22.英语-做法建议类书面表达.ppt

做法建议类书面表达（高频）写作思路：首先阅读所给材料，或是汉语说明，或者是英文材料，找出问题所在需要建议的方面然后根据分析给出合理化建议这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时范文背诵：（一）DearAllison,ImgladtoknowthatyouplantopayavisittoChinanextmonth.Inmyopinion,payingavisittoBeijingisyourbestchoice.Ontheonehand,BeijingisthecapitalcityofChina.Ontheotherhand,Beijingisaplacewherehasmanyfamoussites.Firstly,IsuggestthatyoushouldvisittheGreatWallandtheTempleofHeavenforthefirst 3 days.Secondly,you can visit theSummerPlaceifyouareenergeticenough.Itisunnecessary for you to bring anything exceptyour camera.In addition,I suggest that youshouldtasteChinesefoodiftimepermits.IamsureyouwillhaveagoodtimeinChina.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.SincerelyYours,HuaYu 点评增分点1：范文开门见山，用“inmyopinion”提出观点，直入主题。

增分点2：给出建议,用“firstly”，“secondly”，“inaddition”作为连接词，使文章井然有序增分点3：使用了if引导的条件性状语从句、where引导的定语从句等复合句及“payavisitto”，“asfor”等高级短语，彰显作者 扎实的语言功底增分点4：“ononehand”，“ontheotherhand”使文章层层递进，浑然成篇二）HowtokeephealthyTherearemanywaystobehealthy.First,todosportsisnecessaryforus.Wecanexercisemoreandtakepartinoutdooractivitiesinfreetime.Exercisewillkeepusactiveandstrong.Second,weshouldeatmealsontime.Andweshouldeatmorehealthyfood,suchasfruitandvegetables.Its better to eat less junk food.Besides,keeping a happy mood is important.We alsoneedenoughsleepandrest.Whatsmore,wemustntdrinkwineorsmoke.Theyarebadforourhealth.Ithinkhealthisthemostimportantthingtous.Ihopethiswillbehelpfultoallofyou.点评增分点1：开篇点题，说明保持健康有很多 种方法。

增分点2：“first”,“second”,“and”,“besides”,“also”，“whatsmore”等连接词的使用，使文 章结构更加清晰明了增分点3：“takepartin”,“infreetime,“bebadfor”等短语及句型的使用丰富文章表达。