2中考书面表达专题指导：信和e.doc

中考书面表达专题指导：信和 e-mail信件是人们在日常生活和工作中进行交流的工具，也是中考书面表达中常见的考试文体近几年来，全国各省市在中考英语书面表达命题上多次出现关于"信件" 的考查，如：2006年，福州市中考卷(就所给材料写一封 Mail)、南京市中考卷( 给美国笔友写回信)、山东卷(给外籍教师写信介绍海南岛风光 )、安徽卷(给英国笔友David 写回信)等由于文化差异，英语信与中文信有很大区别一般来说，中考书面表达对英文书信的考查重点不在格式上，命题时通常会给出开头与结尾，让学生写正文内容★ 怎样写出一封合格的信件？在仔细读题后，同学们首先要把握题目要求有的题目要求根据一封信来写回信，有的是根据中英文提示写 e-mail；有的是根据表格信息写回信；个别还有写投诉信(Complaints)等然后，要选择适当的单词、词组、固定搭配以及句子结构等组织文章尽量使用课本上学过、平时用过的句式和短语，避免临场生搬硬造，导致出现错误最后，还要注意中西方文化和中英文表达的差异，避免出现中式英语★ 进阶策略1. 善于变通遇到个别要点难以表达，可以采用灵活变通的办法，化难为易如：要表达"老师既有知识又和蔼 "，很多人都 会绞尽脑汁去想"和蔼"该怎么表达，其实用The teachers are kind and knowledgeable 就足矣。

2. 小词大用汉语中有一词多义，英语里也一样像take, have, get, make, do, help 等词都可以表达汉语里很复杂的意思3.适当使用较高级词汇和复合句一篇文章如果都是简单句就会让人读起来索然无味，适当的复合句和高级词汇会给文章增添亮点如表达"难过" 等情绪时，不要总是 sad，可以有upset, frustrated 等4. 背诵佳句掌握和记忆一些不同要求的信件常用句式如：感谢信: Thank you for your …申请书: I want to join …邀请信: We are going to have a New Year Party tomorrow evening. Would you like to join us?投诉信: Last year /month / week, I bought a …but recently, I found something is wrong with it.中考真题解析（一）时间：2007-05-17　期号：185【题目】 06 年福建漳州卷：暑假即将来临，你就要告别三年的初中生活，在这三年里值得你留恋的有很多：学校的花草树木；和蔼的老师；互帮互助的同学；学习生活等等。

同时，你可能也有一些遗憾今后你有何打算？为此你将做出怎样的努力？请给远方的朋友 Allan 写一封信，谈谈你的感受要求：1. 根据所给的信息，把握要点，不逐字翻译，应适当发挥；2．不得写出相关内容的真实名称；3．词数 80 左右(不含已给词)Dear Allan,How time flies! It's three years since I came to the school. Now I'm going to say goodbye to my classmates.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes to you.Yours,Zhao Hai【解析】 这是要求写出一封信的试题由于题目要求中已经指明，这是 Zhao Hai 写给Allan 的信，从所给的中文提示来看，要求写出初中三年学习生活的感受这是该信的重点内容，美好的回忆及引以为憾的往事贯穿其中，信末"对未来的打算"成为文章的深层意思上的实质延伸。

理清题目的要求后，根据汉语与英语的不同表达习惯，接下来要进一步弄清在行文时应用什么时态、语态除应注意所用的主要时态以外还应注意时态的转换：描述"今昔"对比情况时，既要用现在时，又要用过去时；描写人物外表性格时应用现在时；描写其事迹时，应用过去时；强调结果时，应用现在完成时；某些动词(如：happen, cost, rise)只有主动语态，那就不能用被动语态因此，对于这封信在书写过程中应用的时态应是一般过去时、一般现在时、一般将来时相继出现，程度较高的考生可适当地以一至两个含有现在完成时的句子加以点缀，使整体的写作水平更上一层楼，以争取拿高分甚至满分范文】Dear Allan,How time flies! It's three years since I came to the school. Now I'm going to say goodbye to my classmates. I'll never forget my school. There are many beautiful flowers and trees. The teachers are so kind that we all love them. Though there is always too much homework, I'll miss my school life. I have enjoyed studying with my classmates. We always helped each other. I have learned a lot and made a lot of friends.I'm sorry to say that I do badly in math. I'll try my best to learn math well during the summer holidays. Can you help me? I want to go to a good college.Best wishes!Yours,Zhao Hai【模拟题一】 假设你叫 John。

今天你在网上看到了这张贴子请根据帖子内容给予回复，80 词左右注意：文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数Post: What shall I do?Posted by a worried mother on 10/11/06Anybody here? I have a 15-year-old daughter. She is lovely and clever. I love her very much. But she likes playing computer games very much. Once she gets home, she does nothing but plays computer games. No homework, no rest! When I talk to her, she says nothing to me! When I turn off the computer, she will be very angry with me! Oh, dear! What shall I do?A worried motherPost: Re: "What shall I do?"Posted by John on 10/12/06Dear Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________John【模拟题二】今年 7 月份中考结束后，你(Bruce)将迎来一个较为轻松的暑假。

你把你的计划写成书信，寄给你的好友 Tom信件内容包含以下要点：1．拜访几个老师与好友2．安排一趟 3-5 天的旅游3．与家人多交流，做些家务4．坚持每天一小时的体育锻炼要求：词数不少于 80参考范文【模拟题一】Dear Madam,Don't worry. You can ask help from your daughter's teacher. Or you can invite some of your daughter's friends to have a word with her. Try to encourage her to find. Spending too much time on computer games is bad for her health and studies. She can have fun doing other things. As her mother, you should try to learn something about computer games so that you and your daughter have something to talk about. Then, you may have the topic your daughter is interested in, and your daughter may talk a little with you. Don't lose heart. It will be all right.John【模拟题二】Dear Tom,My summer holiday is coming. I have made a plan for it.During the holiday, I want to go to visit some of my teachers and friends. In Grade Three, I was so busy that I had no time to talk with them. Teachers and friends are very important. I will talk more with my family. I will try to do some housework. My parents work very hard. I should try my best to help them. I may have a 3 or more days' trip. Fresh air and beautiful views will be good for my health. Of course, daily exercise is important too. I want to be stronger.How do you like my plan? Would you like to share your plan with me? Write to me soon.Yours,Bruce。