高中英语2025届高考读后续写高分佳句（共五类）.doc

高考英语读后续写高分佳句1.人物情感描写喜悦Her face lit up with joy and excitement was written all over her.她的脸上洋溢着喜悦，兴奋之情溢于言表lit up”形象地表现出因喜悦而容光焕发的样子A broad smile spread across his face like a ray of sunshine.一个灿烂的笑容像阳光一样在他脸上蔓延开来用比喻的手法将笑容比作阳光，突出喜悦的强烈悲伤Tears streamed down her cheeks like a broken dam, carrying all her sorrow.泪水像决堤的大坝一样从她的脸颊上流下，承载着她所有的悲伤生动地描绘出泪水之多、悲伤之重A heavy cloud of sadness hung over him, making it hard for him to breathe.一片悲伤的阴云笼罩着他，让他难以呼吸将悲伤比作阴云，给人压抑的感觉愤怒His eyes blazed with anger, like two burning coals.他的眼睛里闪烁着愤怒的光芒，就像两块燃烧的煤炭。

把眼睛里的怒火比作燃烧的煤炭，强调愤怒的强烈程度Anger surged through him like a wildfire, consuming all his rationality.愤怒像野火一样在他心中涌起，吞噬了他所有的理智用野火来比喻愤怒，体现出愤怒的不可控制恐惧Fear gripped his heart like a vice, making his legs tremble.恐惧像一把老虎钳一样紧紧地抓住他的心，让他的双腿颤抖grip”一词生动地表现出恐惧的强烈程度，使读者能感同身受A cold shiver ran down his spine as he heard the terrifying sound.当他听到那可怕的声音时，一阵寒意顺着他的脊梁骨流下来cold shiver”和“run down his spine”形象地表现出恐惧带来的身体反应惊讶Her eyes widened in surprise, as if she couldn't believe what she was seeing.她惊讶地睁大了眼睛，仿佛不敢相信自己所看到的通过对眼睛的描写来体现惊讶。

He was stunned into silence, his mouth hanging open in astonishment.他惊讶得说不出话来，嘴巴张得大大的stunned into silence”和“mouth hanging open”很好地表现出了惊讶的状态2.人物动作描写快速动作She darted across the room like a flash of lightning, eager to see what was happening.她像一道闪电一样穿过房间，急切地想看看发生了什么用“dart”和“flash of lightning”来形容动作的迅速He dashed out of the door, not even bothering to put on his shoes.他冲出门去，甚至都没顾得上穿鞋dash”突出了动作的急促缓慢动作She moved forward slowly, as if every step was a great effort.她慢慢地向前走，仿佛每一步都很艰难体现出人物的疲惫或不情愿He lifted the box gently, as if it were a precious treasure.他轻轻地举起箱子，仿佛它是一件珍贵的宝物。

gently”表现出动作的轻柔紧张动作His hands were shaking uncontrollably as he tried to tie the knot.他的手在试图打结时不受控制地颤抖着突出人物的紧张She bit her lip nervously, her eyes darting around the room.她紧张地咬着嘴唇，眼睛在房间里四处扫视bite her lip”和“eyes darting around”都表现出紧张的情绪3.环境描写自然景观The mountains loomed in the distance, their snow-capped peaks glistening in the sunlight.群山在远处若隐若现，山顶的积雪在阳光下闪闪发光loom”一词形象地表现出山脉的雄伟和遥远The forest was a sea of green, the leaves rustling in the gentle breeze.森林是一片绿色的海洋，树叶在微风中沙沙作响将森林比作海洋，给人一种广阔的感觉天气状况The rain came down in sheets, beating against the windows like a thousand tiny drums.雨倾盆而下，像千万只小鼓一样敲打着窗户。

in sheets”形容雨势很大，“beating against”形象地表现出雨滴的冲击力The sun peeked through the clouds, casting a warm glow over the landscape.太阳从云层中探出头来，给大地洒下一片温暖的光芒peek through”赋予太阳拟人化的动作，使描写更生动4.情节发展相关转折Just when they thought all was lost, a glimmer of hope appeared on the horizon.就在他们以为一切都失去的时候，一线希望出现在了地平线上为故事的转折埋下伏笔But to their surprise, the situation took a sudden turn for the better.但令他们惊讶的是，情况突然好转了突出情节的意外变化推进With every passing minute, the tension grew higher and higher.随着时间的流逝，紧张的气氛越来越浓通过时间的推进来表现情节的发展Step by step, they were getting closer to the truth.一步一步地，他们越来越接近真相。

强调过程的渐进性5.心理描写思考His mind was racing, trying to figure out a way to solve the problem.他的大脑在飞速运转，试图想出一个解决问题的办法racing”形象地表现出思考的快速She pondered for a moment, weighing the pros and cons of each option.她思考了一会儿，权衡着每个选项的利弊ponder”体现出思考的深入决心With a determined look in his eyes, he set out to face the challenge.他眼中带着坚定的神情，出发去面对挑战通过眼神来表现决心She made up her mind to never give up, no matter how difficult the situation was.她下定决心永不放弃，无论情况多么困难直接表达决心。