表观点类和咨询建议类词数均为80词左右 考情分析思考：如何写作文才能得高分呢？思考：如何写作文才能得高分呢？（（1）文章结构三段论，表明你懂得文章结构；）文章结构三段论，表明你懂得文章结构；（（2）字数以上限为准，证明你书写能力很强；）字数以上限为准，证明你书写能力很强；（（3）遣词要精准地道，证明你语言功底很棒；）遣词要精准地道，证明你语言功底很棒；（（4）书写要规范美观，表明你书写训练有素。

书写要规范美观，表明你书写训练有素方法指导方法指导 作为一名初中生，每天面对着沉重的学业，拥有作为一名初中生，每天面对着沉重的学业，拥有健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要请健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要请以以How to keep fit 为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈如何保持身体健康如何保持身体健康 要求：要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右备战演练（第一周周考作文）备战演练（第一周周考作文） Bad sample（（0-3分）分）•Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good.•Have a good fit is very important.1.要点全Bad→Good（4-8分）2.简单句1.列全要点Beginning:Body:(3个方面)1.锻炼身体2.良好的饮食习惯3.保持好心情Ending：2.简单句翻译：保持健康是很重要的。

翻译：保持健康是很重要的Keep healthy is very important.Keeping healthy is very important.①找动词V (2)②保留一个谓语动词×√简单句翻译原则（1个V） Ving Ving+ V谓语+ to do V原1.并列句 Good→Better（9-12分）2.连接词• We should have good eating habits and keep away from junk food.1.并列句（句与句）•We should not only have good eating habits but also keep away from junk food. 简单句+连词+简单句并列句连词1.1.并列关系并列关系 and, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor2.2.选择关系选择关系 or, either…or3.3.转折关系转折关系 but, while4.4.因果关系因果关系 for, so, 2.连接词基础模板1. 开头句 — 引入 2. 主体— 观点 Firstly, 要点1 Secondly, 要点2 Thirdly, 要点3. 结尾句— 总结 In a word, 点睛句 逻辑结构连词加强版三点型：三点型：首先：to begin with，to start with其次：besides, what’s more, and then最后：finally,last but not least 两点型：两点型：一方面：on the one hand, 另一方面：on the other hand总结总结：Generally speaking, In general,  As middle school students, keeping fit is very important for us. To keep fit , I have some good advice. To begin with, We should do exercise every day, such as running, walking. What’s more, We should have good eating habits and keep away from junk food. We can eat more fruits and vegetables. Finally, we should keep us happy, it is the most important part. I hope my advice is useful. Let’s take action now! Better1. 各种从句 Better→Best（13-15分）2.高级词汇 形式：形式： 主句主句+连接词连接词+从句从句 连接词连接词+从句，主句从句，主句1.各种从句宾语从句• We should do exercise every day.•I think we should do exercise every day. 使用提示：表达想法建议使用提示：表达想法建议条件状语从句•We should keep us happy, it is the most important.•If we keep us happy all the time, we will be much healthier.使用提示：表达想法建议使用提示：表达想法建议定语从句•We should have good eating habits.•We should have some eating habits which are good for us.使用提示：修饰名词使用提示：修饰名词表语从句•We should have good eating habits.• My advice is that our eating habits should be healthier for us. 使用提示：我的使用提示：我的...是是...•1. I think/hope +句子.•2. If+从句，主句.•3. 主+谓+N+定从•4.My+N is that 句子.常用从句模板•good→wonderful•like→enjoy→be fond of•happy→joyful•very→so→extremely•many→plenty of •want →feel like •important→play an important role in •should→be supposed to/be expected to•to(为了）→in order to 高级词汇 As a middle school students, It is very important for us to keep fit. In order to keep fit , I have some good advice. To begin with, I think we are supposed to do exercise every day, such as running, walking. What’s more, We are expected to have some eating habits which are good for us. Finally, keeping us happy all the time is also important. If our moods are happier, we will be healthier. I hope my advice is useful. If we take action now, we must be healthy. Best字如其人字如其人总结回顾：1.bad→good 要点全，简单句2.good→better 并列句，连接词3.better→best 从句，高级词汇4.书写漂亮 在每个人心中，总会渴望拥有某样在每个人心中，总会渴望拥有某样东西东西。

你想要拥有什么？请你以你想要拥有什么？请你以I want to have ______ 为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你想拥有你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受 要求：要求：1. 请补全题目，如请补全题目，如 a football, a mountain bike,或或 a magic paintbrush等；等；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数词数80词左右 实战演练（2015年中考真题）37 I want to have a camera Some people want to have plenty of money, some people want to have great power. But unlike them, I simply want to have a camera. My reason are as follows. To start with, I’d like to keep those sweet memories through my life. And if I have a camera, the photos I take can remind me of my experience. What’s more, I hardly have time to draw perfect pictures, but taking photos takes less time and can also bring joy of beauty to my daily life. Certainly, I will feel excited if I get a camera of my own. I can lead a colorful life with my camera. 38 I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus. If I have a mountain bike, I will be excited and satisfied. Hope it will come true one day. •1.当我们常常以为自己顶不住的时候，并不是最后的时刻，而是我们的精神崩溃了。

那你只要坚持精神的重整，坚持精神的出发，其实当我们觉得，那是万劫不复的情景，也依然可以去找到它的出口，也依然可以坚持过来•2.所以如果你有愿望，如果你真的还有力量去实行它，我觉得我一定要即刻就出发，去完成自己的愿望，让自己更少的遗憾人生是一个漫长的过程，年轻是多么的好，但是请你们记得，记得有很多的东西，当你不懂的时候，你年轻，当你懂得了以后，你已年老•3.抒情往往不会单独出现在文中，它常与记叙、描写、议论等结合在一起一般来说，直接抒情一般要与议论结合在一起，而间接抒情一般与叙述、描写结合在一起•4.借景抒情又称寓情于景，是指作者带着强烈的主观情感去描写客观景物，通过景物来抒情•5.融情于事，指通过叙述事件来抒发感情，让感情从具体事件的叙述中自然地流露出来，感染读者这种渗透着感情的叙述，读者品味起来就更觉得真诚可亲•6.通过对客观事物的描写或刻画，间接表现出作者的志向、意愿采用托物言志，关键是志与物要有某种相同点或相似点，使物能达意而志为物核托物言志常借用比拟、象征等手法•7.要写好一篇记叙文，首先必须确定自己的情感，然后根据自己的情感选择提炼材料，再加以细致的描写，在必要的地方画龙点睛地穿插一点议论。

•8.对任何一篇记叙文而言，叙述是骨架，描写是血肉，而抒情与议论则是灵魂，这四者是缺一不可的总之，我们要学会综合运用多种表现手法，使我们笔下的文字显得生动活泼、形象可感、醒人耳目、启人深思。