2.高中应用文写作——求助信-人教版高一英语必修二.doc

应用文写作求助信假定你是李华 , 你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧给外教 Miss Evans 写封邮件,请她帮忙指导邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介;2 指导内容;3.商定时间地点注意:1.词数 100 左右;2.结束语已为你写好文思梳理该篇写作属于书信中的求助信 , 命题形式为提纲式求助信是针 对自己目前遇到的困难而写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型其结构通常为: 1 开门见山,表明求助意图(针对陌生对象要自我介绍)2 求助事由3 期盼回复并表示感谢本篇求助信的主题是请外教帮忙修改英语短剧根据题干信息及 所给要点可列出提纲第一段 : 说明写这封邮件的目的 ( 请求外教帮忙指导 , 并让对方知 晓请求的内容);第二段:详细介绍英语短剧的剧情并指出需指导的细节问题; 第三段:表达感谢,并期待早日得到回复要点 1 求助意图1. How is everything going? I'm writing to ask for yourassistance with our drama adapted from The Million Pound BankNote. /I'm writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a short play we adapted according to the English textbook.2. My classmates and I have adapted a story from our Englishtextbook for a short play recently. Could you give us some advice on how to improve it? Here are some relevant details about it.要点 2 剧情简介Written by Mark Twain, The Million Pound Bank Note is abouta poor man who unexpectedly receives a million pound bank note from two rich gentlemen.要点 3 指导内容1.However, the adaption is quite challenge. Having written theEnglish script,we don't want anything inappropriate to spoil the play,So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary revisions?2. We hope that you can give us some advice/ guidance/direction on how to make dialogues based on the textbook.3. Would you please help us polish the language?4. We would be very grateful if you could take/set aside some timeto watch our rehearsal/ performance/practice and give us some advice.5. I know before coming to China you were an instructor of a schooldrama club, so I wonder if you could teach us how to read the script clearly and gesture properly on the stage.6. Given your busy schedule I'd be very appreciative if you are willing to give some professional advice.要点 4 商定时间和地点1. If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit to your office next Tuesday to give youmore details?2. If possible, could I meet you in your office at 5 pm this Friday?3. May I make an appointment with you? How about 5 pm this Friday in the lecturehall?4. Is it good for you to meet me in the conference room at 5 pm this Friday? Or youcan set time and a place at your convenience.范文Dear Miss Evans，How is everything? I was wondering if you could guide us to revise a short play adapted from our English textbook.(求助事由)The story, The Million Pound Bank Note, is about theadventure of a poor young man who was given a million poundbank note by two rich gentlemen. He turned millionaire overnightand met dramatic changes to his life When adapting the play, wemet some difficulties. Could you kindly give us guidance on twoaspects? Firstly, we hope that you can check the use of the languagefor us. Secondly, please give us some direction on our acting andtones. Would it be possible for us to meet in our classroom at 5 pm this Friday?We are looking forward to your reply.(商定时间,表达期望)Yours sincerely,Li Hua模板素材求助信常用表达说明目的:1.I' m writing to ask you for some help/to do me favor/to give me hand. 我写信是想向你求助。

2. Could you please offer me some advice on....? 能就…给我提些建 议吗?3. Would you please give me hand with the following problems? 你 能帮我解决下列问题吗?描述问题:1. I have some difficulty in doing. .. which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help. 我在做…方面有困难,这 很困扰我所以我别无选择,只能向你求助2. Some problems trouble me a lot. First, .. What's worse,... What bothers me most is.. 有些问题让我很烦恼首先,…更糟的是最让 我烦恼的是3. I've finished... but still find it far from satisfactory Firstly. 我已经 完成了……,但我仍然觉得远远不能令人满意首先4. Unfortunately, I still feel it difficult to.. What makes things worse is that...不幸的的是,我仍然觉得很难…更糟糕的是5. Recently,...has made me terribly distressed. Besides/What's worse, ...All of these upset me because... 最近使我非常苦恼。

此 外…更的是…所有这些让我很不高兴,因为…表达期望:1. I will be grateful if you can spare time to give me a hand. /I wouldappreciate it if you could be so kind as to give/ offer me some useful/practical tips/suggestions. 如果你能抽出时间来帮助我,我将 很感激/如果你能非常友好地给我提供一些有用的/实用的建议, 我将不胜感激2. Th hanks for considering my request. Your early reply is wellappreciated. /Thanks for your attention.' 'm looking forward to your reply.多谢考虑我的要求期盼您的早日答复 /感谢您的关注 期待您的答复。