2007考研英语作文解析.doc

Section III Writing Part A 小作文部分【题目要求】51. Directions:Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address. (10 points)【推荐范文】Dear sir or madam, (To whom it may concern,)I am writing this letter for the purpose of making some suggestions for improving the service of our university library. Although our library functions effectively in providing academic materials and enriching our campus life, its service goes far from being desired. In my eyes the following measures need to be taken as soon as possible.Firstly, why not arrange an inquiry desk at the circulation hall? With the help of a professional librarian, students can go through the procedures more efficiently. In addition, students should have access to the latest issues of foreign magazines. It’s inadequate to provide merely back issues to the students at the periodical room. Lastly, you’d better maintain strict order at the reading room. I frequently found myself disturbed by certain students chatting and smoking there. I sincerely hope that you will take my advice into consideration，and I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Sincerely yours,Li Ming(157 words)译文：尊敬的先生/女士：我写此信的目的是为了提几个建议，提高我校图书馆的服务质量。

尽管我 校图书馆在提供学习资料和丰富校园生活方面发挥了有效的功能，但服务却远 不尽人意在我看来，需要尽快采取以下几个措施首先，为什么不在借阅大厅安排一个咨询台呢？如果有专业图书管理员的 指导，学生们可以更加高效地办理各种手续此外，学生们应当能够借阅最新 外文期刊在期刊阅览室中只提供过刊是不够的最后一点，您们最好严格维 持阅览室的秩序，本人就有数次在那里被聊天和吸烟的学生干扰我真诚地希望您能仔细考虑我的建议, 并且期望尽快收到您的回信李明【语言分析】从本次考试的命题来看，考研对信函格式的要求很低，专门提示不用写具 体姓名和地址，而信函格式最讲究的就是地址的写法其实，我们只要把握最 基本的开头和结束语就可以了由于收信人姓名不详，开头可以参照常用写法： Dear sir or madam, / To whom it may concern， 而结束语可以用 Sincerely yours / Yours sincerely 等等范文中构架清晰，框架语言包括开头的“I am writing this letter for the purpose of”, 建议措施段中的 “firstly”, “ in addition”和 “lastly”。

信函在项目排 序上讲究语言简洁明了，让收信人直接看到要点，因此不用考虑太复杂的词组 结尾的语言“I sincerely hope that you will take my advice into consideration，and I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.”属于黄金表达，用起来专 业自然此外，本文在另外两个语域中进行尝试，一为图书馆术语，包括 “inquiry desk”, “circulation hall”, “professional librarian”, “latest issues”, “back issues”, “periodical room”, “reading room”；第二个层面是议论文词组，包括 “for the purpose of”, “goes far from being desired”, “ In my eyes”, “take measures”, “go through the procedures”, “ have access to”, “maintain strict order”, “take into consideration”, “look forward to”。

句型表达上， “I frequently found myself disturbed by certain students chatting and smoking”一句中同时设置过去分词和现 在分词，在语法上增加了难度和特色Part B 大作文部分 【题目要求】52. Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1)describe the drawing briefly,2)explain its intended meaning, and then3)support your view with an example/examples.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)范文 1 This cartoon humorously presents a scene of a football game with the two rivals facing each other. The striker on one team is preparing to make a decisive shoot while the goal-keeper on the opposite team is posing for defence. However, under overwhelming pressure both of them are losing their confidence. The striker magnifies the goal-keeper in his mind so that chances of shooting in are slim. Likewise, the goal-keeper minimizes his own image as if he couldn’t defend the goal successfully. Apparently, the purpose of the picture is to emphasize the importance of self- confidence in our daily life. On account of the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals. The past few years have witnessed dramatic increase in the difficulty of examinations and employment. We must maintain powerful self-confidence and optimism in the face of challenges so as to survive and succeed. Suppose we are inclined to overestimate our rivals or problems and neglect our ability, we will become hesitating and doubtful of ourselves, unable to fulfill even a simple task. Therefore, it is necessary to embrace the strong faith that we are indomitable and invincible. A case in point is the world famous star hurdler, Liu Xiang. He invariably imagines positively that he can win in every hurdle race, never shrinking in front of other experienced players. That’s why he works wonders again and again.As for me, I am participating in the college admission examination for graduates with thousands of competitors. Having prepared sufficiently for one year, I have powerful self-assurance that I can cruise to my dream university. As the saying goes, our only enemy is ourselves. Only by building strong self-confidence can we demonstrate grace under pressure and turn our dreams into reality. 范文 2 As we can see from the picture，a football match is going on. On guarding the door， the left man seems to be keeping a “huge door” that is easy and inevitable for a goal， while the right person。