2021-2022学年高一英语上学期期中考好题汇编14 书面表达 提纲类（解析版）.docx

专题14 书面表达—提纲类评卷人得分一、提纲类作文1．（2020江苏启东中学高一期中）假如你是李华，你校的交换生Bob想加入中国传统文化学习小组，并想了解该学习小组的有关情况请你给他写一封电子邮件，包括以下内容：1. 学习时间和地点；2. 小组情况；3. 学习内容(京剧、皮影戏等)注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯参考词汇：皮影戏Chinese shadow play【答案】Dear Bob，I’m glad that you’re interested in traditional Chinese culture.I’m writing to tell you something about the study group for traditional Chinese culture.As scheduled，the group members have lessons in the school hall every afternoon from Monday to Thursday.Forty students have joined us，ten of whom are foreign exchange students.We learn traditional Chinese art such as Beijing Opera and Chinese shadow play under the guidance of professional teachers.The group provides opportunities to learn traditional Chinese culture，especially for exchange students.I believe you’ll like it!Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua【分析】本文属于书面表达之信件书写。

要求你给你校的交换生Bob写一封电子邮件，向他介绍中国传统文化学习小组的有关情况详解】结合题干可知，本文是写一封电子邮件，要求你给你校的交换生Bob写一封电子邮件，向他介绍中国传统文化学习小组的有关情况信件内容包括：1. 学习时间和地点；2. 小组情况；3. 学习内容(京剧、皮影戏等)写作中全文的时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第一人称和第三人称同时，要尽可能多的使用短语来表达，比如：be interested in traditional Chinese culture,from ... to ..., under the guidance of ...点睛】本文书写内容完整，结构清晰，语言精练，句式紧凑，文中用到的复杂句式，充分说明作者的语言驾驭能力具体高分句型如下：使用宾语从句：I’m glad that you’re interested in traditional Chinese culture.使用了定语从句：Forty students have joined us，ten of whom are foreign exchange students.2．（2020清远市第三中学高一期中）目前，你校有许多学生因为各种原因很少参加体育锻炼。

假定你是张华，请你就此事向你校英语报写一封信，倡导同学们积极参与体育锻炼内容包括：1. 学生们不参加体育活动的原因；2. 进行体育活动的好处注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文章开头和结尾语已给出，不计入总词数Dear schoolmates,Nowadays, most students don’t do sports for kinds of reasons.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Zhang Hua【答案】Dear schoolmates,Nowadays, most students don’t do sports for kinds of reasons. They think that it is a waste of time and we may get injured in the process.In my opinion, it is very necessary for us to take part in sports activities. First, by doing some sports, like playing football, pingpong and so on, we can relax ourselves from concentrating a long time in class. There is no doubt that when we get back to study, we can study better. Second, doing sports is good for our health, so we will be unlikely to fall ill. Third, doing sports can help us form a new hobby, like swimming, hiking and so on. In this way, our life will be more colorful.In all, we can benefit a lot from doing exercises.Yours sincerely,Zhang Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。

要求写一封信，倡导同学们积极参与体育锻炼详解】话题贴近考生生活，比较好写所给要点非常明确，所以考生根据提示，文章可以分为两大部分：首先阐述学生们不参加体育活动的原因，然后陈述进行体育活动的好处考生根据提示先列出主体句，然后再拓展细节内容，以使文章内容丰满，避免内容空洞点睛】所给范文要点明确，内容具体明确first、second、third、so等的使用使得行文连贯，条理清楚此外，适当运用了一些较高级的词汇和句式，为文章增色不少例如：There is no doubt that…；benefit from…；It is necessary for sb. to do sth.3．（2020珠海市第二中学）假设你是某中学学生李华，在你班级留学的美国学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，他写信向你求助请你用英文给他写一封回信内容如下:1. 深表同情；2. 提出建议并给出理由；(至少三条建议，如:参加学校社团活动，与朋友交流，做些户外活动等)3. 希望建议能有所帮助注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯答案】Dear Bill,I am sorry to know you are having trouble with your life and study here. However, the situation is easy to change. Now, I’d like to give you some advice.Firstly, join some school clubs, where you can make some friends. Secondly, communicate with the people who have the same interest with you. Maybe it can help you get rid of your loneliness. Thirdly, do some outdoor activities and they can make you relaxed. By doing all these, you can get used to your school life and live happily.Hope my advice can help you.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。

详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封书信：假设你是某中学学生李华，在你班级留学的美国学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，他写信向你求助请你用英文给他写一封回信内容如下:1. 深表同情；2. 提出建议并给出理由；(至少三条建议，如:参加学校社团活动，与朋友交流，做些户外活动等)3. 希望建议能有所帮助第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：having trouble with your life and study here（在这里生活学习有麻烦）；join some school clubs（参加学校俱乐部）；make some friends（交一些朋友）；have the same interest with you（和你有同样的兴趣）等第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题第4步：连句成。