读后续写分类整理公开课.docx

读后续写分类整理一、环境描写的素材环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观那么从观察者角度描写通常在描写 时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大客观环境描写：Parti环境描写的adj要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道the blue sky（蓝天）ihc songs of birds （鸟鸣）ihc thundering clouds （电光闪'雷鸣）ihc fragile flowers （娇嫩的花）;（lhc dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚）lhc green grass（青草）（he fragrantroses （艳丽的玫瑰）;（he setting/rising sun（落日/冉冉升起的太阳）...Part 2环境描写的verb （vi&vt）要求一）.Wind （blow/click/howl/wail/roar）1 .A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curiain,…——阵风吹，吹起 j’ 弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。

2 .The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes 由al sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却 寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛3 .A cool breeze blew through the quiel park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园4 .A cold breeze wafted through my hair.（冷风吹拂过我的头发）The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift.（今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升二). Water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter) 声音：I .At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响颜色 2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.水是深蓝色的，阳光在 透明的玻嘀外表闪闪发光。

3 .A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank,离此不远,有——条小溪，在 绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀4 . It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother.似乎它在温柔低语,就一位天真少女对着她那慈祥的母亲细细私语action, sound, colour）三）.Sky （stand/ appear/turn）I .The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云2.Blue skies stood tall and far蓝蓝的天空高高耸立主观环境描写：l.Sb found sth adj/doing/done某人发现某物（状态/动作/被）2.Sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done某人看到/听到/感到/闻到某物（状态/动作/被）3.It was so adj that we find/feel 它是如此....以至于4.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed/景物使我如此陶醉/惊讶/sth held sb entirely in their power景物让我完全惊呆了5.It looked/seemed/appeared/felt like …景物看起来像…三、描写时间，动作，心理和情感•）、情感好词：1 .喜乐①The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。

② A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出 了一种理解的微笑③ A ripple of excitement ran through them. 一阵激动声穿过他们④ Luughter lingered around ihe room.笑声在房间里萦绕⑤His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐⑥A wild gaiety （快乐）took hold of her. 一种疯狂的快乐控制/她⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steadysmile.令人难忘的是她的眼瞄像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑⑧I was wild wilh joy.我欣喜假设狂⑨ I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容⑩She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容⑪Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。

⑫She shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下（眼泪⑬Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒⑭）She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福⑮ Her flushed face was shining with cxcilcfncnl.她激动得满脸通红⑯ Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦⑰ 【was floating on air.我漂浮在空中⑱ Amusement gleamed in his eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情2 .愤怒：① I was seized by anger.我充满了愤怒② He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆③ His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了④ He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火⑤ He was breathing fire and fury,他充满着怒火⑥ His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而故抖。

⑦ He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看 了 我〜眼⑧ He glared at me wilh burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我⑨ He flared up at the word.他•听到这个字就勃然大怒⑩ His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉3 .悲伤烦恼①He stood silently, tears rolling down his checks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来② I fed like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里Her hands were shaking. She was on ihe verge of tears.她的手在颉抖她快要哭了③ Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲 伤淹没在酒里④ She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了 起来，跑出 了房间。

⑤ She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣⑥ I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼泪/我的眼里充满了泪水⑦ A frown （皱眉）now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头⑧ They sat there with glum looks on their faces. 他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁⑨ The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影101 He brimmed over with sorrow when...他满是悲伤⑫，They were immersed in sorrow.他们沉浸在悲疝之中⑬ These days he was in low spirits.这些日子他情绪低落4 .害怕：①He turned to me. with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来，眼里充满 了恐惧②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地⑥延到她身上。

③She was struck witli horror when...她感到恐惧④She was choked by fear.她因恐惧而窒息⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧/恐惧淹没了他⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated （窒息）.她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡5 .感动：① Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动，我们② Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眼，表示衷心的感谢③ With (ears streaming down her face, she...泪水顺着她的脸颊流了 卜.来。