高考英语读后续写：八步创意模板法.pptx

教学课件高考英语读后续写高考英语读后续写八步创意模板法八步创意模板法（1）情绪：消极情绪（2）细节：进一步解释描写（3）转折：个人的努力或借助外界（4）转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰（5）失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题（6）新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）（7）结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折（8）总结：点题，呼应前文第1步：消极情绪典型表达是：典型表达是：感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）1.aflushof(1.aflushof(表情绪的名词表情绪的名词)=awaveof.=afeeling/senseof.)=awaveof.=afeeling/senseof.一阵一阵.2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/disp2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame.)ointment/guilt/shame.)3.(3.(表情绪的名词表情绪的名词)floodedoversb=sweptoversb)floodedoversb=sweptoversb 因因.颤抖颤抖tremble/shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage.)tremble/shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage.)第2步：细节进一步细节描写进一步细节描写典型是：流泪；心里想典型是：流泪；心里想流泪：流泪：1.Tearsblurredoneseyes.1.Tearsblurredoneseyes.2.Oneseyesgotmisty.2.Oneseyesgotmisty.3.Oneseyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.3.Oneseyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.泪眼模糊泪眼模糊4.beclosetotears4.beclosetotears几乎要哭了几乎要哭了5.tears(rolldownoneseyes/cheeks/face)5.tears(rolldownoneseyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下泪水落下 心里想心里想1.Aninnervoicetoldsbthat1.Aninnervoicetoldsbthat从句内心的声音告诉某人从句内心的声音告诉某人.2.thought/saidtooneself2.thought/saidtooneself第3步：转折（个人努力或借助外界）典型是：鼓起勇气或另外一方的鼓励；毫不犹豫典型是：鼓起勇气或另外一方的鼓励；毫不犹豫pluckup/take/gather/onescourage(todo.)pluckup/take/gather/onescourage(todo.)毫不犹豫：毫不犹豫：1.sbcouldhardlywaittodosth1.sbcouldhardlywaittodosth2.withoutasecondthought2.withoutasecondthought3.withouteventhinking3.withouteventhinking4.withoutdelay4.withoutdelay5.withouthesitation5.withouthesitation第4步：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰典型表达是：典型表达是：似乎：似乎：1.Itwaslikedoingsth1.Itwaslikedoingsth好像好像.2.Itseemedasif/that.2.Itseemedasif/that.好像好像.希望：希望：1.hopingthat1.hopingthat从句抱着一丝希望从句抱着一丝希望 2.see/feelaglimmerofhope2.see/feelaglimmerofhope看到一丝希望看到一丝希望3.tryinghardtodosth3.tryinghardtodosth第4步：转机事情似乎有了转机，事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰并抱有希望，感到欣慰典型表达是：典型表达是：欣慰：欣慰：1.breathedasighofrelief1.breathedasighofrelief松了一口气松了一口气 2.sighedwithrelief2.sighedwithrelief松了一口气松了一口气3.(Awaveof)relieffloodedthrough/washedoversb3.(Awaveof)relieffloodedthrough/washedoversb4.toonesrelief,.4.toonesrelief,.使人欣慰的使人欣慰的/放心的是放心的是第5步：失望但问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题但问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题AmandafeltasgrayastheskyoutsidewhenshelookedacrosstheAmandafeltasgrayastheskyoutsidewhenshelookedacrossthetableatherthree-year-oldsister.tableatherthree-year-oldsister.典型是：不幸的是；不知道做什么典型是：不幸的是；不知道做什么不幸的是：不幸的是：1.Butbadluckforsb,.1.Butbadluckforsb,.但是某人真不走运但是某人真不走运3.,butinvain3.,butinvain4.,butwithoutsuccess4.,butwithoutsuccess5.,butnouse5.,butnouse第5步：失望但问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题但问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题不知道做什么不知道做什么1.Sbdidsth,wonderingwhattodonext.1.Sbdidsth,wonderingwhattodonext.2.Sbdidsth,notknowingwhattodonext.2.Sbdidsth,notknowingwhattodonext.3.Sbdidsth,unsureofwhattodonext.3.Sbdidsth,unsureofwhattodonext.4.Sbwasatalosswhattodo.4.Sbwasatalosswhattodo.5.Sbwasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.5.Sbwasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.感到难以决定感到难以决定.第6步：新法突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法典型：某人想到典型：某人想到/明白明白.;.;有了主意有了主意1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat从句从句=Ithitsbthat=Ithitsbthat从句从句=Itstruckme=Itstruckmethatthat从句从句=Itdawnedonsbthat=Itdawnedonsbthat从句从句2.(idea,thought.)occurred/cametosb.=.came/flashedintoones2.(idea,thought.)occurred/cametosb.=.came/flashedintoonesmind=.crowdedinonesmindmind=.crowdedinonesmind3.Onesmindbegantorace3.Onesmindbegantorace第7步：皆大欢喜过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折过了一段时间过了一段时间1.notlongafterthat,.=shortlyafterwards,.=beforelong,.=Itdidnt1.notlongafterthat,.=shortlyafterwards,.=beforelong,.=Itdidnttakelongbeforetakelongbefore从句从句=Ittooksometimebefore=Ittooksometimebefore从句不久从句不久,.,.2.foraninstant/moment2.foraninstant/moment一瞬间一瞬间 第7步：皆大欢喜过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折 有了结果有了结果1.Toonessurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat1.Toonessurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat从句从句2.Butonsecondthoughts,.2.Butonsecondthoughts,.但是转而一想，但是转而一想，.3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.接下来发生的非常奇妙接下来发生的非常奇妙第8步：最后总结，点题典型是：典型是：直到直到.才意识到才意识到.1.1.倒装句：倒装句：NotuntilNotuntil时间状语时间状语didsbrealize/noticethatdidsbrealize/noticethat从句从句2.2.强调句：强调句：ItwasonlyItwasonly时间状语时间状语thatsbrealizedthatthatsbrealizedthat从句从句 还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中1.Oneswords(echoed/rangout)inonesears.1.Oneswords(echoed/rangout)inonesears.2.Oneswords(voice/song)lingered/whisperedinonesmind/head.2.Oneswords(voice/song)lingered/whisperedinonesmind/head.3.Onesheadwasstillfullof.3.Onesheadwasstillfullof.第8步：最后总结，点题经历与教训经历与教训1.Whata/an.lessonsbtaughtme(sblearnedfromsb)!1.Whata/an.lessonsbtaughtme(sblearnedfromsb)!(valuable/useful/great/painful)(valuable/useful/great/painful)2.Whata/an.experiencesbhad!2.Whata/an.experiencesbhad!(enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesti(enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable)ng/valuable)3.Downdeepinonesheart,.3.Downdeepinonesheart,.在某人的内心深处在某人的内心深处高考真题实战演练浙江卷（2018年6月）故事梗概：父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子故事梗概：父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想。