2021年高考概要写作范文.docx

名师精编欢迎下载Writing 1阅读下面短文，依据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要；Yesterday Matt was sick.I picked up Archie from the sitter and Eloise from school and decided to run to Target for a few things.I had hoped to be in and out quickly.I found a line with just one person ahead of me and began organizing my items on the conveyor.After placing my items ， I looked up to see that the person ahead of me was an elderly woman. She was paying for her items with change and wanted to purchase each separately.I was frustrated with this woman and the inconvenience she had placed on me.But then I watched the young employee with this woman.I watched him help her count her change，ever so softly taking it from her shaking hands. When she asked if she had enough to buy a reusable bag，he told her she did and went two lines over to get one for her and then repackaged her items.Never once was this employee angry.He was nothing but patient and kind.As I was watching him ，I saw that Eloise was too.She was standing next to the woman， watching the employee count the change.I realized I hadn’bt een inconvenienced at all.That my daughter was instead witnessing kindness and patience and being taught this valuable lesson by acomplete stranger.When the woman was finished，the employee began ringing up my items and thanked me for my patience.I then thanked him for teaching us patience and kindness by his treatment of that elderly woman.When he was finished I pushed my cart through the store trying to find the manager.I wanted her to know of the employee ’ s kindniensceanadndpahtow much it meant to me.After tracking her down and sharing the story with her， we left Target with a cart full of consumable items，but what is more，a heart full of gratitude for such an invaluable lesson.If you are ever in the Glendale Target ，give Ishmael a smile and a nod.The world could use more people like him.【写作指导】要写好记叙文的概要，先要找到以下两个问题的答案： 〔1〕谁做了什么？ 〔2〕结果如何？ 假如是夹叙夹议文，仍要加上这个故事给人们的启示或训练意义；就该题而言，本文的概要应当包含：作者购物的时间、地点、结果以及从本次购物中得到的启示，最终用自己的语言串联起来；【参考范文】The passage tells us an experience of shopping.〔要点 1〕One day，the author with two children went to Target for shopping.〔要点 2〕While waiting in line， she found an old lady was troublesome，but the young employee treated her patiently.〔要点 3〕Seeing that，the author was touched by his kindness and patience and she thought her children would learn a lot from this experience.〔要点 4〕Writing 2阅读下面短文，依据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要；Sugars are popular in the processed food industry because they add ta，stceolour and thickness to food products. The studies have shown that sugars can provide a source of energy.The body breaks down the sugar into simple forms that can be readily used in the body.But too much sugar can contribute to health problems like obesity and tooth disease.名师精编欢迎下载Having too much sugar is not the only reason for obesity or being overweigh，t but it does addto the amount of kilojoules in food.Eating too much of any food， without doing enough exercise， will cause you to become overweight.Governments in the United States and United Kingdom are waging a war on sugar in the interests of public health.Both countries claim that the overconsumption of sugar by much of the population is harmful to people ’hesalth.On Thursday，the U．S.government issued new dietaryguidelines that strongly recommend people receive less than 10 per cent of their daily calorie intake from added sugar.On the same da，yBritish Prime Minister David Cameron said he has not ruled out the idea of a tax on sugar to encourage consumers to buy food with reduced levels of the sweet.Politicians in the U．K.are debating how a reduction in the intake of sugar could help reduce Britain ’ s rising rates of obesity.The American and British governments both refer to a study conducted in Mexico that showed a tax on sugary，carbonated drinks led to a reduction in consumption.The tax was carried out on January 1，2021 and purchases of the taxed drinks went down by 12 per cent by December of that year.Sales of mineral water increased by 4 per cent over the same period.An alternative to taxing sugared drinks is to reduce the level of sugar in them.Researchersat Queen Mary University in London say that reducing the sugar content in sugar－ sweeteneddrinks by 40 percent over five years could prevent one million cases of obesity in the U．K.Researchers say people might not even notice the changes.【写作指导】本文是一篇说明文， 叙述了人体摄入过多糖分会影响健康； 英国和美国政府都号召人们不要摄入过多糖分， 甚至考虑通过增收糖税来削减糖的食用； 读懂原材料是写好概要的关键， 在懂得原文的基础上，用完可能简洁的语言集中概括原文的主要观点及思想，但不能简洁重复原文，同时，对各要点的概括要详略得当，结构严谨，表达明确，语义精确简练，防止空泛、含混之词；【参考范文】Sugar is useful for our body， but too much sugar does harm to our healt，h which probablyleads to health problems.要〔 点 1〕As for this ，governments in the United States and United Kingdomcall on people not to take in too much sugar.〔 要点 2〕British Prime Minister even planned to put a tax on sugar.〔要点 3〕A study showed that the tax on su。